A spinoff of the famous horror movie series SAW. Though some of the traps involved were custom(lolwut), I still had some inspiration from the movie.
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I didn't know quite what to expect with the lack of a description but I'm glad I read it, it's pretty good.
38152 honestly, I'm not really good at descriptions, so....Imma try fixing up Chapter 2 before I post it. I think I kinda messed up the descriptions on this part of the story :P
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Maybe you'll add this description:
"Berry Punch wakes up after Pinkie Pie's party... in restraints. There's note, explaining that she, along with few others, being tested right now, and only way to free others and save herself - complete this test. Now Berry must follow this notes and play by her captive's rules."
I'm intrigued. Tracked it, will comment next chapter, for now - good prologue.
Okay, it's interesting, I can believe Dash slacked her job and threw away responsibility because of Wonderbolts. Hope she'll realize that she was wrong. Berry, you're awesome and brave!
Dash... How could you?! That is NOT how you get into The Wonderbolts, no matter how cool they are! Ugh, your story's starting to make me hate her more...
It's rare to see Berry in this kind of personality, usually she's just described as a drunk mare. I like this version better, though. There just seems to be one thing I'm sensing here, does Pinkie have anything to do with this? If yes, then the ending could be pretty predictable.
Hoping to see more chapters, keep on writing!
Hello berry, would you like to play a game?
anyways, if this is a more elaborate cupcakes story, I will be impressed. I am one of the few ponies that could clop to it (probably due to me being a guro, but I digress.) anyways, I think this has potential. I really liked the story of the saw movies and the message behind it. I expect great things from this story, great things. :rainbowdetermined:
Heh, impressive.
There are just too many mysteries left unsolved, too many questions unanswered! Where are the rest of the Mane Six? What have they done (especially Fluttershy) to be caught in this predicament? Are they even here? Agh, so many things to know!
Can't wait for the next installment, see ya!
Alright guys. I'd like to thank all of you for your positive feedback and encouragement
Chapter 4 and 5 are under way, but for now I'm gonna take a 3 day break from writing. Because....my mom enrolled me into a camp for 3 days. School holidays just got 20% worse 
But I'll be back soon.
In the meantime, would you like to play a game?
Oh Luna, the violence!
Ugh, this kind of things make me feel sick
Honestly, if Iron Anvil told them what he needed, Berry might have given the key to him! Man, what the heck did Fluttershy do?! Or even Octavia, or Lyra! They seemed so innocent
I feel sorry for Twilight
Her story doesn't make that much sense to me, did she create that tornado? Probably. Ugh, I don't even know anymore.
Your story on Lyra is very unique. Usually it has something to do with Bon Bon, but this is fresh and new
Hopefully all the mane ponies will get to be free at the end...
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>Forbidden book from Royal Library
>witchcraft accusation
>tornado
I think things out as I go along, ball it up into one big mind map and share opinions with others. If things don't work out I re-edit and rethink the chapter over and over til it sounds just about right
only reason i signed up was so i could track this story i give it a 10/10
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So what you're trying to say is that Twilight stole the book, studied forbidden witchcraft and started up a tornado? Dang, that was harsh of her. Still, I got the story.
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Knowing Twilight, I thought you'd assume that she was trying out some of the stuff she learned from the book. Who wouldn't learn anything once in a while from their mistakes?
my god i have been checking back here every day yet no new chapter! this is an epic story but cmon new chapter please
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hurr durr posting one in another few hours. I'm not gonna give excuses. I've been gaming XD
So yeah, chapter 6 is underway
this is getting exciting cannot wait till the next part
Twilight got out of her needle death trap? I wanted to know how!
Anyways, this is a cool chapter. What could honest Applejack do to get herself in such trouble?
57131 she only got out of one of the forehoof braces. Berry asks twilight what she was wearing. The end states that twilight was about to explain when AJ's game apparently started.
Glad to see the back stories are believable. I was worried you were going to play them up too much, but you didn't. Nice going!
Jigsaw should be Derpy, it would be Ironic
57138 Oh, then more violence shall occur!
i can't wait for applejack's turn
Oh, the suspense! The story's getting more and more serious, what's going to happen next?!
So, are you going to tell us what AJ did to make the apples look ripe? I know it's not important, but it could be some useful information.
Sawawasawsawasawsawsawsawasaucesawasasawasaesawsawwsauceawasw
DoD no wait...
Ditto.
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what kind of chemicals used will probably come in chapter 8/9 after they get to Applejack.
But I'm already revealing too much xD
Hope you don't mind if I suggest it.
If you haven't made a Rarity's test. Could you please make something along the lines of her new "Fire Rubi Necklace", perhaps a device or a test that includes it.
If you already have Rairity's test please ignore this comment.
Its a great story.
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Rarity is next unless another idea comes by
70351 so does that mean the other unicorn is rarity? I suppose that her test will be something involving scarring herself physically. Kind of like Lil Miss Rarity on tumblr.
Rarity? Yeah, probably Rarity... or Lyra. Either one would suffice. You're getting pretty far in the story, but Twilight's trap is still working! Oh, how is she going to get out! Hopefully she still has time
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Oh my lil rarity is a disturbing little girl
I still follow her on tumblr though XD
And the other unicorn Berry fired at will probably be Lyra. Unless anymore ideas spring up along the way. It would be better to switch between background ponies and the mane six.
Oh Celestia, Berry's gone! Don't worry, our natural born leader's going to make this ALL better... tight?
Whenever you publish the newest chapter, I'll be alerted 24 hours through my iPad. I think you need to describe the situation when Berry explains Rarity about the test and stuff.
Y does cherrilee have to die??
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>Cheerilee was airlifted to Canterlot
I didn't want to fit everything into one chapter
It was already too long considering my standards >.>
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knowing what happens to twilight when everything goes wrong, i'd say yes XD
I can totally imagine Fluttershy's
Hello Fluttershy, I know you are a mass murderer, you're very presence makes nearby ponies suffer HHHNNNNNNGGG attacks. You never owned up to these crimes. The health service then thought they were just regular heart attacks and spent a lot of money on research to find out why the population was having these attacks. Money which could have been spent curing deadly diseases. In front of your hooves are two keys, shame your forelegs are stuck in binds isn't it? The only direction your forelegs can move is forward, towards the keys, but it's never that simple is it? No, on the side of one of your forelegs is a piece of paper. In order to reach the keys to unlock your hooves, you must give yourself a paper cut.
Let the games begin.
Man this is awesome like crazy
When is the next chapter coming out?
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you have no idea how hard i laughed XD A paper cut would make her faint :P Though seeing her on the best night ever episode, i'm having second thoughts
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I'm pushing ideas around right now. The thing I hate is when I'm almost done and then a really bright idea comes by, forcing me to erase what I wrote >.>
Well, aren't things just peachy?
Let's see, we only need to know what Rarity did, and where Fluttershy, Pinkie, Octavia, Lyra and Spitfire are. Why do I get the feeling that not all of these are gonna survive? Just hoping I'm wrong here...
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originally Rainbow Dash the first one to die, though in a different kind of trap.
And then Berry was supposed to die a martyr trying to save Rarity from her trap.
What Rarity did will be in chapter 12. I enjoyed writing another flashback scene, so why not do the same for Rarity xD
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So... are you still going with these plans? I'm guessing no, seeing as RD and Berry are still alive. Let's just see what goes on in this story.
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I might actually post a chapter regarding what traps were originally supposed to be used
Woah, there was another ponified Saw fic other than the one I wrote?
I just discovered it, and I think I'll take a look at it. I swear, I didn't read it before I wrote mine! Don't sue me!
Well, anyway, I'll read it right now. I purposely left mine open, so that I could write sequels to it. I wonder if that's the case for yours, though...
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YOURS
IS
JUST
DELICIOUS
Though yours is much more descriptive compared to mine >.> I enjoy reading fics like the one you wrote as well xD Gave it five stars as well
It looks like trust is on the line here. You know it's a sad world when friends don't trust each other anymore. No important deaths as of yet, wonder what else could happen in the next chapters.
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Shedding some light on a background pony in the next chapter. Though it might take some time ..
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You already did Lyra's background, so I'm guessing it's between Octavia and Spitfire then
She died.. Boo yah! Just kidding. So some pony who made all these test made one clever step-- to point out people's mistake in notes. Therefore, nopony that was tested couldn't find out what the Pony's voice sound like.
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not really. Unicorns can easily mask over their voices when communicating. Plus, I don't think a pony's hooves would be able to click one button at a time on a tape recorder