First

Like the Story!

Twilight=Gordon (the first line was a reference to a youtube series i caught immediately)

AJ+Rarity=Eli Vance and the other important scientist who i can't name right now

Rainbow Dash=Adrian Shepard

dis gon be good.

Actually AJ+Rarity are supposed to be Gina Green and Colette Cross from Half-life Decay

>>715899715899 thanks, i actually never heard of that one. But this is looking good so far! The reference you made was great. (SUCKER!)

Somepony been watching Freeman's Mind.It's always the next ep, that can never come out soon enough, ya know?

Some proofreading would do your story a world of good. There´s not really too much wrong with your grammar but the story is typos galore.

Interesting premise though. Do you think the story will involve blood, gore or other nasty stuff like that? Just wondering if the "Dark" tag would be appropriate.

>>716092716092 Yes I might have some blood/ gore in it, not enough to have the Gore tag but yea. Also I Didn't proofread it, otherwise it would So much better, but I just wrote it and posted it. I will go back and correct any mistakes later.

What's the Combine supposed to be represented by, the Changelings?  <---- Serious question.

>>716853716853 There is no combine in the first Half-life or it's extantion packs. But if this gets good enough reviews and I have the time to make it, I will make Half-pony 2, and ep1/ep2, and yes the combine are going to be changelings and civil protection are... I don't know, I don't plan ahead.

Half-Life and Mlp... not bad

>>716941716941 Oh, right, well... GOOD! MAKE HALF-PONY 2 OR I WILL CRY!

>>716952716952 Should I be worried at what those Freeman's Mind references will be?

>>730574730574 Not just Freeman's mind, but Barney's and Shephard's mind as well.

>>731969731969 Oh my, may Celestia save us all.

WILL THIS EVER BE UPDATED?

Sorry about that, all of my favourite's take a VERY long time for an update to occur, and I haven't seen many other stories I want to read.

Please

>>759166759166 Yes it will. I just erased the file that all my stories were in and am now myself. I am too lazy to start again but it will. In fact, I'll get started right now.

>>759325759325 This pleases me.