Flutters has fallen in love with a spider.
Okay goodbye people have a nice day the world has ended, get the weapons ready! BANG! Oh look Bob just killed himself
I'm not kidding she has.
Flutters and Petunia have just kissed what is going to happen now?
Stuff I guess...
I have a very weird and disturbed mind.
So don't judge me when you read this
Written in perspective of Petunia (she is the spider)
Sequel to this amazingly awesome one shot: https://www.fimfiction.net/story/288366/arachnophillia
For the competion: Ocalhohns big 250k contest
I AM A BRITISH CIVILIAN SO I AM NOT ENTERING FOR THE MONEY! I AM JUST ENTERING TO WIN! THAT IS ALL
Chapters (1)
Is the spider poisonous?
Sweet. Why not have Fluttershy and a sapient spider become a couple? :)
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No this is a special kind of tarantula so no, Flutters is going to stay alive
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FLUTTUNIA
IDK BUT I TOTALLY SHIP THEM!
you got my hair complely right! and my eyes! but I'm white, and a little shorter
Well, there's another Fluttunia story. And even though this one was a lot less dark and a lot less gory, it was actually more disturbing. You shocked me right away with the choice of Petunia's POV, and then you had a lot of fun playing with that throughout. Really, that's a master stroke I don't think I could have thought of if I was doing a sequel. You capture really well the strangeness inside the spider's mind, and you even leave a bit of the ambiguity of the original in there. The only thing I can complain about in this masterful bit of mind-fuckery is that your paragraph formatting is a bit wonky ... inconsistent at times, and at other times downright strange. But still, I'm greatly surprised at how good this is!
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