Fluttershy is a young girl with a love for anime and manga, comes from a family of celebrities. Her mother, Rarity, is a fashion designer and former film actress. Her father, Fancy Pants, is the President of an advertising company. Her cousin Sweetie Belle, is an actress in a sitcom. And her older sister, Rainbow Dash, is the lead vocalist and guitarist of a popular rock band. Despite her families constant encouragement, she detests going into show business, following a traumatizing childhood event where she botched a scene in a wedding commercial.
In Contrast, Sunset Shimmer a famous actress in both commercial and film, who co-stared with Fluttershy that 10 years ago, and developed feelings for her. However, Sunset thinks Fluttershy was boy, being that her hair was short back then, and she was wearing a suit and tie during the shoot.
One day, faith reunites the two of them after the Wedding Company ops to film a "10 years Later" version of their commercial. How will this tale of awkward romance proceed?
This is pretty good I haven't read the manga so it didn't confuse me but now you really have me intrested in love stage
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Thanks. That means a lot to me. And you should. Its a good story. They even made a 10 episode anime of it.
6936588 I'm even watching it as we speak ! Lol this is a really good story and my first yaoi anime to I can't wait to see how you write the rest
how long have you been watching anime? Sry I love finding new friends who have the same inttrest in anime and such I've been watching since I was 14 now 19 If u want u can pm me I'm kind of bored and I'm also trying to write a sunlight fanfic Ughh it's so hard 
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I've been in love with anime since I was 4. My first anime show was a western anime-influenced show called Code Lyoko. When I wen to middle school, I was introduced to Dragon Ball Z, the Mai Otome and My Hime series, and Bleach. I am currently into Black Butler, Soul Eater, Duararar, Cross Ange, and Love Stage.
So, basically anime has bee with me for a long time.
6936588 that's cool I loved bleach I tried dragon ball but I never really got into it idky either have u seen fairy tail and one piece ? These are the main series I'm watching right now
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No. But I've heard of them.
6936588 omg I just finished love stage it was amazing I wish there was something similiar and lol
I totally just pictured Rainbow dash , Fluttershy , and sunset , applejack Rarity , Twilight, and Fancypants playimg the main roles this is going to be good can't wait for the next chapter
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Thank you. My friend Plushy helped me out with that part. She's know in FimFiction as PinkieLunaShy. I asked her for help, and me she pitched me the ideal characters for each role. If you have a chance, you check out some of her work too. She's a real good friend of mine.
6947326 ok sure oh mind checking out crossing worlds for me? It's the latest story I'm working on right now
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Sure.
6948280 awesome thanks
6948280 oh just curious when are you updating? I really want to know what happens now after I finished love stage
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Sorry. I'm already writing the next chapter. I should have it posted around 5 or 6. If not tomorrow at 10.
6956545 ok cool can't wait
Nice update a few errors but I enjoyed it
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I know. I had to rush through it to make the dead line.
6959605 ah it's fine
oh did u happen to look at some of my stories?
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Oh I've been thinking about writing a fanfiction from this anime sekaiichi hatsukoi its really good have you seen it?
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Yeah. I left you a comment on crossing worlds.
6963864 ok cool thanks oh and what do u think about this idea?
6963864 lol I just relized I already replied sry about that. And thanks for the comment
so do you think writting a fic from that anime I mentioned would be a good idea? I was thinking of using sunset and twilight as the main couple
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Sure. Go for it. I think it'll be great.
Just make sure you try and make it original and also credit the original.
6966246 okay
Hmmmmm Well i think it was revealed too soon to me. But I'll read to see where this goes tho.
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Oh don't worry. I haven't begun to reveal the "Good Stuff".
I love the story so far!!! Especially since it's one of my favorite pairings and it includes anime. Please write more !
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Thank you. And I will.
Oh geeze, i feel like there going to be a moment where Sunset finds out gets furious about it, and Fluttershy begs for forgiveness and offers anything even to be her slave.
Then Sunset gets a image fo Fluttershy serving her hand and foot, smirks till the images turns to Fluttersy in a French maid outfit and says.
"Honorable Mistress, how may i make you happy today?" She says bending over with a cute wink ."
cue Sunset slamming her face on the wall several times.
Dat Spongebob reference!
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THANK YOU!
I was hoping some one would notice.
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Of course! I need some good laughs today anyway after dealing with BS on Facebook today.
6936275 What manga?
6936588 What manga?
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Love Stage!!
It's a yaoi manga and an anime which my story is based on. You should search it.
Its REALLY GOOD.
This made my day! Thanks for another great chapter :) Keep it up
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No problem. There's another chapter on the way in case you're wondering.
Well it seems that Sunset Shimmer has lost her shit.
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I'm intrigued....
Well Shimmer's lost her marbles. Well sh*t.
OMG! That ending!
Please, update soon!
I feel bad for Flutteryshy she doesn't deserve this mistreatment from sunset
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Eh, wait till the next chapter.
Should that not be Sunset?
*raving rabbit screaming*
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You know, the funny thing about writing is that you proof read and double check, and you STILL end up missing a few errors.
Thanks for pointing this out to me. I really need to correct that later on.
Dammit RD! Why did you had to be the Big Sis Deus Ex Machina?
Also, will Shy be traumatized by this event? Or will she develop romantic feelings for the fire haired nutcase ?
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You'll have to wait and see.
Sunset needs help, she all confused and everything, she been in love with Fluttershy for so long, and her feelings bottled up, when she reunited with him, she was happy then discovered she was a girl.
Got furious and heart broken and then confused as the feelings didn't die.
She lost control and exploded from all the feelings she had and did the worst possible way to express them.
She going to have to grovel and beg to get a chance of forgiveness.
Maybe she works for Fluttershy as a maid....
Darn you -.- You made me watch Love Stage, and now wait for an update.
Anyway gotta say love your work, though if it goes a bit with the plot Rainbow Dash and you know who will be a couple like Shougo and Rei? (Just because I placed it spoiler doesn't mean I'm gonna write the name dear reader. Watch Love Stage if you really wanna get spoiled.)
I'm not reading this because:
If you can't even get the short description right, then this'll never be worth anyone's time.
The main description starts with poor grammar:
The first comma isn't needed, and shouldn't be there. The last clause doesn't make sense. Try reading it. Maybe, "she comes from a family..." Or something.
There's not much wrong with this part. It's just boring. You're essentially reusing the same sentence layout for each person. It's bland and boring. And pointless.
The rest is sub-par. Incorrect use of commas and poor connection of clauses:
This is, without a doubt, the worst use of commas I've seen in some time. You can't just put commas, between parts of a sentence, just to get random pauses, and somehow slow down the reader, and separate out random points, because commas do not work like this, such as in this sentence, if you can call this a sentense, which is me giving you an example of how bad you are, at using commas, because half of yours should be full-stops (periods), semi-colons, or simply not exist at all.
Yes. I'm a terrible person.