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Nom_deCheval 31856

Joined March 2012
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    Nom_deCheval's Stories (3)

    • Round Two
      Celestia meets with Chrysalis for a second time.

      3,155 words · 3,962 views · 172 likes · 5 dislikes
    • Kissin' Cousins
      One of Applejack's relatives comes to town for a visit, and she's not a typical Apple.
      6,828 words · 1,761 views · 97 likes · 5 dislikes
    • Drive Fly
      Five ponies on their way to work. This is their story.
      2,426 words · 553 views · 56 likes · 2 dislikes

    Applejack's cousin from Las Pegasus, a dancer, comes to visit, and catches everyone off guard. Especially Spike, who is instantly smitten with the young mare--and Rarity is none too happy about it.

    First Published
    8th Jun 2012
    Last Modified
    8th Jun 2012

    Comments ( 21 )

    #1 · 49w, 3d ago · · ·
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    Damn Spike, you're inconsistent as fuck.

    #2 · 49w, 3d ago · · ·
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    > Las Pegasus

    > Dancer

    I totally pigeonholed her as a stripper, now I feel dirty.

    Rocket Queen - Guns N' Roses

    #3 · 49w, 2d ago · · ·
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    Oh Bon Bon. Silly.

    And Spike... well, I like this for one very good reason: It at least breaks his "Single-Character Sexuality" and makes it clear that his actual romantic preference is female ponies (Not that hard to understand; he's been re-molded to think of pony beauty as the acceptable standard, that means he'll be romantically attracted to them all his life.) Good chow, chap :moustache:

    #4 · 49w, 2d ago · · ·
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    intwesting, to the tabs with thee!!

    #5 · 49w, 2d ago · · ·
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    Apple Bottom...

    Apple bottom jeans, jeans, boots with the fur (with the fur!)

    I see what you did there :rainbowkiss:

    #6 · 49w, 2d ago · · ·
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    :raritywink:::raritycry::raritydespair::raritycry::raritydespair::moustache::raritywink:

    :ajbemused:

    #7 · 49w, 2d ago · · ·
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    mphf, im sure this Aj's cousin gonna treat spike like dirt, just like rarity, or smth like that

    #8 · 49w, 2d ago · 1 · ·
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    >>714449

    As rightly you should! Pidgeonholing dirty strippers is a surefire way to contract syphilis!

    #9 · 49w, 2d ago · · ·
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    Being a stripper must be kinda troublesome when you come from a culture/species who normally don't wear clothes.:ajbemused:

    (I assumed Apple Bottom's dancing might sure have been attractive to the audience, if you know what I mean, but that no removing of clothing was needed.)

    #10 · 49w, 2d ago · · ·
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    >>714855  I don't actually see A.B. as a stripper. She's just a dancer, working in one of the shows out there. I was actually thinking she was doing more of the Cirque de Soleil kinda show, to be honest. She just happens to be mega-hot.

    Not that there is anything wrong with being a stripper, just not how I saw this character.

    :pinkiehappy:

    #11 · 49w, 2d ago · · ·
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    Great story. Very well paced, some harrowing near-misses, and friendship prevailed in the end!

    I have read alot of Cold in Gardez fiction, and until now I found nothing as well executed - I could see this being an episode quite easily. Well, overlooking Bon-Bon, though personally I found that hilarious.

    Great stuff! A star, a thumb, and a following!

    :pinkiehappy:

    #12 · 49w, 1d ago · · ·
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    Where  did you get the cover image from?

    #13 · 49w, 1d ago · · ·
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    >>720384 I made the cover image. I'm a graphic artist. I was thinking of posting it to my DA account. If you want it, let me know and I'll certainly post it.

    :pinkiehappy:

    #14 · 49w, 1d ago · · ·
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    >>722119

    that's really awesome! I wish I was that talented

    I'm not usually a fan of OCs, but this is well done!

    #15 · 49w, 1d ago · · ·
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    >>722668  Thanks. :)

    I'm not big into OC's myself, but A.B. was a pony that came to me because of the joke on her name. The story grew around it, and it was structured like an episode, so I went with it. I'm actually very pleased with the outcome.

    :pinkiehappy:

    #16 · 49w, 1d ago · 1 · ·
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    Spike was an annoying tool this whole fic :facehoof:

    #17 · 48w, 6d ago · · ·
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    Haha! Awesome :rainbowlaugh:

    #18 · 47w, 3d ago · · ·
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    The Bo-Bon part reminded me of the movie Friday. GOD DAYUM!!

    #19 · 47w, 3d ago · · ·
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    Very good read, it would make a great episode, you know as long as the flank flaunting was a little less obvious, just left at that she is beautiful

    #20 · 43w, 1d ago · · ·
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    >>714572Awww.Now you have that song stuck in my head!

    #21 · 13w, 9h ago · · ·
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    This is Spike. :moustache: He have all mares.

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