• Member Since 21st Nov, 2011
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blazing5in


Im a young brony. Currently in Secondary school, or otherwise known as high school. I live in Singapore.

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The mane-6 are invited by Princess Celestia and Luna to test out a new creation.

However, during testing, something horrible happens, leading to untold power, chaos, and everything you know about LoZ:OoT will (may) be diced, spliced, and churned out into something else, or be total nonsense.

That, and an obnoxious fairy will be given 4th wall breaking powers.

Chapters (7)
Comments ( 35 )

zelda crossover huh? ill give it a shot

storys good so far. only thing is that you should make it easier to tell who exactly is talking. in most fics ive read, when a different character is talking, the author makes a new line, where as you just jumble a bunch of different characters' lines into one paragraph and sometimes dont even mention which character is talking. you dont have to do what other authors do, but just make it easier to tell whos talking. i personally am not really confusing lines that much, but others might

Ok, interesting but the letter was not formal really and Luna is talking wrong

New paragraph each time a new character talks

Hmmmm... interesting idea, but the constant break from the story and interaction with the author kinda ruin it for me. It feels less like a zelda game crossover with ponies than a huge rehearsal for a giant play about a zelda crossover with ponies, making it okay to speak to the narrator.

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Well, I don't really see anything wrong personally, it would help to point out the errors.

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Well, I'm actually planning to use the interaction between characters and the author in future chapters somehow. I'll work on the paragraphing too.
And only certain characters can break the 4th wall. I'm trying not to use too much storyline plot from the game itself, so it might turn out different from the original game. Well, some area's anyway. Don't want to reveal spoilers.

i like how your involving the narrator, it turns into a much more comedic fic, but if thats not what your going for then you need some serious re writing :pinkiehappy:

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Well ill use the narrator alot. Pinkie+Navi+narrator=? lol
And i just saw your comment at my fren's fic :derpyderp2:

W8 a minute... i think i know who you are. If i do then my earlier comment would make sooo much sense.:twilightsmile:

im interested in seeing twilight link meeting twilight zelda

Congratz on 1k views, bro :D

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Thnx alot. :D
Wish both of yours success too. :D I'm reading the second one naow :twilightsmile:

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Me too.
What are you confused on? I never really thought this story through properly, so most of it was made up on the spot, reinforced by ideas that I already thought out.

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its just like. ocarina of time is my favorite game ever... Yet, im so confused as to what the hell nightmare is planning... Shouldn't the nightmare be gannon or something... everyone knows applejack into mares so her reaction is all wrong... should be all like "HAY NO!" already going out with rainbow dash....

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The part about Applejack into mares is fanon shipping. I'm wasn't planning (Or even thought of) shipping. Although that might have been fun to work with. And I love plot twists. About Nightmare being Ganon... well, I'm not going to give spoilers.

Mein gott!

And suddenly, Moony.:rainbowlaugh:

Was NOT expecting her to show up!:trollestia:

'O' Levels?! :pinkiegasp:

You're either in the UK or in Singapore like me!

Hurray for common ground! I have 'O's too! :pinkiehappy:

Ah crap, and so begins the studying... :pinkiesad2:

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Eeyup. I'm a singaporean. :rainbowlaugh:
Good luck for your 'O' levels.:pinkiehappy:

anyone else wave at pinkie pie?

:rainbowlaugh: i like how much navi breaks the forth wall

Ok this is my reaction to reading that the baby cakes pwned that guy: :rainbowhuh:

My sentiments mirror the last line of the chapter...

I am officially stupefied. The BUCK IS GOING ON?!

Who else besides me wanted to beat mido up in the real game?:pinkiesmile:

Wow, thanks pinkie it IS my birthday! Also, dont anyone bash how luna talk

the whole sword and shield part made me think of this:

You have plans to continue?

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