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Michael Hudson


Original Works. It was a good run.

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Celestia reflects on a recent letter, and ponders an age old question. When there is nothing wrong with you, how can you be in complete agony?

Written for my dear friend, Foals Errand, as a gift to her while she thought on terrible news. Fortunately, the news was proven as false.

Artist never got back to me about the use of the cover art, despite having messaged them over a month ago.

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Comments ( 22 )

So pretty. But...so sad. This story is like music. It has it's beauty, despite its meaning.

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I loved the use of sweet nothing at the end.

The line about cake halfway through ruined this for me.

nice very nice! 9/10

so sad, I want to cry but stop my self, is at work that would be bad.

7123117 At least there is the good news that the irl counterpart turned out to be a false worry.

Very nice work, Jumbled. So glad this story turned out not to be true in real-life.

So what is happening?

7123349 Nothing, luckily. This was written while we thought something TERRIBLE may be happening.

Dem feels man. Touching, profound, exceptionally well written. Have a fave, my friend. And cheers for a false alarm!

Very nice, Jumbled. All dem feels. :fluttercry:

You bastard...:fluttercry: Playing on the fact that she won't outlive them...:fluttercry:

Very well done, Jumbled...I hope that all is well. You are a wonderful and gifted writer and friend!

7122868 I won't say it ruined it, but it derailed me for more than I care to admit.

7123352 i think she will out live them....

I look at the cover of the story, and I like the art.
However, one word keeps coming to mind that won't go away.

SOURCE

Goodness..... I have an odd feeling I know just how she feels. :fluttershysad:

This was alright though a little short for my tastes and I didn't really get much emotion out of it as a result but still, decent one-shot.

So, what is Twilight going through? What keeps her tears flowing? Why can't Celestia placate her?

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