Cobalt cant remember who he is, where he's come from or anything from his past. Can the help of a certain purple mare help him remember before a horrible prophecy comes to pass?
My First FanFic, inspired by: "The Lost Hero" by Rick Riordan.
"The skies trilogy" on this site by WinterTwister.
About 20 movies.
This Idea was originally a movie /book idea that I had, but I decided that with some adjustment it would fit in a Fimfic.
Hopefully the start of a trilogy.
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Why isn't Zecora rhyming?
Anyway, I'm making a story something like this(I just finished The Lost Hero today), except the main character knows his past until he was born to humans. He has no clue what he did before his human birth. Especially since someone that calls him "boss" tells him that bad guys from 5 different worlds(4 of my favorite franchises) are coming to kill him and anycreature that stands in their way. Wait, did I just advertise my fic?
Oops..
Since I enjoyed The Lost Hero and since this sounds interesting, I'm gonna thumb this up & fav, we'll see how it goes.
I don't know if I should feel a kindred ship towards it, or feel ripped off by it.
You see, I am also a first time writer. And my story is also about an OC alicorn that has aminsea named Cobalt with almost the exact same color scheme. Except he's dark blue instead of purple.
Anyways you should read it it's called The Fourth Alicorn.
I also would be horoned if you joined my group I don't give a buck what you do. just don't post anything inappropriate.
Hoping to hear from you soon-
Cobalt
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Wow man, coincidence, I haven't read your story at all, and this is the first im hearing about it, but you gotta admit that thats an awesome coincidence.
Hope you don't think that I ripped you off. The idea was originally a guy named orion, who woke up on an alien world. ala star wars.
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Oh man, I just realized that i may have subconsciously taken that name from you account name, because I think that I saw you comment on something I read....
Now I'm Just Confused
However, the char was always going to be an alicorn, for reason soon to be seen.
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Zecora simply wasn't rhyming because the amount of lines that i gave her would have meant that i would have spent (Rhyme) so much time making her rhyme that it would have been longer than the amount of time it would have taken to finish the story.
Sorry. If It annoyed you.
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SPOILERS
Dr who reference.
Sorry, but i had to bin it.
744811 YOUR A WHOVAN AS WELL!?!?!???
BRO HOOF!!!^-^/)(\^-^
Great minds do think alike don't they?
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They Certainly do.
Changed the title, It was bugging me.
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We all just derp, don't we?
Not at all, just noticed that & brought it up to you to see if it was intentional.
I just hope my accidental ad of my fic didn't annoy you.
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We do derp indeed.
In face, here are a few of those derps.
Yes. YES YES YES! YES YES YES YES YES!!!!!!!! YES!
THIS IS EXACTLY WHAT I'VE BEEN LOOKING FOR!
Thank you!! It's pretty epic, as well.
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Why thank you Mr teapot, thank you very much,
Second chapter should be up 2morrow night- my time so in other words, about 24 hours.
PINKIE RANT TIME: Are you thinking what I'm thinking. Cuz I was thinking that maybe we could cross over our to FICs to make an ultra-cobalt fic. Also will your caricature have lightning powers cuz mine has lightning powers, but I won't be mad if he does have lightning powers
( how does pinkie stop from losing her breath) Also I'm so glad you've decied to ship with twi cuz my cobalt is being shipped with sweetie belle ( There around 13-15 ok!) any ways have you read my story yet?
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He wasn't going to have lightening powers, just blue fire ones ( Thank you Avatar: TLOA) , but lightening power would be cool.
I think that's a cool idea, but I'd like to finish this one so that it would make more sense.
753317 yeah mines not quite done yet either.
>>Cpt_Cutter
*Awkward Silence*
I'm a she, but don't apologize about that, it's fine xD
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Whoops, sorry about that.......
Again, sorry.
>>Cpt_Cutter
However that mistake doesn't make me dislike your story anymore! I love it
Creepy and cryptic prophecies... gotta love em
'She said “I don’t blame you, don’t worry. I was an accident.”'
LOLOLLOLOLOLOLOOOLOOLLOOL
Its "It". I noticed a LOT of mistakes.. Example: "Twilight and spike" Should be "Twilight and Spike".
Love it though.
Lovely...a have a bit of a different set up for the world. To the north is a sowny and moutons land that ponies never have nor never will inhabit to the west is the mother lands where they orrigunaly came from. To the south is the shadow lands. Tartarus is located here. But most Importantly to the east are the brith places of the four orrigal Alicorns. This Is also home to zebras camels elk deer, ect and some dis contented coloines. This can be separated into five areas from east-west they are the border mountains, lunas wind sweep plain, the Andromida ocence, Celestias sun sorced dessert, and Sirius' rocky region, I will not continue to bore you with alicorn theory but if you want to here more PM(private message) me
Hey guys, Id like to say two things.
The first being That I am so grateful and humbled that you all would read my story and that you liked it, and I am truly thankful that you chose my story to read over another.
The second being that Due to personal matters that have recently arisen and other obligations I no longer have the time to write this story, and therefore it may never be finished or even updated. I would like to finish it at some point, but for the foreseeable future It is on hiatus, and for all intents and purposes, canceled.
I would like to thank you all for reading and joining Cobalt and Twilight on their adventure, and I would like to thank you one final time for reading.
Thanks, Matt.
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