Luna samples a culinary delight, discovered in her absence. Issues are addressed and secrets are unearthed because of this marvellous beverage.
Its name is... coffee?
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Disasters are exciting. Bring them on!
Celestia should really learn to hide the coffee from her sister. Luna on a caffeine high is frightening indeed.
Somepony needs a decaf...
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EGADS. MINE SUSTENANCE HATH DISAPPEARED FROM MY SECRET ROOM OF BEVERAGES. WHAT IS THIS TREASON. TIAAAAAAAA.
introducing Team CFVY(pronounced "coffee")
where is goes "celestia heard inane gigling"i suspect u mean "insane giggling"
6907528 FINALLY another RWBY( pronounced like ruby) fan high five brah!!!!!!!
Great story, bro.
Luna is best when hypercaffeinated. I approve wholeheartedly.
This story made me smile. Good work!
6907544 Nah,
inane means "lacking sense or meaning; silly."
so tis a bit more lighthearted than the heavyhanded "insane" :P
6907812 Agreed! It's rather funny what goes through Her Majesty's head when on a big caffeine rush.
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Ignore that terrible spelling and grammar! My sister doesn't get that you're not supposed to comment with OTHER PEOPLE'S PROFILES! I did NOT write that comment
I was an usher at my sister's wedding. Prior to the ceremony, I was blitzed on energy drinks, pacing back and forth in the church annex muttering T.S. Eliot.
They wash their feet in soda water
Et, O ces voix d’enfants, chantant dans la coupole!
Not even coffee can make the night last forever.
oh, she crashed.... She crashed really hard
[[[[Celestia turned to see her sister splayed on the floor, hind hooves twitching at odd angles in the air.
"crash..."]]]]
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I see a flashback here - if this is what happens to Luna, what happened to Twilight when she first had coffee? What is twilight doing while Luna is running about like this?
Oh, the possibilities!
Isn't that one Cadance's job?
Good story!
Better don't combine Luna and coffee.
But what will happen if she finds Red Bull?
Note:
A few times you are using the term "armour". Better replace it with "armor".
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Us proud tea drinkers prefer to have more "u"s in our nouns, also, aside from america it is the preferred spelling in most varieties of English.
*adjusts monocle*
Yep the majority of the viewerbase is american but... Stubbornly British.
andthespellcheckersaysitsrightbecauseicantspellforpotatoes
Cycles of the moon - Menstrual Cycles etc. Cadence is the fun part, Luna is the messy bit you have to deal with afterwards.
But that's just my headcanon
Although I don't believe equines have menstruation cycles, they have a "heat" instead.
Yeah! Luna on caffeine! That was a hilarious story to read!
6918203 java crashes all the time doesn't it?
Oh this is just a hardy-har-har story.
Liked it. Liked it a lot.
6918854 I love that comic. Luna's hilarious.
So... Twilight makes a pot (or ten) of coffee for Luna. Seems to me she may have been winding up the Princess of the Night just to enjoy the chaos.
I can just see Discord leaning against an exterior balcony looking in, a happy grin on his face. "I've never been prouder of that pretty purple pony than I am right now..."
Came here from the Dr. Wolf reading. The chapter title exquisitely encompasses this story. Hilarious insanity from start to finish. Thank you for it.
I must say, I was growing tired of 'Luna discovers coffee' fics. But that opening line is just brilliance, and the rest was pretty entertaining. Thumbs up, sah.
Oh Gods yes. Armour every time. 'Armor' feels like it's made of tinfoil. And colors are never as colourful as colours.
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There are others??
Poo.
Its so hard to be completely original these days. You plagiarize somebody without even knowing about it.
Darn.
Ah well, next one will just have to be far more... unique.
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It should be "exciting", though.
7015493 Oops. Fixed!
7014812 Hey, see it positive: 1st, you did a good approach here, and 2nd: look at me, I accdently look like I stole from "Siege of the Crystal Empire" (official Comic), since the story I work on now has slight parallels (uuh, Chryssi and Sombra working together^^), but I had not even known there was a comic like this until somepony pushed my muzzle right onto it
Btw, I like your Celestia. Calm and experienced. Thousands of years of "You have had this before, Tia. You have not bucked them before and you are not going to do it today"
7036216 Celestia now remembers why she sent Luna to the moon.
7038904 Haha, might be possible. She should rather be happy that Equestria does (seemingly) not know energy drinks... there is a nice short comic about Pinkie discovering them for herself
Needs more Luna on Coffee. Yes, it's an entire fic of it. It needs more.
Anyone read the IDW MY LITTLE PONY: MICRO-SERIES #4? I think that the cover art should inspire more Luna on Coffee stories.
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Wow lol that was some crazy story right here and apparently Luna cannot hold her caffeine of coffee and she basically went insane in the castle and Princess Celestia had to stop her before she keeps on making trouble and she has a lot of patience when it comes to hyperactive Luna but good thing the caffeine wear it off poor Luna she's going to have a huge headache when she wakes up this was a pretty good one keep up the good work
luna better probably visit the royal bathroom facility because coffee is a laxative as well.
I hope you don't mind, but I did a reading of your story which can be found below. I hope you enjoy.
https://youtu.be/xh3Yx7u2lxA pony and wolf did a reading too