Some of us know how complicated love can be, even more when your mind obsesses over someone that you know nothing about.
Jeff is a working, musician pony, a normal pony amongst the others. But some unexpected incident makes him stumble open someone who will follow his thoughts for a very long time.
For all of those who speak english natively, you might notice lots of mistakes. I am not a native english speaker, so any helps with grammar is much appreciated!
Not half bad. Other than some grammar, a few confusing sentences, and figuring out which character was talking at certain points, I give this a thumbs up.