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NeuStrasbourg

Joined November 2011
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Disclaimer: guys, this is a wild and bumpy ride, and if there was only one word that didn't apply here, it would be 'coherent'. I put things in there through random association, not logic. The grimdark is not meant to be taken seriously (but then again, grimdark never is, can you say 'Warhammer 40.000'). That being said, the few parts talking about (Trigger Warning) rape and racism are not supposed to be taken lightly, and if that's how it feels, feel free to ask me to take these particular story arcs down. Also trigger warning for possible body dysphoria as a mare is implied to have temporarily grown a penis at one point.

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Did they really think they lived in a magical cartoon world? Where they controllled the weather? Where they had created and maintained an advanced civilization all by themselves, despite the fact they didn't even have thumbs?

They did believe that. At least for a while.

But one by one, they are waking up to a much harsher, much more disturbing reality.

Pityful, spliced creatures, they will try to fight their way out of a nightmarish place ruled by cold and sadistic entities.

Then again, who is to say what is real and what isn't. Perhaps this is nothing but a nightmare. A very long, painful nightmare. Perhaps the truth is something different altogether. So many mysteries, so many paradoxes, so many horrors. Only one thing is sure.

Friendship is magic.

First Published
24th Nov 2011
Last Modified
29th Jun 2012

Comments ( 84 )

#1 · Chapter 1 · 125w, 6d ago · · ·

Scary. I once had a dream similar to this.

I do look forward to your next installment.

One question though, why would her throat be bleeding from screaming?

#2 · Chapter 1 · 125w, 6d ago · · ·

Nice to see you've posted this from FF.net. Await further updates

#3 · Chapter 1 · 125w, 6d ago · · ·

Cool story bro, I like it.

#4 · Chapter 1 · 125w, 5d ago · · ·

>>39079  good question. To be honest, I just believe I read that somewhere, but never checked if it's even possible from a medical point of view. Maybe I'll remove that.

#5 · Chapter 5 · 125w, 5d ago · · ·

The world is what?

#6 · Chapter 5 · 125w, 5d ago · · ·

>>39702 They were told it's name was "Equestria".

#7 · Chapter 7 · 125w, 5d ago · · ·

Dun dun dunnnnn~

Keep it up!

#8 · Chapter 7 · 125w, 5d ago · · ·

This is extremely confusing.

Ima track it anyways

#9 · Chapter 8 · 125w, 3d ago · · ·

When she said rage against the machine, I went to youtube and started playing Killing in the Name. Good times.

#10 · Chapter 11 · 125w, 2d ago · · ·

>>39729

That wasn't meant to be a question.

reads like it

sound like it

but isn't

#11 · Chapter 11 · 125w, 17h ago · · ·

>>42820 What it was meant to be is going to stay your personal secret, I presume.

#12 · Chapter 14 · 125w, 6h ago · · ·

>>44531

think about it.

:scootangel:

#13 · Chapter 14 · 125w, 6h ago · · ·

Dun dun dun~ :applejackunsure: :rainbowderp:

Loving the story and frequent updates! Keep it up!

#14 · Chapter 14 · 125w, 5h ago · · ·

Wish the story hadn't taken the brown shirt turn. Oh well; in for a penny - in for a pound. :facehoof:

Viva la resistance! :twilightangry2:

#15 · Chapter 14 · 124w, 6d ago · · ·

Wow. This is incredible. I eagerly look forward to more. Also, was that a covert Ren & Stimpy reference I spotted?

#16 · Chapter 14 · 124w, 4d ago · · ·

>>46065 Maybe. All I can say is that one of the many lessons I learned from that show was "Don't wizz- on the Electric Fence!"

#17 · Chapter 3 · 124w, 2d ago · · ·

:twilightsmile::moustache::pinkiecrazy::twilightangry2:

#18 · Chapter 4 · 124w, 2d ago · · ·

Holy tit fuck

#19 · Chapter 0 · 124w, 2d ago · · ·

:fluttershysad::fluttercry::fluttershbad::fluttershyouch:

#20 · Chapter 6 · 124w, 2d ago · · ·

pinkie pie was turned into a cupcake??? :pinkiegasp: (thats what im gettin)

#21 · Chapter 7 · 124w, 2d ago · · ·

hm if everythin's a lie i wonder whats w/ :trollestia:

#22 · Chapter 8 · 124w, 2d ago · · ·

this sound BUCKIN AWESOME :pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:

#23 · Chapter 6 · 124w, 2d ago · · ·

>>51197 I got to admit... I've never seen someone interpret it like this, but now that I think of it... :rainbowderp: OMG PINKIE WHAT HAVE I DONE...

#24 · Chapter 14 · 124w, 2d ago · · ·

Bronyvistus=pony hitler

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO RAINBOW DASH :fluttercry::fluttershysad::raritycry::raritydespair:

#25 · Chapter 17 · 124w, 2d ago · · ·

>>51323 She'll be fine... Remember, she's the best.

#26 · Chapter 17 · 124w, 2d ago · · ·

So Rainbow Dash is the pony equivalent of Jewish?  Interesting....  :rainbowhuh:

Applejack as Hitler Youth/Nazi though... as a southern girl, I can believe it (KKK), but as the element of Honesty, I would think she would see right through that bull.  :ajbemused:

But people change under drastic circumstances.

But no matter what, you did amazingly.

#27 · Chapter 17 · 124w, 1d ago · · ·

>>52022 thanks. This means a lot to me.

#28 · Chapter 19 · 122w, 3d ago · · ·

Wow, wasn't expecting to have the meme barrier broken... twice.

Still, loving the story. :twilightsmile:

#29 · Chapter 19 · 122w, 2d ago · · ·

Endless YouTube videos. Every junkie's weakness.

I guess the grimdarl has simply gone so high, we've hit an overflow error and have looped into delightfully absurd. Not complaining, mind you, just making an observation. I look forward to more!:pinkiehappy:

#30 · Chapter 19 · 119w, 5d ago · · ·

Dont, mess with fluttershy.   Nuff said.  

ALSO NYAN DASH FTW!

#31 · Chapter 21 · 118w, 4d ago · · ·

I supose that you really liked Portal?

Well, at least you managed to make use of the same elements without making it sound like a straight copy

I think that you derrailed a bit since the last few chapters and simply threw all logic straight out of the window, but still keeping a nice chain of events (that's good) and I'm curious to know what twilight is going to do

Someone should definitely make a fan art of the re-stiched Twilght

#32 · Chapter 21 · 118w, 4d ago · · ·

Had I not read Freak Show, this would have been very confusing.

Looking forward to more.

#33 · Chapter 21 · 118w, 4d ago · · ·

>>128976 I try to stay close to the 'pop culture reference'/'fan art' side and away from the 'plagiat' side though I admit sometimes it's a tight walk

#34 · Chapter 21 · 116w, 3d ago · · ·

I admit, I was struggling to avoid reading Celestia's dialogue in GLaDOS's voice this chapter. And I mean that in a good way.

I can't wait to see when Twilight sends herself. :pinkiehappy:

#35 · Chapter 21 · 114w, 54m ago · · ·

Yeah, I skipped a few chapters. I gotta be honest, this story just creeps me out. It's too weird, to unhappy for me to consider.

Good writing though, I wouldn't change anything, though I'd never read this story again. It's just too much.

#36 · Chapter 21 · 113w, 6d ago · · ·

>>222521 Thanks for sharing your thoughts, your aproval means a lot to me especially since it goes against your personal preferences

#37 · Chapter 3 · 110w, 3d ago · · ·

God this is paranoia-inducing. :pinkiecrazy:

#38 · Chapter 4 · 110w, 3d ago · · ·

Fuck this is grimdark.:pinkiesick::pinkiecrazy::facehoof:

#39 · Chapter 5 · 110w, 3d ago · · ·

I am not enjoying reading this, but I keep reading anyway. Is something wrong with me? :pinkiecrazy:

#40 · Chapter 6 · 110w, 3d ago · · ·

I just realized this is basically (in a fashion) the Matrix with ponies and a comprehensible plot. Too bad Pinkie didn't give Spike a choice between a red and a blue cupcake.

#41 · Chapter 8 · 110w, 3d ago · · ·

And Pinkie still talks to the audience...

#42 · Chapter 10 · 110w, 3d ago · · ·

Damn, it's like a good survival-horror game! And it was intended to be so, it seems!

#43 · Chapter 14 · 110w, 2d ago · · ·

I take it Rainbow Dash kicked a chair across a room in a fit of rage and realized that NOPONY could tell her what she can and cannot collect from her body and throw at others?

#44 · Chapter 10 · 110w, 2d ago · · ·

I'm pretty sure this is scarier than Silent Hill. :pinkiesick:

#45 · Chapter 21 · 109w, 3d ago · · ·

Cupcakes was nothing. Rainbow Factory was nothing. :pinkiesick::pinkiesick:

#46 · Chapter 22 · 106w, 4d ago · · ·

Hopefully this alternate universe will be better, but I'm not banking on it.

#47 · Chapter 23 · 106w, 3d ago · · ·

This is one of the most mind bendingly terrifying stories I have ever read. :pinkiecrazy: And you are awesome for writing it! :twilightblush:

And of course, finding out what these "ponies" actually are (via the companion piece Freak Show) makes it even more terrifying.

Also is Celestia some sort of central AI like GLADOS (Portal) or SHODAN (System Shock)?

Finally, will we get to see the "real world" (the world outside the lab complex)?

#48 · Chapter 23 · 106w, 3d ago · · ·

NYAH fluttershy!  

wait.. oh.. AWESOME!   YAY that is epic XD  :yay::yay::yay:

leave it to pinkie

:flutterrage: eat me!

:pinkiegasp::pinkiecrazy: ok ^_^

#49 · Chapter 23 · 106w, 2d ago · · ·

>>420374 Very glad you like it. To answer your questions: Yes and maybe :twilightsmile:

#50 · Chapter 23 · 105w, 14h ago · · ·

Because when you say "screw destiny," you've got expect things that no one could've foreseen. Including Gooeyshy. :yay:

Delightfully disturbing. I look forward to more. Oh, and can Fluttershy shapeshift now? She seems to be in pony shape only out of habit.

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