thunderpelt 1 0 107

Joined May 2012
6 followers

thunderpelt's Stories (1)

The Hive
first mlp fan-fic coming from a diffrent story i've written
11,513 words · 634 views · 2 likes · 2 dislikes

thunderpelt's Blog (0)

2 2

634

The Hive by thunderpelt

Source

Tragedy Sad Dark Comedy Adventure

Rebuild the hive......... this single command will change the life of one poor party mare and her friends.

What will twi do when not only is her life but the souls of her friends is threatened by the strange command

i mean what can a single command on a computer do? and when pain from another's past rises will pinkie be able keep herself and her friends from a decent into insanity

An I'll Fated Stroll · 24th Jun 2012

3,271

Pinkie Pie the Spastic Baki of Sweet Street · 5th Jul 2012

2,158

The Fastest Baki in Equestria · 26th Sep 2012

2,372

Prized Baki to Princess Celestia · 4th Oct 2012

3,712

Save Chapter Order
Incomplete · Teen · Gore
11,513 words total

First Published
23rd Jun 2012

Last Modified
4th Oct 2012

Stats

Comments ( 7 )

Post Comment
Refresh

thunderpelt

#1 · Chapter 1 · 51w, 4d ago ·

first fanfic but not first time writing enjoy and critics are welcome

The Commander

#2 · Chapter 1 · 51w, 3d ago ·

>>795375795375

Before I read anything,there's something I need to say:

Capitalization.

It turns off a lot of people to the story if the Chapter titles are not capitalized, it shows a lack of care (not saying that you don't) but thats what people assume and they are already imagining what horrors lay beyond this title. (Again, im not saying its bad, but first appearances are SUPER important.)

Also the same applies to the description.

thunderpelt