A G4 expansion/followup to this G3.5 commercial, in which Scootaloo is really good at knocking on Sweetie Belle's door.
...I'll get back to writing serious stuff at some point.
The premise really knocked me for a loop. I'm surprised she didn't try her hoof at being a comedienne, what with her likely talent for knock-knock jokes. Anyway, you really knocked it out of the park with this fic!
Well...that was depressing.
I have to say though, You sure knocked it out of the park with this fic.
Nice read but... But... I watched the video link... The horror... I've seen things that would make any lesser man's penis go lImp for eternity. I think it might've made me sterile... *sobs*
So this is G3...
Thank God for Laurent Faust.
Ook, that was weird. Good, but weird
And the video... I will now proceed to overwrite it with a FiM overload.
>>739320739320 XD . lol too true man to true
I just spent five minutes reading this, and I want them back.
I'm proud of myself for predicting what would happen after the sixth paragraph. :3
Anywho, this was a surprisingly creative and well written story taken from something... Not as marvelous. I applaud.
You have way, way too much time on your hands and a seriously overactive imagination. I like that, and I like this. Makes you really wonder about the implications of some cutie marks. I feel a little douchey for laughing throughout this too though...