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yes, yes, yes!
This is so effing wrong, man. It's a total clopfic, however, it's fairly amusing in some places. I have to say, chapter 5 squicked me right the eff out, and I'm still pretty uncomfortable thinking about that one. I want to see how this all works out, so against my better judgment I'll keep reading...also, I don't think this can get any worse than chapter 5. I think we hit rock bottom in the perversion pit with that one. ::shivers::
This is the worst thing ive ever read . Morally of course. In all other respects its rather interesting 
i feel like a monster for wishing for more Fluttershy rape though. Still, having Princess Celestia turn into Princess Molestia is just pure gold. Even if the erotica scenes are curiously turned down (im guessing its because this site doesnt allow true clop yet, i wonder if you or someone else will update the concept when it does?)
For the quote, is it the vampire queen Carmilla?
Also I felt disappointed with the fluttershy rape because it was by far the shortest scene from the rest. It was like *Bam* your rape and now for a smoke, while the others were more (without sounding creepy) detailed. But I still should feel sick for reading and enjoying this. 
>>1665 Nope.
The reason for a short fluttershy rape scene is because I love fluttershy, and I think her a bit too sweet to have burdened by a public rape scene.... may go back and change that though.
As for the reference....
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gD_wyzSaMdk
I realised later i hadnt rated this, so i gave it five stars because i truly believe it deserves it. Unique concept, excellent characterization, author-bravery, and fantastic writing style. the fact you can avoid almost all references to anything truly explicit and still make it a good deal more erotic than most works is impressive and to be commended.
My one single request is that we see more from the reactions of the ponies post everything. i especially want to see the sheer awkwardness that Big Mac and AJ are gonna be going through once they wake up and have to clean themselves up. Someone helping Fluttershy deal with her issues would also be sweet, and Pinkie is still traumatised. Rarity actually seemed to enjoy it, and having such a variety of viewpoints could make for some truly interesting psychological work.
Im also really looking forward to how they all treat Celestia once she has been cured, and whether Luna will try to avoid blame for fear of being banished again.
So once again i say well done, you fantastic morally bankrupt genius. i also totally understand the decision to exclude Fluttershy rape if shes your favourite. I wanna protect her just as much 
(Something sick in me is loving this whole story)
Gotta say, awesome chapter, woulda been nice to see more from the side of Celestia/Twilight during it, rather than breaking off to Trixie/Luna/Silver Shield during their performance. But other than that there is really incredibly little I can fault this on. (Also update on my birthday! I feel awesome, but also feel even more creepy for wanting to see this end... :P)
Soon you will be gone and we will know what happend next....just you wait
Don't worry yall, the cliffhanger is more of a "before the last chapter" thing. Ya know, build suspense and whatnot. next chapter IS the last chapter, and its finale will be amazing!
Some of you will be in shock!
Others in awe!
A few may even have boners!
It all awaits... next month.
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Just kidding, probably in around a few days.
Too explicit and it will get taken off the site as it is now though :/
Being borderline already.... Well you know.
Image: http://mylittlefacewhen.com/media/facethumbs/86.jpg
Excellently perverse as always. My one complaint would be that you switched weirdly into present tense (almost wrote pleasant tense there) for some of the Twilight erotic description, which broke the flow of the story some what.
Actually, my other complaint is on the cliffhanger. That makes me sad. Still awesome though. And i loved the Trixie masturbation thing XD Luna looking over shocked shes actually seeing what shes seeing.
Should i be enjoyig this as much as i do. Nope
But i'll be damned. i AM enjoying this. Love the fact no strong words are used and my perverted twisted lil mind makes out the rest. Also the trixie bit made me drop the laptop in a laughing fit. Cant wait for the next chapter
BUENO
I just gotta ask, are one of the alternate endings going to be Fluttershy scaring Molestia into repression? Thus allowing Celestia to regain control?
or...
Is Molestia going to do it with everyone in Ponyville... 
AW NAO!!! NOT SPIKE AGAIN! You've already done so much with Spike the first time you HAG!! 
Oh what's the use of getting riled up over the inevitable... I know you're going to do it...
This ended very abruptly, I agree with Papillon Rose, an epilogue would be welcome. I mean, they were all molested but AJ and Big Mac need more than an apology.
Still, looking forward to the alt endings. This was a better fic than I thought it was going to be.
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