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Fluttershy is not the Fluttershy we know, since childhood, she has gotten sort of a "High" form murder. The high is what she relied on for so long, she wasn't there for Nightmare's takeover, so she took over. Nightmare's assassin for any rebel ponies....is Fluttershy.
Thoughts so far from reading: The concept, like I said before, is good. I like the idea of an insatiable urge. But...you are moving the story along too fast! Try to slow down and drag things out longer, maybe add more detail. Then this story could become even better than it currently is. 
I will track to see where this goes
Also...wow....fluttershy's dad is kind of an ass, I don't feel sorry for him when he dies...good job portraying him, nice contrast.
Edit: Ok, replace "kind of an ass" with "a complete douchebag"
Edit (again...) : So all in all, good story and keep it up!
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but the idea alone is good enough to get an upvote from me.
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