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This was...Interesting, to say the least. Wonder why Pinkie wasn't seen as a Trixie clone?
Good writing mixed with a lot of sloppiness.
It was fun to read.
I didn't expect Trixie to jump Zecora like that. I was like "Woah, I guess this is a different kind of story than I thought."
Half of me is lolling so hard while the other half is really disappointed at what seems to be a lack of editing and forethought.![]()
Overall, I'll keep up with it but reserve my thumbs.![]()
After about five minutes of going "WTF AM I READING?!" I remembered poison joke and saw what you did here. VERY nice ![]()
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Okay so apparently the random I wrote in google docs last year was worth reading.
And quite confusing.
I didn't take this story seriously enough to feel like editing it. I promise that the stuff I publish on here in the future will be better edited.
Glad so many people enjoyed this.
I must admit I was laughing through most of this story. Very good job here, I give you five Derpys out of five.
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I'm more concerned about what broke her out of the Poison Joke state then anything else...
As for Pinkie Pie appearing as herself... Kind of explains itself when you think about it a little.
This story was definitly funny. A bit anti-climatic though. I kinda feel like it ends abruptly.
I was focused for a while but once I remembered the posion joke then it made some more sense. Quite funny![]()
I'll have what she's having!
This was pretty funny and I like the concept, shame it's so short though.
Not sure how many times I had to re-read the first instance of running into Zecora to understand what was going on,but I finally got it.
Stuff like this is why I stay up till 4 in the morning browsing this site.
Well since you seem to want another chapter I may put it on my list. But I just got a new job and am writing 4 other fics and editing for 1. One of those 4 is for a competition with a deadline, and two of them are of rather large scale.
So... when I get around to it. (such as whenever my new job gives me time off, seeing as I am working literally all weekend-2x24 hour shifts and quite a large portion of the week.)
Again, I love to hear how much you enjoyed it.
The description says it all. So Poison Joke messes with your mind, and that's why Trixie was so confused by all her "clones." ![]()







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