Twilight has wings now, but she has no idea how to use them for anything but basic flying. Rainbow Dash, being the top pegasus in the town, has agreed to teach her. Little does she know that this high-flying pony has an ulterior motive...
A typical TwiDash story.
Art by me, background is by Vector-Brony
Great first chapter! Keep going!
This is a very interesting chapter to read it hope you keep up a good work update more soon
Ow...Way to go Dash...
'Darmok and Jalad at Tanagra' ----> What your chapter titles make me think of.
Fucking glorious.
I anxiously await more!
im actually really enjoying this storykeep it up señor monsieur sir
yeah thats highly disturbing .... i wonder if twilight has one
I BELIVE I CAN FL–(THUNK!)...
I hope you were satisfied with your fourth copy because I am
Daww, I hope this will be continued, I hate it everytime a good story dies
8073203 Don't worry, I'm ALMOST done with the latest chapter. The reason I'm taking so long is because I'm also re-editing previous chapters (especially chapter 1), working on the concepts for the REST of the stories in this series (more detail on THAT in a future blog), and generally slacking off because I'm a lazy good-for-nothing :P
Thanks for commenting, by the way. Comments give me a +50 to my Motivation stat. OFF I GO.
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Oh, ok. Kewl.
I haven't had this much fanfic fuel for 2 weeks! Keep going!
P.S. The cliffhanger on 'RD and Rare in the spa' was interesting.
P.P.S.
best line ever. (and totally honest)
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'Dash and Twilight on the ocean'.
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Rarity, her arms wide.
Huh, late reader, again... yet I’m interested in what you have planned. Sure, sometimes it feels a little rushed, but hey, it doesn’t bother me to much. Keep going! It’s like I’m a puppet being forced to read it and enjoying it all the while. ^^
Nice D&D reference. You normally play a sorcerer? Or more back when all casters could get meta-magic?
This is quite good, any chance it's going to get anymore?
The past tense of "lie" is "lay", so they "laid". "Lied" is the past tense of telling a lie.
Wait…what happened to Pinkie Pie?
What is this I hear? Lol.
Wingbooooooner!