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    Scootaloo has heard rumors of the Rainbow Factory, but over the years, she just dismissed them as pony tales. When one of her classmates at Flight School is picked up by an ambulance after an accident, and never makes it to the hospital, she's sure something's going on.

    Music performed by "World Destroyance"- AspergerGoodness, and The Mermen

    First Published
    9th Jun 2012
    Last Modified
    6th Jul 2012

    Comments ( 34 )

    #1 · Chapter 1 · 49w, 6d ago · · ·
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    Cars? Sure why not.

    #2 · Chapter 1 · 49w, 6d ago · · ·
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    So, I'm guessing they have classic hearses in Equestria then... :trixieshiftright:

    #3 · Chapter 1 · 49w, 6d ago · · ·
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    >>722006 It's a combination car, not a hearse. They were used for ambulance AND hearse duty in the rural US, and yes, most of Equestria's cars are pre-1982, with the exception of Twilight's 1985 Volvo wagon and Rarity's '12 Bentley Continental in "Last Ditch".

    #4 · Chapter 1 · 49w, 6d ago · · ·
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    Your getting better son, much much better :pinkiehappy:

    #5 · Chapter 2 · 49w, 6d ago · · ·
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    FIRST! Really interesting story u got DER. Scootaloo better not die. Plus, you spelled protegë wrong.

    #6 · Chapter 1 · 49w, 6d ago · · ·
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    "It was such a grand old car, they thought, a vehicle of mercy, devoting it's career to saving lives. The whine of it's shrill siren just seemed to say, "Don't worry, help is on the way," it's lights flashed like a beacon of sympathy to the injured, sweeping ribbons of red that spread justice and healing to all."

    A.G.'s version: "It was an ambulance." :moustache: LOL.

    Good writing. I know I couldn't do better.

    #7 · Chapter 2 · 49w, 6d ago · · ·
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    >>722624 And yet....TheBandBrony watches you. AND. NOT. ME.:twilightangry2:

    #8 · Chapter 2 · 49w, 6d ago · · ·
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    ... gore-tagged stories. :ajsleepy: Worst kind of story there is (losing only to "Human in Equestria").

    Your writing's good though, and I'll make sure to check for updates. I'm not tracking, 'cause I don't want people to think I like that kinda stuff.

    Besides, I'm composing for it after all. What kind of worker doesn't even care about what he's working for? :derpytongue2:

    In a nutshell, great job so far. :moustache:

    #9 · Chapter 2 · 49w, 6d ago · · ·
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    I better be in this boy, I want to fuck 'um up!

    #10 · Chapter 2 · 49w, 6d ago · · ·
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    >>722700 I'm SAUS, Night, you can't be in this. Wilcox and Flegel will be, but not in very good roles.

    #11 · Chapter 2 · 49w, 6d ago · · ·
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    >>722714 Aww, but I'm the king, I have to know this shit, just put me in near the end talking to someone in the background.

    #12 · Chapter 2 · 49w, 6d ago · · ·
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    >>722718 I can't, this is too personal of a problem for you to get involved in.

    #13 · Chapter 2 · 49w, 6d ago · · ·
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    >>722738 Oh alright, meany :fluttershysad:

    #14 · Chapter 2 · 49w, 6d ago · · ·
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    >>722743

    Don't give me that look! You're my FATHER-in-law, not my bitch!

    #15 · Chapter 2 · 49w, 6d ago · · ·
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    >>722759 Call me a bitch one more time and you will know pain. :twilightangry2:

    #16 · Chapter 2 · 49w, 6d ago · · ·
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    >>722782 Already do, I have to be around Wilcox!:rainbowlaugh:

    #18 · Chapter 3 · 49w, 6d ago · · ·
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    >>725576 Got worse, didn't it?

    #19 · Chapter 3 · 49w, 6d ago · · ·
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    >>725582 Not at all, I just felt like being a pic-using smart ass.

    #20 · Chapter 4 · 48w, 5d ago · · ·
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    This is getting good.

    #21 · Chapter 2 · 47w, 6d ago · · ·
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    I'm gonna offer up some constructive criticism on your Choice of RD's Car, seeing as she is Ponyville's Head Weathermare, she probably makes enough bits to have a more modern and reliable car: my choice would be an Inferno Red Pearl 2000 Dodge Stratus ES as her car.

    #22 · Chapter 5 · 47w, 6d ago · · ·
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    >>798301 Who said she was head weathermare? And btw, the car she owned was a gift to her in High School, in a story I have not yet released.

    You probably own a Dodge Stratus!:rainbowlaugh: Thanks for the advice, though. Most cars in my stories are pre-1982, though.

    #23 · Chapter 5 · 47w, 6d ago · · ·
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    >>798323

    actually, I own the Plymouth Cousin of the Stratus: the Breeze. Unfortunately, I'm not driving it ATM, because back in January, the bottom end of the 2.0L Engine decided to become one solid Cast Iron Lump. it was a VERY Good Car to me, had 226,262 on the clock when she finally died.:raritycry:

    #24 · Chapter 5 · 47w, 6d ago · · ·
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    >>798387 Hence your name?

    #25 · Chapter 5 · 47w, 6d ago · · ·
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    >>798390

    precisely. :pinkiehappy:

    #26 · Chapter 5 · 47w, 6d ago · · ·
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    >>798402 you're dedicated to your love of cars, kid. You're alright.

    Best mopar is 1974 Dodge Monaco.

    Monaco accomplishments:

    -Was Bluesmobile

    -Was popular police car

    -Was in Dukes of Hazzard

    -1974 model jumped over 300 FT in "Smokey and the Bandit II", giving it the title of longest movie car jump EVER ATTEMPTED

    #27 · Chapter 5 · 47w, 6d ago · · ·
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    >>798422

    I'm dedicated alright, seeing as i have a Diploma of a General Line Automotive Technician, and currently working on my Diploma in Collision Repair!

    #28 · Chapter 6 · 46w, 1d ago · · ·
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    Good job brony, keep up the good work.

    #29 · Chapter 6 · 45w, 4d ago · · ·
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    This is gory, but good.  Keep it up!

    #30 · Chapter 3 · 44w, 2d ago · · ·
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    :raritycry: Run Scootaloo run. Don't let them harvest you. Also what is the thing that is used in the rainbows, (yeah i forgot the name Short Term Memory Loss FTW) and why is it in the pegasi????

    wait hold on a sec, during that episode when the mane 6 went to cloudsdale and pinkie ate a bit of the rainbow then that means...(Registering in 3...2...1) OH SWEET CELESTIA SHE REALLY DID O_O

    #31 · Chapter 6 · 44w, 2d ago · · ·
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    >>936566 The chemical is "Eldarius Solicifius". It's found in several organs in pegasi, including the wing muscles.

    I tried to make Miller and Meteor a sort of demented Flim and Flam, you know what I mean? They're actually named after a coachbuilding company that built hearses and ambulances, Miller-Meteor.

    #32 · Chapter 4 · 44w, 2d ago · · ·
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    I really hope that the good guys win. I mean the good guys always win right????

    #33 · Chapter 6 · 44w, 2d ago · · ·
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    >>936600 Most of the time....:pinkiecrazy:

    #34 · Chapter 6 · 44w, 2d ago · · ·
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    >>936582 oh kk thx ^^. that really explains a lot. when is the next chapter going to be up ^^. Also now I am scared for Rainbow Dash now O_O. You sir do a good job in setting atmosphere.

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