Hello everypony! This is the sequel to My Little Twilight. I'm going to have some help with this story on some of the chapters.
Credit for the picture goes to Sparknanator.
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i like it so far
740039
You do? I honestly didn't think it was that good...
this is pretty good. Cant wait for more :)
Sorry for the wait everypony, it's just that I have final exams this week. tomorrow is my last day though.
Great start, I have some ideas for My Little
THIS IS THE........ BEST THING EVER!!!
its kool and i love it
AWESOME!!!!!!!
Needs pokémon
Wow best story EVER!!!!!
I noticed NO grammatical errors
860573 thanks!
860573>>831780>>828918>>810960>>742761
New Chapter is up everypony!
great chapter!
this so much already. can't wait for more 
Wow... am I really that good at writing?
She has 2 fathers now
927033 your not good at writing
YOUR BEAST AT WRITING
And also if you play minecraft then do you believe in herobrine
d'awww, i found this chapter adorable
this story wont be on Hiatus for too long, i just want to focus on the other fics for now
sweet loving this i just cant find any sequels to MLD and to let u know they made a comic for MLD also its on Deviantart
Can't wait for more I've read ur first MLT and now just got done with chapter 3 of this sequel all today u have me grasping for more
Love it also
((FIRST))
good chapter!
pic doesn't show up though.
car accident called it
1020766
eenope lol.
thank god i was scared for a moment
love this chapter especially since they all get to be human
hope u get more chapters in soon 
they could have invited the entire country of Equestria
and if Discord was in the human world.... I think he would look like Q including wearing the Star Trek Next Generation Uniform he wears.
Woah
d'awwwwwwwwww
I knew what was in the basement before it was said.
good good
hilarious
1196899 Your Original Character (Shooting Star) Is quite generic but is an all right idea.
Oh look at the time, I just need to go and re-write a whole story.
1213889 Well my friend i had no help in writing the past 2 chapters i have been in the hospital i told unleashedtwilight he could use my OC so what he did was up to him so i bid you a good day and NEVER post a comment on one of our stories
1214863 All ready did mate, besides, Sparknanator, You story has so much potential, both of yours do, but there are problems, and I'm talking grammatical errors, little character development, and more stuff related to the subject. I offered to help you two, and I haven't had a reply since.
Also, in case you're wondering, when I said "I have a hole story to re-write" I was referring to yours, because quite frankly, I adore it.
P.S. I am very fluent at sarcasm...So...Yeah...
Also, I am watching you for a reason.
1214894 Well my good friend i can say my story has no grammar errors i have a whole team of editors
1214948 Hmm...May be I was supposed to mention formatting errors...Anyway, I will re-write it, this is just because I adore the story. I'm so God damn lazy, I wonder if I will actually be able enough to do it.
Also...I've made a quick re-design of Shooting Star, just wondering if you would like to oversee it? I mean, it's a rough thing created with the Pony Creator by General Zoi, but I think it may work...
Also, Damien requires a last name.
1214967 Well no i do not want you to re-write my story you should ask the author before you re-write there story and i dont want you to re-writee my story but i would like to see the re-design of shooting star
1215009 All right, let me upload...Remember, rough design, I don't know how to draw ponies, but I do create covers and art. (Obvious graphic designer).
The re-write is for my own personal purposes, not to gain attention, just to add more the the story as a whole. Not going to release it publicly.
http://imgur.com/k0E1G
1215160 Ok that is good i am not trying to be a dick but i dont like the re-design of the mane & tail but otherwise it is good
1215231 I decided to change those do to the current being the Pony Creator's default settings.
1214894 Sarcasm doesn't work very well on text //dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Vinyl2.png
1368009 Well, shit.
1148387 it was Cupcakes. It has to be!
Me and UT fall into a dim light room
Pikameana- Welcome to brony hell have a cupcake *pulls out a tray of cupcakes*
Me- Well shit on me i called it
FOR THE LULZ
1st! i think
SILVER SPOON DIAMOND TIARA YOU HAVE ANGERED XV NOW XV WILL FEAST ON YOUR FLESH AND BLOOD pt.desciclopedia.org/wiki/Xionic_Madness pt.desciclopedia.org/wiki/Xionic_Madness RRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRAAAAAAAAAAAAWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWRRRRRRRRRRRR
SSSSSUUUUUUUPPPPPPPRRRRRRIIIIIISSSSSSSSSSSEEEEEEEE MOTHER FUCKERS
MOAR!
When I saw this
My heart exploded
Tears flowed down my face
For it was the miracle of a sequel.
GAH!!