Marble Pie is a shy, quiet mare that rarely speaks and almost never makes eye contact. Rainbow Dash is known for being outspoken and assertive. When Pinkie's sisters -- including Marble -- come to Ponyville for a visit, Rainbow Dash somehow gets set up on a date with Marble Pie.
Do the two have a rock solid foundation that a relationship can be built on? Or will the entire thing crash and burn?
(despite the art, the story is not anthro. image created by How Do Ponies Work? which gave me the idea for the story.)
Chapters (4)
Great idea so far
I can't wait for future chapters
That was cute
That ending felt a little... abrupt. Feels like the story has no closure, like it's missing something important.
A bit like how I felt watching The Last Witch Hunter in cinema. It was nice while it played, but by the end of it you couldn't help but think about all the things they could do with the story but decided not to, and the strong feeling of unfulfillment.
I agree. I liked the story as far as was written, but it didn't really end, it just... stopped. If it had a conclusion added on, it would be quite a good story, I feel.