F***ing beautiful.

>>926419926419

I agree.  Let us sit back and watch the fireworks.

YES!!!!!!!!!!

Edit:

You know, after reading the line where the guard raised his middle finger as a greeting to Ginger, I just had to stop reading for about 5 min.......BECAUSE I WAS LAUGHING SO HARD I COULD'NT SEE!!!!!!

Oh god, I can't wait for the day when Echo's vision becomes reality!

YES! YES! YES!

>>10302821030282

Nnnope

Instant win

Yes yes yes yes yes YES! Finally here!

>>10247261024726

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Edit: Dear lord, the formatting... it's.... it's beautiful

Wohooo!!!

>>10302821030282 Well, fail.

From the highest peaks of the Crystal Mountains, hmmm, that I have to see...

My computer froze when I clicked this and I raped my left-click. I was screaming, "CLICK IT! CLIIIIIICK!"

Finally!!!!! Mother of balls!

Yes! It's finally here!

Yesssss. Good, good, let the legend flow into you....

I love you!

HOLY JESUS FUCKING SHIT ON A CRACKER

And the wait is finally over.... MY GOD WHAT A STORY.

Good morning and hello sexy fic.

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YESSSSSSSSSSS!!

IT'S HERE. DEAR SWEET RUST IT'S HEAR! I  CRY TEARS OF JOY NOW.

AHHHHH!!! ^________^ That update made my night.

I'm going to read it right now! And I'm sorry about your father...

IT LIVES! This is going to be great

The very end would be like if "Pokemon XD: Gale of Darkness" came to the Xbox and turned into an RPG.

So much want. Please make an achievment for every chapter. I love them now.

Well my reading list just crashed and burned. This is at the top now.

Dude. I fucking squeed. I was like Twilight when she got her cutiemark, when I saw this had been published. YES!

And... Sorry bout your father, dude. ;_;

I'm in your story, fuckin' it up

Weeeeow! Just in the time it took me to read chapter one, the likes jumped from 14 to 47.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=wKMw_dA2uyQ

Theme music.

Actually, there's a method that Bushmen use to escape a fire.... they make a firebreak. They light the grass AHEAD of them in a line. By the time the fire BEHIND them has caught up, the fire AHEAD has burnt out, and they can walk (with a few singed toes) on the ashes.

Now, I wonder what you're gonna do with him...

This part of the "Chess Game of the Gods" collab or you still doing your own thing?

I enjoy the end. Quite the tip off to some older RPGs.

A new companion arrives! Welcome Zanza (Sansa from Game of thrones?)

YAYAYAYAYAYYAYAYAYAYAYYAAYAYAYAYAYAYYAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Finally, I once again get to read the brilliance that is Rust

Yay! Red Vs Blue reference.

..... I love these guys.... the new pack members are kind of abrupt, but oh well.

lol

Yer arms off!

no it isnt!

Yes it is its right there on the floor!

its just a flesh wound!!!

The sequel is here?!

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Okay. Lets do this.

Now I have a second story to look forward to after I read the Ballad...

YES!

YES!

>>10247261024726 fucking gold man, have been wating for this forever and cant wait for more!

keep up the good work

Shrek reference!!!! I officially love you, your writing style is perfect :) keep doing what you are doing!

Many lolz were had

Ah introductions, always good. And telepathy link with Daring? I can see that being something, i don't know but something will definately go wrong with that, I can already tell.

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Echo has a pack now? When did THAT happen?

... How did i not notice this until just now?

I guess i forgot to check for about a week...

"An' in the mornin'?  I'm makin' waffles."  

Now my absolute Favorite.

aaawwwww yeah! Echo is back baby. this is one hell of a great saturday. Echo in the evening, Bleach at night. fuck yeah!

Wow, this seems to be the start of an RPG.

This pretty much shot my expectations to the moon, almost literally, it blew my mind, it was that good

MY BODY IS READY.

Loving the story so far, nice to see some new characters. But will we be getting the back story of how ginger "acquired" them?

Also, below are some errors the great and powerful Nathan Traveler overlooked Just kidding Nathan, love your work to

Every zebra knew the it was a thing - knew that it

Magic had replaced what once was flesh and bone. - Magic has replaced

in the next ten minutes are receive a complimentary bobble head - minutes and recieve

Ginger seems to have paranoia and trust issues..... oh well.

Loooooove

"Zebras are cool."  "It's bigger on the inside."  Acting like a child.  I will hazard a guess that Coconut is based on the Doctor.

Oh noez. Zompony? I smell

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Are most of the perks going to be pop-culture references, or are these just a lucky few?

Complete fire resistance you say?  Wow, not even DnD Pyrokineticists get that.  Then again, most Pyrokineticists aren't magical unicorns. :D

+10 Michael J Caboose.

GENIUS!

Echo's eyes flickered to the treetops as he ran. It was still there, the skeletal bird that had haunted his journey for longer than he could remember. It had come to his attention just after he'd discovered his ability to use Starsight, though he was absolutely certain it had been watching him long before that, and ever since the bundle of bones and darkness had haunted his dreams. What was it? Where had it come from? More importantly, who was it working for?

No words, no words can discribe this,

Holy crap I just realized, this is from Frost Snap's point of view.

And also YYYEEEAAAH, I've been waiting for this.

I thought the Ballad was good, but this is just fanTASTIC.

... I really don't have time to read anything- what? Four chapters? Sequel with the same utterly insane yet loveable cast? No I really need to get back to writing- zebras? Zahara? New communication method for Echo?

Hooked again dammit. On to chapter three

I have exactly one problem with this.

"A solid sheet of flames faced her through the trees, not even a hundred yards away.  She could see it through the dense ironwood trunks, turning the forest floor into a twisted, flat smile.  One of the mighty trees toppled over in the distance, letting out a sigh and a groan, as if it were relieved to finally come to rest.  "

Iron wood type trees don't burn well. at all. the branches and such burn, but the bark acts as a heat resistant sheath. As well as the pine cones, they actually only grow after a forest fire. The heat is what 'activates' the seeds. Yah, forest fires are nothing but good for coniferous forests.

(the more you know)

Anyway, I can't wait to see what you have planned for us!

>>10305741030574 I would not mind that in the slightest.

>>10307001030700

Oh. That makes sense. I'm an idiot.

Fighting a dragon? Good times shall be had methinks.

This is amazing.

Talk about time-skip.

10+ Michael* J. Caboose made my day

Just got back from the hospital apparently i passed out when i saw your story pop up on the notifications.

The IV drip is keeping me conscious while i read this

Gonna be interesting when Echo finally tells daring the truth about himself. And zing, just got myself a new wallpaper.

Dude, the reading on my EPIC counter... It's over 9000!!

I was completely blown by the beginning titles. I didn't know you could do stuff like that. I guess it's just more proof that you are a God.

HOLY DRAGON-JUMPING JESUS WITH A POGO STICK UP HIS ASS, BATMAN!

After that Shrek reference, I now imagine Disarray voiced my Eddie Murphy

“Cindercorn,” he greeted with their name for her, extending his middle finger in salute, something that Echo had insisted on teaching them.

This. This right here made my day. If you really make Echo's vision a realitly, you shall be praised like a Greek god.

xD

I'm glad that this out! The 1st story was my first FiM Fan Fic and I'm really excited to have this to read!

wait? Caboose! Everyone best be careful, this pony's a team killer! Amazing chapter, glad to see this story out. Keep goin and stay golden^^

>>10303281030328 I can't stop laughing

I'm melting from awesomeness.

Yes, finally!

Prepare for awesomeness!

Ghostclaws? That's pretty epic.

I can see the elements of the Inheritance Series playing out in this chapter. May i say. Nice touch.

>>Diabolic Gnome Same here, I totally went all fangirl for like 5 minutes

And gratz to Rust, Legend has jumped to the front of the feature box! lets see how many week's your story pwns the lesser works on the site! Viva la Echo!

I love the references disarray makes all the time.

Also, for referencing Red vs Blue... Um... You know what? I don't know how I can possibly describe how awesome you are for that.

"I'm a juicy contradiction"

I have my 19.95 right here, where can i buy one?

i got one thing to say. 20% cooler

I had to laugh at the -3 intelligence from gingers stats

I will love this forever........

Shadow and Chance, Homeward Bound reference?

Did anyone else just hear angels singing Hallelujah ?

"Its bigger on the inside!" You know you have watched to much Doctor Who, when just the mention of that line starts the themesong going in your head.

The one-fingered salute? YES.

I really like the little things at the end.  Feels almost like a video game.  

I really like where this is going.

That picture is boss.

OMG it's here it's finally here. yesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyes. This just made my evening

sequels. now that's what i call fanservice.

ALL HAIL RUST, HE WHO GIVETH US OUR RIGHTFULLY EARNED FANFICTION.

>>926419926419 Stop using your Traveler powers to make first comments on stories, consarnit!