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Wise Cracker


Just some guy, riding out his time.

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The time streams are in disarray after Twilight and Starlight's escapades. Continuity is threatened, and futures that shouldn't be are at risk of bleeding over into the consensus reality.

Princess Luna's on cleanup duty, leaving her with the task of travelling to all the likely outcomes and making sure they stay within their own continuities, so no villains turn out to have not been defeated in the present. A usual night of travelling outside of her body and fixing things.

Unlike usual, she gets some company in the form of a draconequus. One who apparently has some things he needs to get off his chest, regarding how he's been treated and all the other villains have.

Seems Luna's not the only one with a few chips on her shoulder...

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Comments ( 9 )

Oooh, no wonder there are no views, this was literally
Just published!
I love it, and will explore the rest of your works!

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Thanks! This is one of those brainfart fics, though. A lot depends on cover art, which got skimped out on for this. It'll be interesting to see the response on the long-term though.

“Oh, I do, I just don’t particularly like it. You never know what sort of freaks you might run into in the time stream,” said pot of kettle. “Last time I went in there I got hit in the head by a telephone booth. Good thing there was a doctor nearby.”

+1 like

A fascinating look at the dynamic between two mind-blowingly powerful ex-villains, and the myriad ways history screwed them over. (And the line about the financial motivations for Twilight's ascension was amazing.) I'm sorry I didn't read this earlier, but I'm very glad that I finally did.

And returned the children Starlight when she founded her little village.

It looks like a word is missing somewhere in this sentence.

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Three or so, as it turned out. If I recall correctly, I was doubting between having Starlight kidnap the foals, or have it be implied she absconded with them from a medical ward. I've settled on the latter, and it has been fixed as such.

Thanks for pointing that one out :twilightsmile:

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You're welcome. And good story overall.

That was a good story.

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