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It has been a full year since the day that an unknown spacecraft crash landed onto Equestria. Inside the craft were over five thousand humans, many still in cryogenic sleep. During the year, the humans have adapted to life on Equestria, and have become full citizens of the kingdom of Canterlot. The humans have slowly been intergrated into Equestrian society by the process of the HomeStay program. One such indivildual has been assigned to a certain purple unicorn, and he brings with him a troubled past.

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Loved the idea of humans reconstructing our civilisation there on Equestria, but PLEASE GOD be careful with your vocabulary, ive found quite a few that kinda made me wanna punch a pony. Appart of that, its great and you should continue it :).

"I was unfrozen today". That... that wouldn't happen to be a reference would it?

Looks interesting. Tracking.

This would be awesome if this happened in real life except the war part

Nice! :pinkiehappy: I'd like some more please.

"You know even though your a thousand years old you still look hot." :pinkiegasp::twilightoops::facehoof:

Awesome start for a story and I loved how he just told the princess of Equestria that she was hot :rainbowlaugh:
I will continue to read this story with eagerness! :pinkiehappy:

Wow....I sure was surprised when I woke up this morning. Didn't think it would get this popular so quick You all make me happy :twilightblush:

The story is interesting enough thus far, but some things feel off here and there. Example: it seems a bit redundant, even forced, for Twilight to tell Spike about the homestay program, humans, and citizenship. I would assume he would be aware of such an event.

:rainbowlaugh: I'm really liking this! Keep it up!

745503 Well I did say that not alot of ponies and such know about the humans. So it is possbile for Spike not to know, and perhaps Twilight in the excitement of meeting a human from outerspace simply forgot to tell as she focused herself on other matters like preparing for the human staying with her.

Great story hope to see more will keep an eye out for uptdates

Please continue this, it's pretty good. :ajsmug:

Awesome new chapter! Keep up the good work :ajsmug::pinkiehappy::twilightsheepish::raritywink::eeyup:

Man its been a while hope to see more

UPDATE!!!
Boo-
*yawns*
Boo....Yaaaa....

*SLAM*

ZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ

1629885 *Covers with a blanket. Gives a derpy plushie*

I love how ponies always ask why humans are tall.

1786697 Considering that they are probably shorter then a human its a common question. And in this case of different planets I think I do say that planet Equestria is slightly smaller then earth so I guess that would make the organisms living on it a bit smaller then those on earth.

Comment posted by Fireheart 1945 deleted Jun 14th, 2014

And this was going so well... I wish there could be more...

Jacob nodded, "Yeah...was real nice talking to ya as well...Celestia," Jacob tried to think of a compliment, "You know even though your a thousand years old you still look hot."

Celestia blinked, and Jacob went red in the face and sweated more.

'SHIT! Damn it, I'm dead. What was I thinking, you never make a comment about a womans age. I'm dead.' Jacob thought, but when he looked at the sun princess he blinked in surprise to see her face red, looking at her hoof as it circled the floor a bit.

"Oh...dear...um..thank you." Celestia said with a smile, "I should go now. Bye Jacob.

It seems that your ship isn't just sailing, it's being pushed along with the Super 1337 Jet Engine.
its on newgrounds. couldn't find it on Youtbe for some reason. *shrugs*

"It is amazing and it has certainly caused a stir among the science and astronoy branches of study in Canterlot."

What's an astronoy?

"Oh cool. Well allow me to introduce myself," Rainbow Dash said as she looked over at Jacob, "names Rainbow Dash. The greatest flier in all of Equestria."

You know, for her being the greatest flier in Equestria, she sure crashes alot. I wonder who the worst flier is? It seems every other time Rainbow makes an entrance, it is in the literal sense. Derpy may not be fast, but at least she can avoid landing on someone's face!

As she slept a shadow loomed over her. A puffy shadow.

and then Fluffle Puff wearing ballons landed on her.

"Well," Jacob said, "we hope to make this planet our home. At least we hope to."

Yeah buddy. They heard you say you hoped to the first time, :P

'Well...this will certainly be interesting.' He thought as he closed his eyes, 'I just hope I don't get hit anymore.'

'Well...this will certainly be interesting.' He thought as he closed his eyes, 'I just hope I don't get hit anymore.'

lol, he got 'hit on' by a pony.

"Okie Dookie Lookie."

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:rainbowlaugh:
:facehoof:

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