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Violyre


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She was the best pony everypony looked up to. If there could be one pony to best represent all the elements of harmony, it would be her.

It was long believed that she had no weaknesses, that there was no way to bring her down. There was no way to kill her, for she had lived so long it was only natural to assume that.

But the land falls into eternal night, for one day the sun does not arise. This time...who is to blame? The truth may lead to the unexpected...and unwanted.

Some secrets are best left hidden.

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(On Hiatus because I forgot where the story was going, and I didn't like it anyway, so I'll figure something out later)

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Comments ( 7 )

Read what you have now, it is very well written. However, you need to strive for longer chapters. 500 word chapters leave a lot of want for reading, and it can not deliver it.

Yes, short chapters are indeed a turn off for a lot of readers, myself included. However, this looks like a good story still so I will give it a chance.

:ajbemused: good....more........must feed....brains.....

740560 740414 I enjoy my short chapters. I don't like long chapters :twilightangry2: but I'm glad you like it :pinkiecrazy:

Note to all: This chapter is meant to be short, just as a bit of description. :pinkiehappy:

great now i have to figure out what is going on....:twilightangry2:

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