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After a hard day of monster butt kicking, the mane 6 try to enjoy their day off.
Unfortunately for them, Pinkie Pie has forgotten how to use gravity. Now her friends have to suffer her ludicrous claims and logic.
So much for a day off...
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Only Pinkie Pie....
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Something tells me that the scarf won't be enough, because she obviously needs to make it wet too. There is not enough scarf there for the non wet wool to be completely keep the gravity fully weighing her down.
I want more of this.... Give it to me.
6996348 Who is the woman in your avatar, and where is she from?
6996456 Who is the pony in your avatar?
6996496 My ponysona. Custom made.
6996495 Penny, the video I got the image from is "Creative Types" but she's drawn by AnimatedJames.
Haven't read it yet but i like it already.
Yee-hee-hee!
6996382 Dude, that avatar pic goes perfect with your comment.
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I'm pretty sure he would appreciate the publicity in gratitude to you using his character as your avatar. Hashtag, Please support the official release!
6996917 0.0 Are you AnimatedJames?
6997218 No, just another fan of the vid.
What an entrance... Welcome to Fimfiction, and in the near future, the feature box.
That opening tore apart my immersion, set fire to the pieces, and jumped up and down on the ashes. I know the premise of the story is that Pinkie forgot how to bend space, but still, there are only so many playful nudges the fourth wall can take before it collapses into rubble.
Still, now that the scene is set, I'll watch to see what happens next. Just... please take it a little easier on the metareference.
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You lost me at
Did anyone else notice the reference to Winnie the Pooh? Just so that I know...
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There should be a 'I don't really know if I like this or not' button. Because while I only find one fault with it (that being that you used 'where' incorrectly at the start) with this story, really. But at the same time I have no real reason to like it either.
I don't remember seeing this in my full equestria time elapse...
I could get the equestrian time police on the case for why it is here!
No need, Time Mirror. I would like to see where this goes and how pinkie relearns how to gravity.
Ok then, Gold. I guess I could let this one slip through... It doesn't change much in the future anyway.
but... is she going to float away?... I don't... this story... I feel so... unsatisfied...
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That's because it requires a torsional field of weak force to pull her away from gravity. Otherwise she'd stick in place because of electromagnetic doohicky's in her horseshoes. Then again, reality in her case is held together by strong force.
6999753 In Equestria, reality is held together by the Strong Nuclear Horse, who we normally call Celestia
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What you did there. I see it.
Wait, does Luna control the weak nuclear horse? Or is that just Trixie?
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That was good.Up thumb~.~ :D
Plot twist: Twilight-after waiting for ten minutes-bursts into Pinkie's room, and sees her floating around like an astronaut.
:”Twilight! The scarf isn't helping!!"
Pinkie, here's a small clue as to how to gravity:
upload.wikimedia.org/wikipedia/en/c/c2/Gravity_Falls_logo.png
Which means, you're supposed to fall, not float. Anyways, lame joke aside, I actually like this little story. Well done.
Good introduction-chapter!
I'm curious what will happen next!
Will the scarf safe Pinkie? Or will she become the new 'Mare in the Moon'?
I have a few suggestions:
These commas don't belong here.
Better: Use the usual quotation marks and make thoughts generally italic.
Better: Make “hi” uppercase.
Can you really call this immersion breaking when it's pinkie pie? I don't think you can, and a few parts made me chuckle
HEAD CANON RELUCTANTLY ACCEPTED
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Hm... this looks like this could go places......
Mainly: Up.
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Here via 6996371.
Even when she's not even narrating, she can break the fourth wall. (whispers) She's gooooooood.
Pinkie's not really my thing, but some cute moments here nevertheless, like the stopped clock and Twilight's angry fanfiction. Keep it up.
7004920 That joke doesn't make any sense. Go eat some clocks while making up puns... it's very time consuming.
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At least sans could make an appearance. Also I think he meant that things can only go up from here.
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It's tasty, Pinkie, but that's not how you make a root-beer float.
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Folks, Pinkie just doesn't understand the gravity of this situation...
6999354 There is. It's called Tracking.
Also: Relevant? https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=KjD4_vlPMao