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Pinkie Pie can feel it, the end is coming! No more stories about herself or her friends! Pinkie rushes to Twilight's house, hoping to find the answer. Twilight doesn't quite understand, but has some interesting advice all the same.

A comedy slice of life fic meta fic, about the end of the show, with a serious aspect attached to it as well, about finding joy in one's life even when one's life isn't an adventure.

Written for the Weekly Contests writing prompt group, under the prompt Once More With Feeling, with the theme being Out With a Bang

Edit: Fixed typos and Grammar errors, as well as applying some rewrites for clarity and flow

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A fairly neat idea, could do with a proofreader to do a once over and fix up the formatting a bit, but a nice little story over all

Someone will always be watching and making stories... unless a meteor hits us or something. *cautiously scans the skies* :pinkiecrazy:

Nifty little story. Like the other commenter said, needs some proofreading.

Also, Spike has enough unfinished story and angst in his character bio to last two more seasons at least...

Finally, Pinkie could continuously kidnap the couriers with the mail that Rainbow Dash has become captain of the Wonderbolts if she doesn't want RD's character to get final closure! :pinkiehappy: :rainbowderp:

6882200 I checked over it twice and had a friend do so and didn't notice anything. What kind of mistakes did I make? I thought I had gotten better at proof reading, but I must have missed something

6882246 What stuff did I miss?

Sadly I doubt the canon writers of FIM will do much with Spike. Maybe fully get over his crush with Rarity and that would be it. Though their is plenty fans can work with, and who knows, maybe he'll get a chapter book.

Your last idea is funny, but I think Pinkie is Genre savvy enough to know she'd only be delaying the inevitable

6882277 Search for these words: TWILGHT caslte
Also some punctuation stuff like periods and commas next to one another, this: to!” and "who with the closing quote on the following line.

Spike needs to find out where his egg came from and learn who his biological parents are even more than settling things with Rarity! :moustache:

6882295 Thanks for your help. I'll be having some choice words with my proofreader when I see him, but I made sure to read more of it out loud and also rewrote some parts to make it flow better. I suppose I'll try triple checking next time

6882386
That's good, but don't hold yourself to an impossible standard. Even professionally published books have errors sneak through. Do your best and don't stress out over it when something slips by. I speak as a professional editor.

Best advice is to leave a story alone for a while, then go back and look at it with fresh eyes.

Now that's a story I'd like to read. Daring Do and Nuclear Repelling Fridge.

The last words of the story were "the end".

Kinda like your last words being "last words".

6886642 Yeah I did that on purpose, not sure if it was contrived or clever

*no chapter 2 button*
waaaait a sec :unsuresweetie:

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