Applejack's cousin from Las Pegasus, a dancer, comes to visit, and catches everyone off guard. Especially Spike, who is instantly smitten with the young mare--and Rarity is none too happy about it.
Damn Spike, you're inconsistent as fuck.
> Las Pegasus
I totally pigeonholed her as a stripper, now I feel dirty.
Rocket Queen - Guns N' Roses
Oh Bon Bon. Silly.
And Spike... well, I like this for one very good reason: It at least breaks his "Single-Character Sexuality" and makes it clear that his actual romantic preference is female ponies (Not that hard to understand; he's been re-molded to think of pony beauty as the acceptable standard, that means he'll be romantically attracted to them all his life.) Good chow, chap
intwesting, to the tabs with thee!!
Apple bottom jeans, jeans, boots with the fur (with the fur!)
I see what you did there
mphf, im sure this Aj's cousin gonna treat spike like dirt, just like rarity, or smth like that
As rightly you should! Pidgeonholing dirty strippers is a surefire way to contract syphilis!
Being a stripper must be kinda troublesome when you come from a culture/species who normally don't wear clothes.
(I assumed Apple Bottom's dancing might sure have been attractive to the audience, if you know what I mean, but that no removing of clothing was needed.)
>>714855714855 I don't actually see A.B. as a stripper. She's just a dancer, working in one of the shows out there. I was actually thinking she was doing more of the Cirque de Soleil kinda show, to be honest. She just happens to be mega-hot.
Not that there is anything wrong with being a stripper, just not how I saw this character.
Great story. Very well paced, some harrowing near-misses, and friendship prevailed in the end!
I have read alot of Cold in Gardez fiction, and until now I found nothing as well executed - I could see this being an episode quite easily. Well, overlooking Bon-Bon, though personally I found that hilarious.
Great stuff! A star, a thumb, and a following!
Where did you get the cover image from?
>>720384720384 I made the cover image. I'm a graphic artist. I was thinking of posting it to my DA account. If you want it, let me know and I'll certainly post it.
that's really awesome! I wish I was that talented
I'm not usually a fan of OCs, but this is well done!
>>722668722668 Thanks. :)
I'm not big into OC's myself, but A.B. was a pony that came to me because of the joke on her name. The story grew around it, and it was structured like an episode, so I went with it. I'm actually very pleased with the outcome.
Spike was an annoying tool this whole fic
The Bo-Bon part reminded me of the movie Friday. GOD DAYUM!!
Very good read, it would make a great episode, you know as long as the flank flaunting was a little less obvious, just left at that she is beautiful
>>714572714572Awww.Now you have that song stuck in my head!
This is Spike. He have all mares.