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(Takes place immediately after "Bridle Gossip")

First contact with Zecora - apparently the last survivor of a tribe of zebra known to have lived in what is now the Everfree Forest before the time of Luna's exile - during the "Poison Joke Incident" quickly afterwards draws Princess Celestia's attention and determination to make Zecora a full Equestrian citizen. On orders from Agent Snake, Agents P1 and P2 posted in Ponyville attempt to interfere with this mission, but in the process prejudices are exposed and the new friendships with Zecora are threatened. The only way to know if the mission succeeds and the new friendships hold is to read!

The Canterlot Chronicles: Season 1
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Why didn't the two stop P2 when he was down?:facehoof:

"What? My dad thaid ith not a thwear word if you can't thay it right."

It's official; Twist's dad is awesome...

Downside to calling for reinforcements there is almost no way to make sure they don't get more Agents of Chaos or more Pegasus supremacists at least I assume that's what Lt Aten is

6922307 "Pegasus supremacist" is a good way of putting Aten's worldview. I've always thought there's a certain segment of the pegasi population in Equestria - literally "flying above" the earth ponies and unicorns and with historical military roots - that have a conceit of being better than (almost) everyone else. Not all pegasi are like that, of course, and if you've been reading you'll know even other pegasi can get on Aten's bad side, but between this conceit and a residual tribalism Aten draws his support. And there's little Princess Celestia can do against it without seeming to go against the principles she herself promotes in Equestria.

6922452 Well till he goes too far and it can be proven which most people like that will do sooner or later especially if they keep getting away with what they are doing

6922477 I always liked the term tribalist, myself. And while Celestia may be constrained by her own laws and beliefs, she good at playing the long game; a combination of giving them enough rope to hang themselves with, and the knowledge that Discord isn't likely to be grateful to them...:trixieshiftright:

Well, now the agents will be able to be spotted easily, with the effects of Poison Joke on them...

6992402 Depends on the effects if they are minor or something no one would notice since the pair hides most of the time... Best thing for everyone would be something that freaks them out enough to seak treatment

6992402 You'll see what the effects are next chapter. :raritywink:

For two who like to hide, the going to be pretty flashy I think soon.

Honestly I'm guessing this chapter is set up for something down the road.

facing a Pinkie giving the most evil, sadistic smile he had ever seen before.

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What, no. This is the smile of a sweet innocent angel :pinkiecrazy:

She could guess that the lesson was related to a "special" Equestrian, but she would need more information to figure out precisely what to make of it - it was time to pull out the "magical security cams".

Well, that's vaguely creepy. And people complain about how omnipresent video surveillance is in Britain.

7293141 Creepy though it may be, it's essentially canon to the show, so make of that what you will.

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If you mean the Angel of Death, then I agree :pinkiecrazy:

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