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Rated Ponystar


"You think you know me..."

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Despite her parents never agreeing with her relationship, Octavia never regretted marrying her wife, Vinyl Scratch. However, a train accident ends up making Vinyl blind and depressed. Octavia will have to show her wife that no matter what, she can still live a good life. All she needs is love.

Commissioned by Snow Villier

Edited by Roker 12

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 17 )

Nice story. It sad to see all who died, except Spoiled Rich she can rot in Tarterus.

Not bad. Few typos, though, and this was more like a collection of scenes than a full story. Good read, though.

Yet another moving story from you, both sad and yet heartwarming at the same time.

Not very well written, but good story nonetheless.

This is a beautiful story. ^-^ I love this. It's heartwarming but chilling at the same time - the huge amount of loss, coping, and all wrapped up with a... how to put it... a sweetened bittersweet ending.
Fantastic job, absolutely fantastic. I give this a Muffin Rating of eleven out of ten muffins :derpytongue2:
~SoDF

That was awesome

Good read, heartwarming but sad as well:applecry:
Also:

I knew they were trouble the moment one of them, an earth pony with a hoodie, looked at them and sneered. “Well, lookie here, boys. It’s none other than the great DJ Pon-3.” He smirked and moved towards Vinyl who was focusing on her book and ignoring him. “So the rumor that your blind really is true, huh? Can’t even see me waving in yer face.”

:ajbemused:
This NC quote instantly came to mind :raritywink:

Yeah, that's right. We're such one-dimensional bullies we're actually gonna beat up a blind kid. We kind of have no souls.

This was beautiful!~ :heart:

nicely done man, i was reading this and listening to Tropical Octav3 by Coconeru, and Animated James. Vinyl and Octavia are one my ships, along with TwiDash. I just feel they fit together so much.

It's... I know this story is trying to be heartwarming and sad but it's just so... Oscar bait y'know? Close friends dying, character going blind and hating it, characters sudden ability to fight off some teenage bullies (!?), and then you top it off with an adorable 8 year old blind girl who needs eyes and the sudden choice to give it up or take it...

It's well written, but I couldn't get into it.

HRK!
(slumps over clutching chest)

Now i need more words about maple

OMC THIS STORY HAD ME CRYING LIKE A LITTLE FILLY

Bittersweet. So very, very bittersweet.

That story made me cry from sadness and happiness yours sincerely golden shadow Fire

:fluttercry: This was heart wrenching!!!!! :raritycry:

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