When an April Foals Day prank goes wrong, it's up to Princess Luna and Twilight Sparkle to stop Princess Celestia from turning them and their friends into Celestia's personal toys!
That about sums up my reaction. I'm still trying to decide what rating to give...
wtf did I just read?! I don't know whether to like it or not. This has seriously de-railed my train of thought.
I loved this when I first saw it from Ponibooru comments! Now that it's here, I am ecstatic! Can't wait for the next chapter!
Omg, why am I reading this! And I felt like puking through Princess Celestia and Big Mac and Applejack episode.
I love this. Why do I love this. I shouldn't love this story, but I do.
Thank you for the downlaod button!
I love this story!
...Man...im such a creep.... BUT IM PROUD!
Pink Rape! yes, yes, yes!
Im such a creep...
Watever! On to the next chapter!
I guess celestia "tasted the rainbow".
Heh, get it?
This is so effing wrong, man. It's a total clopfic, however, it's fairly amusing in some places. I have to say, chapter 5 squicked me right the eff out, and I'm still pretty uncomfortable thinking about that one. I want to see how this all works out, so against my better judgment I'll keep reading...also, I don't think this can get any worse than chapter 5. I think we hit rock bottom in the perversion pit with that one. ::shivers::
>>712712 Yeah...I feel unclean after that. I feel LIKE I WILL BE SOILED FOREVER
♫♥I look forward to reading what happens next in your story♥♪
WHY AM I STILL READING THIS?!?!?!
My god, this is worse than a train wreck and a Greek tradgity combined. It's like I want to look away but I can't, well at least this can't get as creepy as "cupcakes" but I might end up wrong.
Would you prefer it if I used explicit words? ;D
Oh dear lord, why I cannot stop reading this shit?
It seems like every rape is more intense than the last...I hope Twilight is last.
I'm actually very impressed with your abstinence of explicit wording, and yet able to still bring out the intensity of the erotica you're writing.
The subject matter is so wrong, but I can't stop reading. Keep going!
THIS. STORY. IS. AWESOOOOOOOOME!
Is it creepy, if not at the least mildly that I can't wait for the next chapter? Also, can't see the paragraph you have italicized on this format it seems, might just be the way i have it set though. Good job on this one.
WTF! I Don't Even....
lol trixy vs molestia...who will win
I kinda wanted to read more of that "Flutter Shy Rape" scen... but whatever...
Damn just making Twilight submit to Molestia. I bet everypony's gonna have to watch too! OMG
I wanna get AJ and Big Mac's reactions too. Can't wait
I hate myself for loving this
What about Applejack? GODDAMNIT WHAT HAPPENED TO APPLEJACK
I don't know what I'm reading, but I cannot look away...I cannot look away...
This makes me want to cry. Molestia disturbs me. I want more.
This is the worst thing ive ever read . Morally of course. In all other respects its rather interesting
i feel like a monster for wishing for more Fluttershy rape though. Still, having Princess Celestia turn into Princess Molestia is just pure gold. Even if the erotica scenes are curiously turned down (im guessing its because this site doesnt allow true clop yet, i wonder if you or someone else will update the concept when it does?)
That was... my reaction.
The lack of true adult erotica is my own personal preferance. If I really really wanted to, I could write it with all the explicit little details... but that is something I chose to leave behind.
What is this I don't even...
For the quote, is it the vampire queen Carmilla?
Also I felt disappointed with the fluttershy rape because it was by far the shortest scene from the rest. It was like *Bam* your rape and now for a smoke, while the others were more (without sounding creepy) detailed. But I still should feel sick for reading and enjoying this.
I'm hoping the next chapter will have more details about Fluttershy's rape.
Unfortunately it looks like no chance of CMC rape, but I have high hopes for another rape threesome with Molestia/Trixie/Twilight.
The reason for a short fluttershy rape scene is because I love fluttershy, and I think her a bit too sweet to have burdened by a public rape scene.... may go back and change that though.
As for the reference....
So very wrong.
Please do continue.
The lack of explicit words, while maintaining the intensity of the scene is commendable.
I realised later i hadnt rated this, so i gave it five stars because i truly believe it deserves it. Unique concept, excellent characterization, author-bravery, and fantastic writing style. the fact you can avoid almost all references to anything truly explicit and still make it a good deal more erotic than most works is impressive and to be commended.
My one single request is that we see more from the reactions of the ponies post everything. i especially want to see the sheer awkwardness that Big Mac and AJ are gonna be going through once they wake up and have to clean themselves up. Someone helping Fluttershy deal with her issues would also be sweet, and Pinkie is still traumatised. Rarity actually seemed to enjoy it, and having such a variety of viewpoints could make for some truly interesting psychological work.
Im also really looking forward to how they all treat Celestia once she has been cured, and whether Luna will try to avoid blame for fear of being banished again.
So once again i say well done, you fantastic morally bankrupt genius. i also totally understand the decision to exclude Fluttershy rape if shes your favourite. I wanna protect her just as much
>>16651665 I have several endings in mind, all too juicy to let go alone. SO, I am going to make alternate ending chapters, just to tickle my, and all of yours' fancies ;D
Oh Jesus, don't let Molestia do it with Spike and The CMC's. PLEASE LEAVE THEM THE &@%$ ALONE!
If there are alt endings, I would love to see Trixe perform an EPIC FAIL and somehow end up with a weird and creative punishment.
What a sexying ending....
Why am I still reading this?!
I can't stop....
Yes,that was funny!
Is it just me,or do these icons fit the story?
... I really don't want to see how this ends.
But... I'm probably going to, anyway.
Onto the next chapter!
Great and Powerful slumber... Okay, story. You're amazing and sleep shall be put on hold until you are finished.
vs (Something sick in me is loving this whole story)
:*bangs head against wall*
STOP READING THIS:flutterrage
But I can't.
Lets make it clear, I'm reading this FOR THE PLOT...
I still hate myself...
How'd it take me so long to find this? This is golden, hahaha.
What.. have I done!?
This aroused me. Derp.
Gotta say, awesome chapter, woulda been nice to see more from the side of Celestia/Twilight during it, rather than breaking off to Trixie/Luna/Silver Shield during their performance. But other than that there is really incredibly little I can fault this on. (Also update on my birthday! I feel awesome, but also feel even more creepy for wanting to see this end... :P)
So cliffhangers we meet again Soon you will be gone and we will know what happend next....just you wait
at the Trixie part.
Stop making all these cliffhangers!I can't take cliffhangers anymore!
Great story. I do wish that this place allowed for a bit more detail in such stories though :)
HAAAAAAAA! Cliffangher! Why you tease! I can't get this anymore!!
Celestia tasted the dark side
I wish i was celestia
This by far one of the sickest fanfic I ever read, and I've read cupcakes, so why is it that I can't stop reading it!
Molestia: Do you like my cliffhanger
Awesome, I can't wait for the ALT endings!
Don't worry yall, the cliffhanger is more of a "before the last chapter" thing. Ya know, build suspense and whatnot. next chapter IS the last chapter, and its finale will be amazing!
Some of you will be in shock!
Others in awe!
A few may even have boners!
It all awaits... next month.
Just kidding, probably in around a few days.
Too explicit and it will get taken off the site as it is now though :/
Being borderline already.... Well you know.
Don't you mean " WINGBONER"
*head slams into the wall*
Its so wrong...but I can't look away....
Excellently perverse as always. My one complaint would be that you switched weirdly into present tense (almost wrote pleasant tense there) for some of the Twilight erotic description, which broke the flow of the story some what.
Actually, my other complaint is on the cliffhanger. That makes me sad. Still awesome though. And i loved the Trixie masturbation thing XD Luna looking over shocked shes actually seeing what shes seeing.
I have a new great fear in my life, replacing serial murderers, It, and the Ring:
It's funny because "Plot" has another meaning.
Should i be enjoyig this as much as i do. Nope
But i'll be damned. i AM enjoying this. Love the fact no strong words are used and my perverted twisted lil mind makes out the rest. Also the trixie bit made me drop the laptop in a laughing fit. Cant wait for the next chapter
Finish it, man. Finish it so I can put it behind me and move on with my life. >_<
...I thought it was supposed to be "worse" than Cupcakes (Which, sucked hard, btw.) But, alas, i LOVE it!!
...Is that bad news? Oh well..
I can't believe StreakTheFox is reading these comments...
If your reading this than you should know that I feel "dirty"!
My favorite characters are getting molested by they're deity!
And... and HURRY UP WITH THE NEXT CHAPTER!
I HAVE TO READ MORE!
I love reading every comment I get
Seriously. The fact that people are actually READING and acknowledging my work is just... mind blowing to me.
I love you all
as for the dirtiness...
LOL aqua team reference.
WTF, bro? Really.
I'm sorry, Imma just stop right here. I don't even want to know where this is going.
Not badly written, though. Rapist Celestia just doesn't work for me.
hey streak. sup. SUP. i'll read this if you write some kind of stupid gender swap thing. really. that is my fetish. (but ponibooru knows that already)
what... how the... why am i here?
that's actually a good idea.
i hate myself for wanting more of this
That was epic. I can't wait for the alternate endings and spoof scenes. I bet they'll be a doozy!
I read this... i liked it.... oh god i must be a terrible person...
I liked it. Princess Molestia tackled in a non-comedy fashion is novel and freakishly enjoyable!
i enjoyed this and now i shall jump off this cliff i am standing infront of
As much as I've been clamoring for this descent into perversion to be over, we kinda need an epilogue. Some serious shit went down in this fic, man! Half these ponies are gonna need therapy.
I'm actually asking for more. Oh shiiiiiii I've been tainted! No!
I just gotta ask, are one of the alternate endings going to be Fluttershy scaring Molestia into repression? Thus allowing Celestia to regain control?
Is Molestia going to do it with everyone in Ponyville... AW NAO!!! NOT SPIKE AGAIN! You've already done so much with Spike the first time you HAG!!
Oh what's the use of getting riled up over the inevitable... I know you're going to do it...
well, there you have an alternate ending...
a really disturbing one
I think this is prime material for a two-parter episode. Yep.
I will love you forever if you make a sequel where AJ finds out she got knocked up by Big Mac.
This ended very abruptly, I agree with Papillon Rose, an epilogue would be welcome. I mean, they were all molested but AJ and Big Mac need more than an apology.
Still, looking forward to the alt endings. This was a better fic than I thought it was going to be.
well...a certainly interesting take on Celestia...
Thats a weird alternate ending....
years of therapy - pricessless.
Can't wait for alt endings (hope one will be an epic trixie fail, and one will be twilight be traumatized and turn into twilight molestia )