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The Toymaker sounds like a cool guy. Can't wait for moar.
this has quite the potential.
I will read, and edit this post.
EDIT: This story was actually kinda good! Original plot (On account that this reminds me of...ugh...cupcakes, only with dolls), and a character that made my skin crawl....ok, that was a lie, but he was definitely scary. Although I want to learn more about him in particular.
I give this a 8 of 10.
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I'd like to direct your attention towards the "incomplete" tag right there under the chapter listing. There's going to be more of this, and I'm not one to leave plot threads dangling.
Also, comparisons to Cupcakes are probably noticeable, seeing as the idea for this fic was born after reading Cupcakes a few times over while listening to Makkon's "The Little Toy Shop" on infinite repeat.
Though, mind, it wasn't until about halfway through conceptualizing the story that I noticed the similarities to Cupcakes. I just kept writing even after I realized it.
724245 Eh. It's just a small hint of cupcakes in there. personally, that fic wasnt scary at all.
People need to find some backbone.
Anywho, I saw, and am awaiting more. dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Pinkie_loool.png
Perfectly fine if you don't find it scary. Different people have different tolerances towards horror. I myself am ridiculously hard to scare.
But, even if you don't find it scary, I hope to at the very least provide a good story.
He's an evil toymaker
And he stitches crusaders
And if you look deep in his eyes
He will wrap you in papers
Then what will he do?
He'll stitch you through and through
Then he’ll button you up
And you will look like new
Sooo... watch out.
Hey buddy! Just finished your doll! Hope you like it
*SPOILER* Your Doll and Also your Doll
That ending was a little twisted, dude. 9/10 would clop again.
It finally updated! Yay!
Also, I loved how you ended the chapter. I now patiently await the next chapter.
I know this is supposed to be a horror but...
"Okay guys... We're going to prove the ineffectiveness of the law enforcement... By killing as many people as we can, without getting caught."
I am sorry but I was dying thinking about that.
Kindergartener Logic
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Eh. It might not the soundest or most rational of logic, but it still is logic. If you think about it, proving that people can get away with things like murder is a pretty good way of showing the ineffectiveness of law enforcement.
...that, and their leader may or may not be just a bit messed up in the head.
I am patiently waiting for the next chapter.
819174 GROSS!!! YOU CLOPPED TO THIS?!?