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6841136
That's what I was going for.
Tagging this and adding it to the right groups is a pain.
Because you can just look at those and is spoils part of the twist.
Damn... one hell of a twist at the end
That twist though...
Caught me off-guard real good.
I got gotta say, this had a better twist than anything Shyamalan came up with.
Got to say, I saw that twist coming from a mile away, even got the identity of the narrator right. Although, it could have just been a lucky guess on my part. That being said, this story is well written and explores an interesting idea and so I think it stands on its own, regardless of the twist.
6843461
Interesting.
I tried to avoid saying anything that would have made it too obvious, but maybe I missed something.
"Alternate History Nerds", eh? I myself have an obsession with AUs and stuff, so I can understand. XD
*reading through* Yeah, yeah, yeah...yadayadayada skippy skippy. I don't get why this is AU. I mean, Twi-
What.
...Bravo to you. Nice insight. Didn't see it comin'
Nice story about Moondancer.
The fact that there where no other groups of Element Bearers might be related to the fact that Starlight created a paradox.
6846567
Spoilers, man....
Which doesn't explain why Sombra and Chrysalis bad presents come before the Nightmare Moon bad present.
That and I don't like the "If Y wasn't there, then X wouldn't happen."
There's always the possibility of someone else stepping in.
Great story. If it makes you feel better, almost certainly one of those timelines had alternate bearers of the Elements of Harmony, otherwise who got rid of the Plundervines?
This one is kind of interesting. The idea behind it works, even without the twist at the end. Even with knowing it, it has some things worth reading.
The only problem is a shift in voice. At the beginning of the story, it seems as though it is being remembered by the narrator. They are looking back on it during the day, or possibly even writing it down as they think about. Then the narrator wakes up, and it shifts from to something that is happen to the narrator at the time. Except there is no transition. It goes from one to the other, and is kind of jarring.
6905993
Hmm.
To be honest, I didn't realized I shifted.
Although part of me thinks it sort of works, so it reflects the change from a dreaming state to the awake state.
But that might just be me.
Is it a mistype? (assistance -> assistant)
7911983
It is.
Talk about a whamline. Nice job.
Interesting ending. Didn't expect that.