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FoxofRarity 310

Joined November 2011
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    FoxofRarity's Stories (3)

    • Octavia and the Alicorn's peace.
      An Alicorn returns back to Equestria after failing to finding inner-peace, only friendship can help.

      57,264 words · 1,502 views · 61 likes · 6 dislikes
    • Joy of hidden Love and the Wrath of Lust.
      Rarity and Applejack been in a realtionship for two years. Twilight has lust for one of them.
      398,112 words · 4,821 views · 115 likes · 45 dislikes
    • Sacrifice of the unknown Alicorn.
      The third but unknown Alicorn makes the ulitmate decision to save Equestria and his wife.
      10,176 words · 821 views · 16 likes · 4 dislikes

    Generous Rarity and Honest Applejack are both in a loving, but secret relationship for the past two years with the intent of keeping it a secret for as long as they see fit. Twilight Sparkle meanwhile is head over hoofs for one of the two, causing seeds of lust to be planted in her and once they sprout bad things will happen to good ponies both relevant and irrelevant.

    First Published
    28th Nov 2011
    Last Modified
    7th Jun 2013

    Comments ( 205 )

    #1 · Chapter 1 · 81w, 6d ago · · ·
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    You need to fix a few grammatical errors with the (')'s and stuff, but a must track!

    #2 · Chapter 1 · 81w, 6d ago · · ·
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    Great start! I see much potential in this, therefore I will track it :twilightsmile:

    #3 · Chapter 1 · 81w, 6d ago · · ·
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    I will also be tracking. seems to have a lot of potential.

    #4 · Chapter 1 · 81w, 6d ago · · ·
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    Although I am usually against the idea of Alicorns (other than the two princess) I think that there is potential in this so I will stick with it.

    #5 · Chapter 1 · 81w, 6d ago · · ·
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    uh-oh... i see a lot of potential here

    but i hope you don't deliver on applejack's and Rarities ideas of what their friends will think...

    Immortal octavia.. i'm okay with this

    #6 · Chapter 1 · 81w, 6d ago · · ·
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    Ocatvia is immortal

    Your arguments are now invalid.

    It's a rather nice story, I wish to see where this goes :duck:

    #7 · Chapter 1 · 81w, 3d ago · · ·
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    Hrm. It's a good start. I will be tracking this :yay:

    #8 · Chapter 2 · 81w, 1d ago · · ·
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    So you decided to make lyra straight....I can deal with it

    #9 · Chapter 2 · 81w, 1d ago · · ·
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    Problem... Lyra is a filly-fooler... With Bon Bon...:facehoof:

    #10 · Chapter 2 · 81w, 1d ago · · ·
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    >>43909 Thats up for her to decide. :eeyup:

    #11 · Chapter 1 · 81w, 1d ago · · ·
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    everypony here read these fics seeking a story that really pass emotion, this one truly promises, jealousy is a truly strong emotion

    #12 · Chapter 2 · 81w, 1d ago · · ·
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    i have high expectations in this romance :pinkiehappy:

    #13 · Chapter 2 · 81w, 1d ago · · ·
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    lrya...straight...i can deal with that...

    what i can't is how you constantly elude telling us who twilight has fallen for! :raritywink: or :ajsmug:? so many choices! and such riches a plenty!

    really liking this! keep it up!

    #14 · Chapter 2 · 81w, 1d ago · · ·
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    I think it's Applejack Twilight is all in for.... Don't ask why, I just do.:derpytongue2:

    #15 · Chapter 2 · 81w, 1d ago · · ·
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    >>44392 i bet that is Rarity:raritywink:

    #16 · Chapter 2 · 80w, 5d ago · · ·
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    My votes for Rarity, just for the soul fact that the only interaction that's been mentioned between Twilight and the two, is that Twilight taught Rarity how to teleport... yep... :twilightsheepish:

    I can only assume that Twilight is gonna go off the deep end in the next chapter (Curse you dark tag! I see you, looming over the love and happiness!)

    To the story:

    Pretty interesting story so far, unique little concept you've got going on here :twilightsmile: .  It does have potential, like all the others said, and I am intrigued as to how Twilight will take the bad news (Presumably not well... I sense depression and hermit mode coming on :fluttershysad: )






    #17 · Chapter 3 · 80w, 4d ago · · ·
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    :ajsleepy::raritywink::heart:

    #18 · Chapter 3 · 80w, 4d ago · · ·
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    Rainbow!!! What did you do to fluttershy?????????? Damit.:facehoof:

    #19 · Chapter 3 · 80w, 4d ago · · ·
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    Yes! I so pegged it as Rarity :pinkiehappy:

    I can see the rage that Twilight holds within herself after she sees the two together, but not her rudeness before.  Unless her lust for Rarity morphs into obsession and this obsession consumes every waking moment of her day (and possibly her dreams).  So if that is the case then I can see the rage at the annoyances, but personally it still seems a little odd to me still.  Eh, i'll get over it. :twilightsheepish:

    #20 · Chapter 3 · 80w, 2d ago · · ·
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    soooo.. those flames where real super saiyan like? or just

    symbolized anger??   :rainbowhuh:

    #21 · Chapter 3 · 80w, 2d ago · · ·
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    >>51393 No she got angry like "Feeling Pinkie Keen." Twilight in flame pony mode.

    #22 · Chapter 4 · 80w, 15h ago · · ·
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    I'm very interested in how you will play out Mac's rivalry with Bon Bon... all's fair in love and war...

    #23 · Chapter 3 · 79w, 4d ago · · ·
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    Funny, I was thinking of Star Wars music before that link came up. And now, for some fitting lyrics

    "She will be mine or SHE WILL BURN!" can you guess where that's from?

    Anyway, this rules.

    #24 · Chapter 4 · 79w, 4d ago · · ·
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    >>59431I have no idea. But Nightmare Moon and I give you our thanks.

    #25 · Chapter 4 · 79w, 4d ago · · ·
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    >>60025

    Look up Hellfire in Hunchback Notre Dame :D

    #26 · Chapter 5 · 79w, 4d ago · · ·
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    OH MY FAUST!

    shh no spoilers

    Oh, um . . . I CAN'T BELIEVE THAT THING HAPPENED WITH THAT PONY, THAT HAPPENED WITH THAT OTHER PONY THAT MAY OR NOT HAVE HAPPENED!

    Is that ok?

    #27 · Chapter 5 · 79w, 3d ago · · ·
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    Wait you can't make cupcakes without pinkamena!!!!!!:pinkiecrazy:

    #28 · Chapter 3 · 79w, 3d ago · · ·
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    lol loved the music and the mood it set! this is geting good!:rainbowlaugh:

    #29 · Chapter 5 · 79w, 3d ago · · ·
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    lol this is going to get dark isent it lol ..... i love the dark ^^ :pinkiecrazy:

    #30 · Chapter 5 · 79w, 3d ago · · ·
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    "Gold Sky the Alicorn who sees and loves Rarity as a Big Sister"..  But he's 2 hundred years old!! how can he see :raritywink: as a big sister???:rainbowhuh:

    #31 · Chapter 5 · 79w, 3d ago · · ·
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    >>60283 This has nothing to do with Cupcakes!!! :flutterrage:

    #32 · Chapter 5 · 79w, 3d ago · · ·
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    >>60890 It will be explained in "Octavia and the Alicorn's peace" Since it takes place before this Fan Fic. And I wrote that fan fic first before writing this one.

    #33 · Chapter 3 · 78w, 6d ago · · ·
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    :duck::heart::ajsmug: = :twilightangry2::twilightangry2::twilightangry2::twilightangry2::twilightangry2::twilightangry2::twilightangry2::twilightangry2::twilightangry2:

    #34 · Chapter 5 · 78w, 5d ago · · ·
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    #35 · Chapter 6 · 78w, 4d ago · · ·
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    Black Rose is scary. The powers of harmony compel you monster!

    #36 · Chapter 6 · 78w, 4d ago · · ·
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    soooo... will Rarity tell Celestia? or Twillight really tough that Rarity would just forget that the next day and tell nopony?  :facehoof:

    #37 · Chapter 6 · 78w, 4d ago · · ·
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    >>71158 Twilight Sparkle plans everything past, present, and Future.

    #38 · Chapter 5 · 78w, 4d ago · · ·
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    Why are you doing this to YAY?!? YAY doesn't deserve it!?

    great chapter! keep it up!

    #39 · Chapter 6 · 78w, 4d ago · · ·
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    damn nigga also it would be nice if u pair dash with fluttershy just saying

    #40 · Chapter 6 · 78w, 4d ago · · ·
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    why is that book legal again?

    #41 · Chapter 6 · 78w, 3d ago · · ·
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    >>71839 What book?

    #42 · Chapter 6 · 78w, 3d ago · · ·
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    >>71827 Not in this story.

    #43 · Chapter 7 · 77w, 4d ago · · ·
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    Twilight! Get that evilness out of you!

    #44 · Chapter 7 · 77w, 4d ago · · ·
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    #45 · Chapter 7 · 77w, 4d ago · · ·
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    >>84330

    Ah! A fellow trooper! How goes things on your end of the trooper spectrum?

    #46 · Chapter 7 · 77w, 2d ago · · ·
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    hey i get that she did't want to kill Twilight but when you think about it she did't really had to kiss her now did she

    #47 · Chapter 7 · 75w, 6d ago · · ·
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    Okayyyy. Things a gettin' really creepy 'round here.

    #48 · Chapter 7 · 75w, 6d ago · · ·
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    Quickly Delta! make her love you before its tooo late!

    #49 · Chapter 8 · 75w, 5d ago · · ·
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    Night mare moon let the poor soul write chapter 8. please?

    #50 · Chapter 2 · 75w, 3d ago · · ·
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    The whole 'Lyra being straight' thing is gonna be needed to get use to, but great story so far.:pinkiehappy:

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