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SaintThunder


Amateur writer and artist. Avid TwiDash fan. Lover of Oreos.

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Twilight has wings now, but she has no idea how to use them for anything but basic flying. Rainbow Dash, being the top pegasus in the town, has agreed to teach her. Little does she know that this high-flying pony has an ulterior motive...

A typical TwiDash story.

Art by me, background is by Vector-Brony

Chapters (7)
Comments ( 22 )

Great first chapter! Keep going!:pinkiehappy:

This is a very interesting chapter to read it hope you keep up a good work update more soon :pinkiehappy:

'Darmok and Jalad at Tanagra' ----> What your chapter titles make me think of.

The sudden deceleration should kill her, but the universe had stopped caring long ago what ponies like Rainbow Dash could do.

Fucking glorious.

I anxiously await more!

im actually really enjoying this story:twilightsmile:keep it up señor monsieur sir:moustache:

yeah thats highly disturbing .... i wonder if twilight has one

I BELIVE I CAN FL–(THUNK!)...

I hope you were satisfied with your fourth copy because I am

Daww, I hope this will be continued, I hate it everytime a good story dies

8073203 Don't worry, I'm ALMOST done with the latest chapter. The reason I'm taking so long is because I'm also re-editing previous chapters (especially chapter 1), working on the concepts for the REST of the stories in this series (more detail on THAT in a future blog), and generally slacking off because I'm a lazy good-for-nothing :P

Thanks for commenting, by the way. Comments give me a +50 to my Motivation stat. OFF I GO.

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Oh, ok. Kewl.
I haven't had this much fanfic fuel for 2 weeks! Keep going!

P.S. The cliffhanger on 'RD and Rare in the spa' was interesting.

P.P.S.

“Uh—” Rainbow Dash: ruiner of moments.

best line ever. :rainbowlaugh: (and totally honest)

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'Dash and Twilight on the ocean'.

Huh, late reader, again... yet I’m interested in what you have planned. Sure, sometimes it feels a little rushed, but hey, it doesn’t bother me to much. Keep going! It’s like I’m a puppet being forced to read it and enjoying it all the while. ^^

Nice D&D reference. You normally play a sorcerer? Or more back when all casters could get meta-magic?

Twilight bounded and leaped to the grounded mare, ignoring the fatigue from casting a spell of the ninth level that was both quickened and silent.

This is quite good, any chance it's going to get anymore?

The past tense of "lie" is "lay", so they "laid". "Lied" is the past tense of telling a lie.

Applejack put a hoof to her mouth. Dash's face hardened at the mention of her pink party friend. It's only been a few weeks since she left; the sting of loss was still heavy on all of them.

Wait…what happened to Pinkie Pie? :applejackunsure:

"Hope you're not planning on burning down Mi Quesa Su Quesa," she teased as she hopped off the stool, leaving the novel on its seat.

"Rainbow Dash!" The outburst claimed the last of Twilight's stability, tipping the fragile wooden crate and its cargo to the hardwood floor.

The crate fell a mere two vertical inches from its starting point, landing square on Rainbow's withers. Twilight didn't even see her move.

"That," said Rainbow as she rose from her crouching pose, "could've been bad." Understatement of the year. But as all the cool and radical ponies knew, understatements were the coolest and most radical phrases known to ponykind.

"Glad I had Equestria's fastest pegasus here to save my flank." Twilight stretched a wing out, but Rainbow backed away, shielding the box with her wings.

"Oh no, I am not letting you torch my second-favorite Mexicoltan restaurant."

What is this I hear? Lol.

The pegasus locked her primaries behind her back, keeping her wings restrained with all her might. As unenlightened with pegasi culture as Twilight was, Rainbow was certain she would know what a "full spread" meant.

Wingbooooooner!

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