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Pathious


I'm not perfect and i never claimed to be.. Lets just have fun here.

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Sunset Shimmer was once the former Student of Celestia. Like Twilight Sparkle she was very powerful in the fields of magic. Unlike twilight Sparkle Sunset Shimmer was dishonest and cold hearted. She abandoned her studies expecting Celestia to feel pain and to feel like she had failed. Years later Sunset reappeared in Equestria to steal the Element of magic. This element would later lead to her fall. Sunset turned into something upon wearing such powerful magic. She was defeated by the magic of friendship and left with deep emotional scars. One of these scars is burned into her soul. The dark magic that consumed her in the human world was more than just a form. It was something much worse, something that will soon come to the surface to show its face again.

(Note this is a remake of the first book of my series of the Empress of flame to honor a year. In this you will receive a new ending and all scenes and chapters I decided to not release. All chapters have been changed in many ways. This one will be much longer than the original. Empress of flame was an alternate universe I made that became more popular than I expected. I hope you all enjoy year one edition, I will be packing it with more detail and it will in the end be a different story so to speak.also note its a year for the idea since the original was posted once before and failed so i remade it bla bla bla enjoy)

Chapters (12)
Comments ( 26 )

This looks really good so far. I can't wait to read more. Keep it up.

Well here we go again.

7012658 i know i said i would stop with this concept but i just couldn't but i will give you a little cool insight. you ll get the ending you deserve i waited for this time and even if i get bad ratings it willl be finished and empress will hopefully be put to rest

Year one, seriously its been that long already? Keep up the good work brother! Your good at this ^-^

That was something else. Keep it up.

Why is this story called the year one edition?

Very interesting indeed. Keep it up.

7015798 because it has been a year since it first came out. tis is the first story with all unreleased chapters and new ending

Okay. I didn't expect that. Rainbow's death was heart wrenching

That was pretty epic. I can't wait for more.

'Shudders ' ohhhhh ominous

Ugh you shouldn't have budged Luna. Her friends and twilight would have understood the danger sunset was in.

Y u make discord cry:pinkiesad2:

So sunset still has some control, good to know.

7022227 i know i did very well on that. it was so damn sad to write

Yeah okay glad to finally know what exactly happened to this world.

7029318 next chapter wil show even more to this world

7033856 very emotional right

Well that's sucks for discord.

.“go ahead leave and cause her more pain.” Empress said as she landed behind Twilight. “You did see what I showed you. She is miserable, and you’re going to leave her behind.” Empress said with a smirk. “Go ahead the choice is your stay and make me and her happy. Of leave and break her ehart again.”

:twilightangry2:
TWILIGHT WHAT DID YOU DO TO SUNSETS EHART.

but in all seriousness I love how much better your fleshing out this story than before. It's really good.

7077641 much appreciated. also little note. we are not done not even close

Hmm what will she choose?

Beautiful a, and your welcome.

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