Eliza is a Twenty-Three year old woman who's had a hard life, struggling with family and welfare, and a heavy-burdened heart. Not to be without mention of the daunting feeling that follows her, something lurks through every shadow, seeking to invade her thoughts, her presence. She has felt a entity who waits to pounce...but has never done so, until now.
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6917817 Thanks so much for the comment and Like! I will work on the errors and I will combine the two of them!
Ok this is really good! I love Discord this is a fun read
6918990 Hi! I'm so glad you like it's so far! Your story just has to be 1000 words long not each chapter. So if you just add more chapters and submit them until you get 1000 words then your good!
6918998 I know! Discord is awesome! He isn't one of the stars of the story but I'm sure he'll be around a lot but you know him he will almost always only pop up to cause trouble!
Ya did good Tracelander, ya did good.
6919367 Thank you!
Concerning Description; Grammatical corrections.
Eliza is a Twenty-Three year old woman who's had a hard life, struggling with family and welfare, and a heavy-burdened heart. Not to be without mention of the daunting feeling that follows her, something lurks through every shadow, seeking to invade her thoughts, her presence. She has felt a entity who waits to pounce...but has never done so, until now.
Your short description is fine, short and to the point. I didn't see the need to proofread that.
Also, this is simply a suggestion, but you could rename your stories title: "Equestria: The Land of Acceptance" The capitalization is important.
Also, here's some cover-art.
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6920903 Thank you so much! For the corrections and the Cover art! And about the title capitalization I'm surprised I didn't do that because I'm normally good at that thank you for seeing that