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Spitfire doesn't think the Wonderbolts uniform needs to be redesigned, but Rarity's got other ideas.

Just a little idea randomly given to me to help me work myself out of some writer's block.

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Minds Eye #1 · Mar 3rd, 2016 · 1 · ·

So the Wonderbolts will be wearing socks every time they wear their uniforms.

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I am okay with this.

Iron Comet #2 · Mar 3rd, 2016 · · ·

Out of the mouths of babes...

Derpator

Derpator #3 · Mar 3rd, 2016 · · ·

Short and cute, I liked it.

MythrilMoth #4 · Mar 3rd, 2016 · 5 · 1 ·

She'd been spending more time around her recently ever since Rarity and Rainbow Dash had made their relationship official

One of my biggest pet peeves in fanfiction is inexplicable shipping out of nowhere. You could've accomplished the same thing by simply referencing "Rarity Investigates!" and it would've been fine, but awkwardly shoehorned-in left-field shipping references in a short story like this are really offputting. I mean, even the joke at the end would've worked without the random shipping.

Discordigan #5 · Mar 3rd, 2016 · · ·

Pretty awesome stuff right here!

Highlord Langslock

Highlord Langslock #6 · Mar 3rd, 2016 · 2 · ·

She was nowhere near used to practicing her craft with a pony who didn't understand the importance of fashion

You'd think she'd get all the practice she would need simply by being friends with Applejack.

mid endian #7 · Mar 4th, 2016 · 1 · ·

I get the feeling that both mares were trolling RD in the end.

MixMassBasher #8 · Nov 17th, 2018 · 1 · ·

Nice interactions between the two mares

Wonderboltfan10

Wonderboltfan10 #9 · Jun 11th, 2020 · · ·

Well well well

My Rainbow Dash

My Rainbow Dash #10 · May 19th, 2021 · · ·

I like it. There should be more added to it. Maybe the final product.

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