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ColossalParadox


I felt it was time for a new bio, but don't know what to write. Maybe something philosophical? Umm...? Hmm.... Whoops! Look at that!! I seem to have run out of characters!! Remember to Stay Beautiful!

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This story is a sequel to The Power of Love: Sweetheart and Minty


Second story in the "TPoL" series, this time starring Tavi and Vinyl!! As told by the two lovebirds ~ :heart: (Including a very special guest!)


This is the second story to my "The Power of Love" series, which goes through our favorite background ponies' love lives and how they came to know and (eventually) fall in love with each other.


Entry for Harms Way's 1000 Follower Contest!

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Comments ( 26 )

Was making the chapter so long really necessary?

7766037 For the purposes of this story, yes. I mean, if you dont want to read it you dont have to. It was only meant to be one chapter long.

gayyy

7766082 Very constructive criticism you have there, sir. I shall be sure to put your advice to good use in my future stories.

I like it! It combined several of the stories of how they got together but made it believable. The only thing I wasn't too hep on was the heart thing. Just a bit out there for me.

GreyPon3

7766315 Yeah, I got a *bit* creative with this one. But this is probably one of the stories I am most proud of that I have written. I'm glad you liked! It's a shame though, the heart thing is my favorite part about this story :heart::heart:! I think it is rather sweet, but my opinion may be biased :twilightblush:.

Aww, really cute, I love Octavia and Vinyl cuteness, nice job.

7766715 Thank you so much :pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:!!! I hope you are ready to see more of these three!!! I have one more one-shot planned after this. Then a HUGE story!! If you have a craving for more sweetness, may I be so bold as to point you towards the prequel to this story? It involves Lyra and Bon Bon, but I think (hopefully) you'll enjoy it!

7767495 Its fine, I like Lyra and Bon Bon cuteness too, I'm not picky about my cuteness.

7767499 Well, if you ever have the need, here is the link: Sweetness inbound

7767507 Just finished reading it, its good.

7767509 Wow! You're a fast reader!! Color me impressed :rainbowhuh:. And thanks!! Decent is what I aim for, so it's amazing to hear that it is good!!

7767522 Well actually I started reading it last night after finishing this one, but still, I'm a pretty quick reader yeah. I look forward to seeing more from you in the future.

7767840 You wrote about my two favorite background pony couples, so I'm glad to read more. Vinyl and Octavia (and Lyra and Bon Bon) forever!

I just wish they'd make them canon already.

7767852 I think the writers secretly think they are canon, but the execs may not approve of them actually being in a relationship, so the only way they can get close to it is officially making them best friends. Who doesn't like a good OctaScratch or LyraBon? :heart::rainbowkiss::heart:

7767859 Yeah, but you never know, they might someday, or at least we can only hope.

And I don't know who wouldn't, but clearly they have no taste in ships.

I really like this story but here are some things I noticed.

Maybe my parents we right all along.

were, not we I would guess

K k then

k k not k or ok?

[color=#a9426afaaaaa]Oh? Why is that Tamby?

I believe you forgot the [ /color] at the end

Also I's very hard, at least for me to distinguish between Tavi and Vinyl's colors. I'd suggest to make Vinyl a brighter blue so that you could more easily distinguish between them

7768229 Darn it! And I checked so thoroughly before posting it as well D:!! Oh well, thanks for letting me know!! The "K k then" is supposed to be there. It just seems like something she would say :twilightsheepish:. And I tried to take colorblindness into account with the text color too, but I guess Vinyl's blue could be a little brighter. I'll fix it, thanks for the feedback :twilightsmile:!

You know, the generic "We met at a bar" or "We were forced to live together at the music conservatory". Oh! And don't forget the classic "One's parents kicked us out and the other took us in off the street." Let's skip all that. That part is boring and slow. I wanna get to the good stuff!

VINYL!!!!!! ONLY PINKIE CAN BREAK THE FOURTH WALL!!!!!!!!!

I'm just here to warn Vinyl to back off from the fourth wall breaking! That's my schtick!

No, that’s pinkie’s schtick, she’s the only one allowed to break the fourth wall.

Graduated top of her class. Outstanding...

Come on octy, she’s not gonna remember EVERYTHING she’s told.

Yep, we make a great pai-, hey!

:rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh:

I love how the acronym here is TPoL. Sure, I know what it actually means, but I can't help but think of T'Pol

If you're reading this, then you must have come from reading Lyra and Bon Bon's story. Sweet, wasn't it?

Nuh uh! I'm not here from reading Lyra and Bon Bon's story, I'm here from searching for good OctaScratch stories!

7766037
Obviously! I mean, it is only a one-shot after all...

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