Sequel:The New Stallion's Adventure in Canterlot
When Sweetie Belle finds out her sister, Rarity is dating the new mysterious stallion in town? She gets curious. When she finds out Spike has no problem with this new stallion? She thinks it's odd. When she finds out Rarity has fallen madly in love with this stallion and Spike still has no problems with it? She gets worried.
Now Sweetie Belle is determined to find out who this stallion is. And does Spike really have no problem with this new stallion? Unfortunately, problems arise when she can't get help from her friends who are busy out of town. So instead she is forced to get help from...... Button Mash.
Cover Art by: Jade Crossroads
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Chapters (8)
cool story so far! but now i want to pound blue blood's face in more than usual. but because he's royalty im not allowed to!
6933696 There's always the "write a Blueblood-bashing fic" option.
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Prediction: Spike is the stallion with some sort of polymorph, and sweetie gets button mash.
6933895 That's quite a hefty prediction. Let's see if your theory hold up in the next chapter.
wait what is wrong with Button he is best pony also how and when did he get his cutie mark
6934734 I'm not saying anything is wrong with him. It's there going some things between Sweetie Belle and Button Mash, and she would rather not deal with it right now. Her main objective right now find out who her sisters dating, not get stuck with a possible date herself.
Also I'm don't how he got his cutie mark in this timeline. I might not even type that down. That's not really a point of the story. I chose for his cutie mark because that seemed to be what everypony proffered for him to have.
6934904 I wasn't implying really anything I guess I was more asking myself what was between the two guess I'll find out
6933800 yeah i know, but my boss would kill me if she saw me writing one.
6933824 Oh Blueblood has his reasons for passing such a stupid law. Don't worry you get good laugh out on why, in a later chapter.
I have to admit that this is a good setup so far and I want to read some more. Personally I think I figured everything out rather easily, but I won't know up it's written.
Anyways keep going, but ease up on the asterisk separators. Normally they're used to indicate a major change of scenery, but you use them a lot! Other than that it's good, so please keep going. :)
6952162 Sorry those are more of my breaks to indicate the next scene or place.
6952354 I understand, and looking back I suppose my complaint is that you used it when she read the note, which isn't really a scene change and could have been done with italics, but I'm just nitpicking.
Also can we expect the next chapter soon?
6953141 Oh, okay I'll go fix that. Anyway the next is currently done, I finished it yesterday, I'm just waiting for my proofreader to get to it. So sometime Saturday maybe.
Oh button button button. . . You sure know how to pick em.
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You are hilarious.
6958982 thank you
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with those drinks.
a little ice might help......
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secrets often find a way out of the shadows..........
6995593 Yes in time 'all' secrets must be revealed, but not quite yet. It wouldn't be a good mystery if I told 'everything' upfront.
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Whelp, my interest has been piqued. I want to see where you take this, so favored! Now if only we knew why Spike was alright with Spark dating Rarity so easily... Wait, that pumpkin cider... OF COURSE! DRUGGED! Go Sweetie Bell! Go help Spike recover from foul poisons and enact righteous vengeance upon the diabolical machinations of Spark!
That or something else is up. Tune in next update folks, the truth is out there!
6998244 Well another interesting theory.
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I can put forth about a hundred good theories, and several thousand bad ones! Like Spark actually being CensoredA whom has Spike Redacted so as not to interfere with his attempts to woo Rarity, whom is actually CensoredB and on a mission to thwart Sweetie Bell's attempts to save Equestria!
Pretty sure your headache isn't as severe as the one I've been having for the past few days.
Still like this story though.
Hmm looks interesting enough. Has QUITE A FEW likes compared to the amount of views..... I guess I'll try it......
I like it! Buuuutt it's kind of obvious what's going on here.... No offense... Also, just one thing:
Did Sweetie Belle dye her hair? Because, last I remember it, it was PINK and light purple.
7097370 All I can say is subtlety is the master of mystery.
7097370 Maybe...... But in all seriousness I've always saw mane like that. Her's has always been the most confusing mane color in the CMC.
I've just read the first chapter but I think I already know what's happening.
SPIKE HAS FOUND A SPELL THAT LETS HIM TURN INTO A PONY SO HE CAN DATE RARITY!!!
7097750 Oh really
Are you sure you know what happening?
Gasp! Could it be that Rarity actually IS UNDER A SPELL!? Could Spark be not Spike?! WILL BAT-SHARK-REPELLANT SAVE THE DAY?! Tune in next update, same Button Time, same Button Channel!
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I love it. I've always wanted an announcer for the 'next time' moments.
It's OK Button, she was just shocked by the size
:/
7143357 I should realized there would be someone with a size joke.
7143367 That's actually really I could come up with what else can I say Button in my opinion is best cannon pony I could do the whole (SWEETIE HIT HIM AGAIN AND SEE WHAT HAPPENS) thing but that aint me, could say she should not let his mom find out cause shed do worse than a slap, but the D joke seemed the best way to go.
7143467 Well I knew there would be a few jokes about that scene. But I had forgotten about the size joke. Really I got no problem with the joke. I did get a laugh out of it.
7143483 then that's all that counts
Hmm.... Hmm... My friend cover art, hmm.... Yeah give your story a read soonest
You did a really good job on this one!! (Not that you didn't on the others, though). Can't wait for the next chapter!!
7180626 Thank you
I'm glad your enjoying my story.
Amazing! I absolutely love it! And I can't wait for the next chapter!
7186638 Thanks. I'm glad you're enjoying it.
So I think I may have figured out how this is going to play out, at least regarding who wrote the letter. If so then I have to say it's quite creative, at least in the sense of throwing it into this story, since it's been done before in other things. Still I think it's coming together quite nicely. :)
7353510 Well cool. I'm glad you like it so far. Though the best stuff is yet to come. Chapter 5(The one yet to be posted) will have quite a few add ins to the mystery as well.
Really the main reason this story is on hiatus is because my mind has been on over drive for a separate story. Once I get done with that story I'll get back to this story.