A scientist dreams of his ultimate weapon, his envisioning of the ultimate creation, boils down to his research and planning which he has spent years meticulously working on. What will this mean for his target location? What does this mean for Equestria, his intended location and what possible dangers await the Main 6 and their friends?
This is set in an alternative time line, which starts post season 5 but prior to season 6. Events which occurred in season 5 happened in this time line, but season 6 events don't occur due to the alternative timeline. Sorry if that was a little complicated.
Chapters (6)
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Yep, I'd like to read more as well.
I agree with the other commentators, I would like to see more of this as well.
I like the parts where the (He's a doctor right, or a professor?) main character was slack jawed at seeing the speeds that Rainbow Dash could reach. I'm curious though, what will his reaction be when he interacts with ponies that have magic? Will he want to get some genetic samples from Twilight after his experience with magic? Will he continue to slip in german insults from time to time and nopony know what he means?
I truly would like to see more of this, I shall wait patiently for more, Keep up the good work.
Patience is truly a virtue. I liked Tarun's response to Pinkie's surprise party, though I'm slightly curious, will there be any info on the project he's been working on.....wait, will some pony see him head back to his universe? *devious Smile* Will the CMC some how 'accidentally' go back with him to his universe? What would Twilight do when she sees all the advanced tech in his universe?
So much good writing, I look forward to the next chapter, and as I said before, Keep up the good work.
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You will just have to wait and see.
Now that's a good way to lead into "Act 2" as it were. wait a tic, since Tarun was turned into a pony via his tech, would his tech change Big Mac into something like himself? OR would it leave him a pony?
Oh the reactions that are going to happen in the next chapter, tis very tantalizing to imagine. Keep up the good work.
Ohhhhhhhh, yes, YES!! The tension, I love it. I love the last little portion of the chapter, I swear I can feel the fear from Big Mac in that situation. I'm curious though, what will Tarun do with Twilight's DNA?
Also curious as to what will happen to Big Mac, I mean, well, I've got a few ideas as to what may happen, Experimentation, Genetic Augmentation, Cybernetic Augmentation, there's so much to choose from.
and found one typo, "Talking excited strides forward...." shouldn't it be Taking? Other than that, Keep up the good work.
7129760 fixed the typo, :)
Interesting.
:D Anger issues EVERYWHERE!
>:D You're in for a treat Big Mac.
First off: stereotypical monologue 4TheWin
Second: Why is he gonna do that, I think it'd be a waste of resources to invade a peaceful world
Third: Cover yer butt Big mac!
Until the next chapter, I will be waiting excitedly for more.