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  • 5w, 4d
    Still here.

    I've generally tried to avoid visiting fimfiction recently because looking at the front page tends to make me angry about the quality of the stories there, then I complain about them, piss people off, then get accused of whining too much and expecting too much from people.

    So I just sort of stopped.

    I'm not that dead. I have a daring Do story that I'm working on which is gonna be one of those magnum opus things or something like that. So yeah, be excited or something.

    So yeah, not totally dead.

    Or maybe I should just start logging into fimfiction more and writing horrid reviews about horrid stories just to prove I'm still around.

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    What I'm saying is--right now, I really don't know what I'm doing. I suppose if I get the will to write again, I'll write again. By all means I have stories that need finishing, half of which I've never even posted.

    But yeah, being a brony is embarrassing, guys. ...And I work at a playhouse! Where we do musicals and shit! Where that shit is super accepted!

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    I am tired of putting 15k+ work into a chapter, only to post it and get four comments in a row about small, inconsistent errors and not a single shit given about the story, or so it seems.

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    Know what I hate?

    A lot of shit.

    But, you know what I hate a lot more than most things right now? Mostly because I just saw an instance of it and remembered how much I hated it?

    I really hate it when I see "Featured on X date" in the description of a story. It will almost always earn a dislike from me. At this point, I really don't give a shit that your story was featured you flaunty assbag. The featured box is for porn and autistic horsefuckery (there is a difference), and anything good that makes it up there has obviously been mistaken for something bad.

    If you're an offender of this, well, then suck it, because I don't really give a shit.


    I wonder how much longer I'll be around fimfiction with the way things are going.

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    I hate everything about the word 'featured'.

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  • ...

The speaking of rhymes. Zecora has never spoken without rhyme, but... what happens when she can't rhyme?

First Published
12th Jun 2012
Last Modified
12th Jun 2012
#1 · 128w, 2d ago · · ·

A rhyme for an orange, we must arrange


#2 · 128w, 2d ago · 1 · ·

But... what happens next? I HAVE TO KNOW!

#3 · 128w, 2d ago · · ·

Did you mean to mark this "Complete"?

#4 · 128w, 2d ago · · ·

:rainbowlaugh: Hilarious!

#5 · 128w, 2d ago · 1 · ·

Fedora rhymes with Zecora.  It's a type of hat, did you not know that?

#6 · 128w, 2d ago · · ·

This was perfect.

Bravo to your rhyming, sir. :yay:

#7 · 128w, 2d ago · · ·

Hilarious fic. Who knew Zecora's one weakness was an inability to form a coherent rhyme?

#8 · 128w, 2d ago · 2 · ·

Your own name doesn’t even rhyme with anything.

I need to find a really good dictionary ''where's Sweetie Belle?''

:rainbowlaugh: Somone! Give this filly a cutie mark!

#9 · 128w, 2d ago · 2 · ·

She shoulda used 'door hinge'...

Goodness, that was brilliant. Well done on your rhymes.

#10 · 128w, 2d ago · · ·

WHAT HAPPENS NEXT???? MOAR PLEASE!!:pinkiehappy: loved it by the wat:twilightsmile:

#11 · 128w, 2d ago · · ·

Waht a twist

Anyway, this was great to read, and I'm still laughing in the end. A few grammar errors are presnt, but not enough to set a reader off. Good job.

#13 · 128w, 2d ago · · ·

Another great story.

Congrats again, Sorren.

#14 · 128w, 2d ago · · ·

Door hinge! :rainbowlaugh:

#15 · 128w, 2d ago · · ·

Brilliant. This honestly deserves the feature box.

#16 · 128w, 2d ago · 2 · ·

Not sure what to do with "orange" or "silver" though... :twilightsmile:

Still an absolutely hilarious read!

#17 · 128w, 1d ago · · ·

One has found a orange fruit full of orange

#18 · 128w, 1d ago · · ·


They may not have Fedoras in Equestria, or, if they do, they may not be called that.

#19 · 128w, 1d ago · · ·


That seems more like only a partial rhyme to me....not sure. Just doesn't sound right. Personal opinions, though, eh?

#20 · 128w, 1d ago · · ·

Brony master sent me

#21 · 128w, 1d ago · · ·


Does it honestly matter?  Don't nit pick the small stuff

#22 · 128w, 1d ago · · ·


No, it doesn't matter. I'm glad we are in agreement.

#23 · 128w, 1d ago · · ·


Then why bring it up in the first place?

#27 · 128w, 1d ago · · 1 ·

>>738842 To solve the issue. Fedora is a half-rhyme and as far as I have seen, fedora's don't exist in the canon mlp world yet.

>>736728 Flora is just a fairly unknown word that is not normally used at the end of a sentence. And really, who the hay says flora anymore?

>>738842 And I'm not an imbicile, I know what a fedora is. I kind of own and wear one.

And alas, all arguement is over.

#28 · 128w, 1d ago · · ·


It was part of the rhyme scheme, never said anything about you being an imbicile.

#29 · 128w, 1d ago · · ·

>>738894 It was the way you asked it. (Quote) "It's a type of hat, did you not know that?"

Quote suggests you are unearthing the idea of a fedora to me for the first time with a condescending tone.

#30 · 128w, 1d ago · 1 · ·


I loved this story :pinkiehappy:

#31 · 128w, 1d ago · · ·


It was the only type of rhyme I could think of at the time.  You're digging to deep to find something that isn't there, no insult was intended.  Ever.

#32 · 128w, 1d ago · · ·

>>738918 Okay, none insult taken.

#33 · 128w, 1d ago · · ·

That was hilarious!

Fun fact: 'dreamt' is the only English word that enda in 'mt'. I think.

#34 · 128w, 1d ago · 2 · ·


I say flora. Hope this doesn't count as me being a smartflank.

#35 · 128w, 1d ago · · ·

Orange may not be shared against all whorange

#36 · 128w, 1d ago · · ·

Gorange rhymes with orange. On QI they mentioned it, it means to binge on something. Blorange is apparently a place in Wales.

Or you could just use the word Door Hinge.

There you go Apple Bloom, there's a few.

Great Story Sorren. Thanks to Bronymaster for recommending it:pinkiehappy:

#37 · 128w, 1d ago · · ·

Thanks for the fun read Sorren, consider this favorited! :twilightsmile:

#38 · 128w, 1d ago · · ·

>>739078 Yes, but all of that would be cheating, and ponies don't have a Wales

#39 · 128w, 1d ago · · ·

>>739090 Thank you for favoriting. Every favorite puts me a twitch closer to featured!

#40 · 128w, 1d ago · · ·

>>739094 Gorange is cheating? It's the only one word in the English language that rhymes with orange. But if that was added it probably wouldn't be as good a story as it is.:rainbowwild:

#41 · 128w, 1d ago · · ·


Twitchy twitch? Twitchy twitch!?! :pinkiegasp:

I wish you the best of luck, I assume this will get on the front page no problem :derpytongue2:

#42 · 128w, 1d ago · · ·

>>739208 Not if updates for stories that were popular months ago keep coming out. I'm getting pushed down the list by Anthropology and Discordant.

#43 · 128w, 1d ago · · ·


I've heard of Anthropology, but not Discordant... Luckily Bronymaster is shamelessly plugging this one-shot, and since I checked this out earlier today, the views, thumbs up, and favorites have jumped up quite a bit :pinkiehappy:

#44 · 128w, 1d ago · · ·

>>739235 I have my hooves crossed. If I don't get these butterflies out of my stomach I'm going float away with nearvous jitters.

#45 · 128w, 1d ago · · ·

One of the applebloom's is still uncapitalized.

#46 · 128w, 1d ago · · ·

>>739505 shoot, where!?

#47 · 128w, 1d ago · · ·


and an everfree forest, somewhere that I don't remember


sorry, I just got back from a college thing, and I'm really tired.

#48 · 128w, 1d ago · · ·

>>738882 Fluttershy says "flora" in "The ticket master"

#49 · 128w, 1d ago · · ·

I... I... :rainbowlaugh:

#50 · 128w, 1d ago · · ·


You could assume that she didn't think of it at the moment Applebloom told her her name didn't rhyme. She was freaking out and not thinking straight, after all.

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