“Well, this is a terrible wedding if I’ve ever seen one,” Octavia groused as she pressed her entire body’s weight against the straining door of their suite in Canterlot Castle. The high-pitched buzzing of insectoid wings reverberated through the thick wood of the door as it shuddered under the force of repeated blows, setting her ears on edge as she strained to hold the door shut. “Vinyl, I don’t suppose you have any bright ideas?”
“I assume a make-out session is out of the question, so not really,” Vinyl said from behind Octavia. She squarely faced the single window that illuminated the spacious room, its elegant glass reduced to shattered pieces on the floor. A dark blur of movement caught Vinyl’s attention as it forced its way through the unshielded opening; with an effort of will she cast a lance of pure force at the intruding monstrosity. The blue blaze of magic leapt from her horn to strike the changeling squarely in its chest, sending it tumbling away hurt but still alive. “How are you holding up?”
“I’m starting to get tired. I don’t know how many of those things are out there, but they aren’t giving up and going away like we hoped.”
“Damn. Maybe trying to hide in here was a bad idea,” Vinyl said.
“It was a better idea than staying outside,” Octavia replied with a shudder. “We saw what happened to those poor ponies who tried to run for it.”
“Yeah, at least in here we’ve got a bucking”—she directed another strike at a changeling crawling through the open window—“chance to protect ourselves,” Vinyl agreed.
“How freaking many are there?” Vinyl demanded as she desperately struck away another group of three changelings trying to get past her. Sweat matted her face and trickled down her neck as she panted, trying to catch her breath. From her vantage point near the window, she could see swarms of the black, insect-winged things covering the sky so completely as to obscure the sun. Their high-pitched buzzing felt like it was echoing in her very bones and through the immense stone structure of the castle itself. “Ya know what, forget I even asked. There’s about a million and a half too many.”
“Very accurate assessment, my dear Vinyl” Octavia replied as she pushed against the door, now starting to bow inwards under pressure from the other side. “Truly, you are a mathematical prodigy.”
“There’s a number in ‘DJ Pon-3’. Of course I’m good at math.”
Vinyl stared into a fanged mouth snapping furiously at her tender neck as she held it away with her braced forelegs. She could see the ravenous hunger that burned in its arctic blue eyes and hear it in the mad whirring of its malformed wings as it pushed ever more desperately towards her. It stretched out its neck to try and reach its prey as she struggled to hold it off of her. Her breath came short now, knocked out of her by the changeling’s surprise attack that had flung her to the ground and by the fear of death above her.
Her muscles began to buckle, her strength beginning to fail. A sadistic smile flashed across its serrated mouth as it surged forward, fangs and teeth ready to strike. Vinyl lashed out with her last weapon, smashing her face directly into the changeling’s own. With a howl of pain and surprise the changeling flitted back, leaving her time to lurch unsteadily to her hooves. Snarling, the changeling flew again at Vinyl with murder in its eyes; she stood her ground, lowering her head at the last instant. With a thunk the changeling impaled itself on Vinyl’s horn, cracking its black carapace and oozing green blood as it fell lifeless to the floor. For finality, Vinyl reared back and brought her front hooves crashing down on the insectoid monster’s skull, crushing it and leaving her splattered with green slime. Behind her, the sound of splintering wood could be heard as Octavia still struggled to hold the door closed. "We are so bucked," Vinyl said with a shake of her head. Movement caught her attention from the direction of the room’s window. “Uh, Octy, we got a problem over here,” Vinyl called out as she backed away from the dozen changelings swarming through it. She reached inside herself, into the source of her will that powered her magic, and found it empty. “Ah, ponyfeathers . . .”
“Yes, well, things aren’t looking too good on this front either,” Octavia answered as she tried to keep pressing the door shut while evading the grasping limbs that reached through the numerous holes in the wooden door. The pressure being exerted from the other side was beginning to become more than she could counteract; her hooves were slipping on the floor and the sweat pouring off her body made it hard to keep herself pressed solidly against the door. She screwed her eyes shut in determination, gritting her teeth as she willed herself to stay strong. Suddenly, a changeling limb managed to pierce through the beleaguered wood; Octavia failed to move in time and it twined around her neck, pulling her roughly up against the door itself and cutting off her oxygen. “Vinyl, help!” she gasped weakly.
“Hold on, Octy!” Vinyl shouted as she turned her back on the changelings advancing from the window to strike at the treacherous appendage suffocating Octavia with hoof and horn. Hissing in pain, the limb retracted and Octavia stumbled away from the door to lean on Vinyl for support.
Now undefended, the door burst open to allow a dozen or more changelings to crowd through into the room. Helpless, the two mares backed slowly away from the horde until their backs pressed up against the unyielding stone wall. Trapped between the changelings that surrounded them in a half-circle and the impassable masonry behind them, Vinyl turned to Octavia and gently reached out a hoof to bring her eyes to meet her own. “I love you so much,” she said quietly, in complete indifference to the crowd of salivating, hungry monsters closing in on them. She moved to stand between the changelings and Octavia, placing her back to the abominations that wanted to devour them. With simple finality she brought her lips to meet Octavia’s, melding one final time into her softness. Octavia returned her passionate kiss, whimpering deep in her throat as her eyes peered behind Vinyl. “Don’t look, sweetie,” Vinyl gently commanded. Obedient, Octavia closed her eyes.
Vinyl tensed as she felt the first brush against her coat as one of the changelings drew close to her. She fought the urge to flinch away as she imagined the monstrous things preparing to strike, fangs glinting cruelly in the light.
Thank you, Octy. For everything.
Vinyl closed her own eyes, content to let her last memory be of the one she loved. She once again leaned forward to join her lips and Octavia’s. As they met she became conscious of an electric tingle coursing through her body from the tips of her ears to the base of her tail.
What the—
She was suffused by warmth and joy and every happy emotion she had ever felt; her eyes stung with tears of ecstasy as all her love and devotion for the mare she embraced welled up within her. Blearily, she could see that Octavia was in the same state, clinging to her tightly with forehooves wrapped around her neck.
A surge of light swept past them, heedless of stone or anything else. Its purple hue surged through and around them, filling the whole room with intolerable brightness. They clung to each other in confusion, instinctively seeking a familiar touch. Above the subliminal roaring of the passing wave of light they could hear the frantic keening of the changelings calling out in their own pain and fear. They stood with ears flattened and eyes clenched shut, weathering the interminable passing of the magical force sweeping past them. Finally, it was over and they could open their eyes to take in the same room they had stood in before, now conspicuously devoid of changelings. “Whoa. Did we do that?” Vinyl asked in an awestruck voice.
This chapter may or may not be expanded. I think I ended it on a pretty good one-liner, but we'll see what you guys have to say.
Also, now I should only need one more chapter to end this thing, And it will be pure .
Love Supernova. Just yes.
Brilliant writing and I can't wait for the finale!
AHAHAHAHAHAHA
Did we do that?
Erkle would be proud...
lol
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I feel like you could have made a tearjerker if you'd combined the last two chapters, cut off everything after "Thank you, Octy. For everything." and made it a one-shot.
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You have no idea how tempted I was to do that and leave the story's ending there . . .
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I would have found out where you lived, hunted you down, and murdered you
1610075
At least you would have had cupcake ingredients
Ummm why did d the changelings never change?
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I probably would have helped you.
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Cupcakes? How cliche can you get
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...muffins are so much tastier!
Is vinyl scratch...urkel?
1610121 ...especially with that hint of Griffon.
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Only the females, and even then only the breast meat. Meat from a male griffin, or any other part of the Griffin, tastes like wet cardboard mixed with gravel. Male breast meat tastes like dryyyyyy chicken, but FEMALE Griffin breast meat....Delicious.
the action feels a little bit stilted, and I would love to see this chapter expanded.
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Well, we only saw this one group of changelings, who had their prey cornered. In the wedding episode(s) most of the changelings buzzing around Canterlot never took on another guise; only the ones fighting the Mane 6 did so and that was probably to try and have an advantage in the brawl.
Same powers as Shining and Cadence???
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Exactly Scoots...
Epic win for bringing out a dues ex machina.
Random fitting quote:
"Did that just happen?"
"Yup..."
While I'll be sad to see this end, I'm excited to see how you do it.
I get this feeling that the Shining/Cadence Love Shield of Kickassery just happened. NOT "The Magic of Love".
And now, we WAIT.
"Did we just do that?"
PRICELESS!!!!!!!!!
great chapter...but...you end this story and I molotov your house
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Actually, it wasn't Octavia and Vinyl pulling off the same stunt as Cadence and Shining Armor. Shining and Princess Cadence did their whole "power of love" routine, banishing the changelings. The wave of that particular magic came washing through Vinyl, Octavia and their room just in time to save them and since they were already being lovey-dovey they felt some of the magic's love-based effects.
Tl;dr, no deus ex machina for you.
Ha, that was like scenes from alien and zombie flicks. Nice.
1611178 My bad for misinterpreting the words there. I took it as the surge emanated from them.
sooo vinyl killed one of them?
It seems that djs are BUG MURDERERS.
Since vinyl did kill one. But I thought that the changelings ate love, not ponies. You described them as if they were going to eat vinyl and octavia. Dues ex machina?.... lol.
Yeah, changelings feed on emotions right? I mean, assuming that this is based on the show. Unless of course you just heard Cadence explain how changelings feed, then you got one look at the huge-ass fangs they all have and thought; fricken carnivores man, and decided to give them an actual purpose other than to look threatening.
Am I right?
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Yeah, there is that.
But I also thought about how some random pony would view the changelings after they just kind of showed up. If you didn't know they feed on emotions then you would assume the fangs were all business.
Plus, who's to say that the process of feeding may not actually be fatal? We never saw a changeling actually feed, to my knowledge. For all we know it could involve draining the life force or something like that.
Chrysalis fed off Shining Armor. He's still alive (and lived to throw his wife off a balcony. How romantic).
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Dat G-Gundam ending.
1609738 think they had a life death experience that ended in a flash of love.......i think they would now have sex. it would definitely not be out of place, what ever you do. its gonna have to somehow go from this moment to something.......not a writer myself, but i would be boned on writing anything other then sex and making it work. for all i know it might be an easy thing to change the setting, but then again i don't know. goodluck? that is if you need it. your the writer, you probably know what your doing.
NEED.... ANOTHER CHAPTER !!!!!!!!!
I still want them to open another club together, but in Ponyville, and the end to be a smashed three way with Derpy.
Oh, wait. Wrong story.
SO AWESOME
Great stuff darling, can't wait to see the end
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>implying they haven't had sex already
First off... Hello everyone!
Secondly... Since the story is about to end(aparently) then I guess I'll save how I feel about the story overall when it does.
Thirdly... ..............................
Finally... THE FINAL CHAPTER APROACHES(I think)! BASED ON THE FINAL EPISODE OF SEASON 2(Maybe)! THERE"S MUSIC AND FIREWORKS IN IT SO IT'S GONNA BE EPIC(Hopefully)!.....................................
I've been loving this story to pieces, but I'm sorry to say that to me reading these last two chapters honestly felt like reading a rough draft. They just seemed way too forced, rushed, and jumpy. The number of scene cuts and thus the overall lack of flow made it feel like I read a mere two paragraphs, a feat that none of the other chapters managed to do... Surpass? Easily. But these didn't feel like chapters at all, not even when placed end-to-end...
1613189 ohhh dat nostalgia
Awesome. The emotions were handled really well, especially just before the 'super-love-wave-pulse'. The ending line was perfect!
1609738 lets go for a clop scene. for old times sake
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Why must this video be so fitting I can't stop laughing xD
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Because TFS is always awesome.
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Agreed.
He did skip "that" part like 3 times.
Think about how amazing if would be
1711178 Its true! You've got me watching their whole abridged series
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Your welcome. I've downloaded all their creations (DBZ abridged and Hellsing Ultimate abridged at least) onto my laptop.