:O dis gonna be gud :3

can't wait for more :D

I so love the world that rust made. Happiness is that so many awesome writers have decided to play in it.

I love this story!

Can't wait for more badass chapters!

Welcome to the game.

And finally, one of the players is smart enough to ask about fine print before getting blasted into the universe. Well done.

>>715541715541

Well he didn't get his revenge by being a stupid arse.

Oh. My. God.

You sir definitely deserve an...

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>>715573715573

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It's fast-paced, and I noticed some spelling/grammar mistakes, but it's written in such a style as the fast-pacedededness works with it as a whole. And the spelling/grammar problems don't detract from the story, so it's perfectly fine. Welcome to the game, friend.

Chuck Norris approves of the revenge. Bravo. Absofuckinglutely magnificent, sir.

Very cool back story.

I'm glad to see My story is going well. Thank you.

I'll admit, reading the description, I didnt have much hope stocked in this story. However, I read it due to the fact that its part of Rust's universe.... you proved my expectations wrong. Well done.

OP much? Oh well. I doubt most of those talents are gonna be usefull for a wolf/

>>717025717025

In all technicallity, he's basically a master at killing, but the sad part is he spent his whole life for that one moment, doing not much else, no time for interests in music, most of the literature he's read is revenge and violence, the closest thing he had to a friend was in all honest a mad scientist who did wierd experiments and played rock music at ear damaging volumes who ended up getting shot up, and knows absolutely nothing about memes, the polar opposite of the Agent of Chaos. But yes, I DO suppose a virus that genetically modified his psychological state to which he can execute perfect bullet time somewhat OP.

........ Stalliongrad.... isnt the Winged Wolf headed there? Also, Its kind of odd seeing someone in this universe who isnt a brony. Odd, but refreshing.

>>717366717366

Not sure... will check...

You broke my badass detector!

I can fairly say this chapter blew my mind.The fight, but mainly the smithing of Aoi's blade. Are you a smith yourself, or a fan of smithing?

>>717522717522

I'm a fan of smithing, but mainly I'm a fan of the work that goes into the katana... and the notion that each sword has a soul of it's own...

A sword made from the scales from a black dragon.... where have I heard that one before?

>>718667718667

................................... yes.

>>718688718688 You sir make a compelling argument. But I swear to Celestia, if uses it to cast magic I will hurt you.

Aoi is the coldest, coolest motherfucker I've ever seen. He's what batman would be without the no killing part.

Also, I was considering sending my character to Stalliongrad in a few chapters for reasons I'll keep secret, but I think I'll see what yours does there first.

Ummm...EPIC!

And no crossover problems for either of us. Do you mind if I make a passing mention of the event in my story?

>>718957718957

By all means...

So, is the blade a hybride of steel/ dragonscale, or is it simply dragonscale?

I think the powers that be have a fetish for giving their pieces on the chessboard dragonscale.

>>720194720194

Hybrid of Steel and dragon scale.

A kick ass air blade and the theme from my favorite Miyazaki film? Awesome.

By the Gods, you update at a awesome pace, not to mention the quality of your writing is consistent.

Who did you sell your soul to for these skills?Because I want in :D

>>722578722578

Actually, my writing depends on my mood, and my available time. If I feel a little violent, I write a chapter of a badass battle, if wanting to move the audience, I write something touching, If I want to write something totally flippin random, that's my  dam business and I'm happy that you stay out of it. But it's summer, I've got nothing better to do, so I've got loads of time to think. SHEER BOREDOM FTW!

>>722594722594

I've got a while till my summer break. Seeing how In Engalnd I wouldnt say we get a summer so we guess. I have a small time slot tommorow for writing, and then about 2 weeks solid exams.( 7 Exams in the week starting monday. My body is not ready.)

BEING IM SCHOOL FTW

BlackWing put a link to your story at the end of his last chapter of Griffin the Griffin... Be prepared for a LOT more views in the future!

That fight paragraph could probably stand to be broken up a little bit.  It would actually be pretty funny if he started going by the name "Fine Print" :D

Um... He's doing all these things as a wolf right? Some of these things just aren't possible for a wolf...

Black wings a total hipster, he was making swords out of dragon scales before it was cool

>>723923723923 Magic.Or Equestria. Thats my excuse.

I certainly like where this is going.

Wait..... Is this Rust's or Blackwings version of the equestria "universe"

(Yes there are differances)?

Your character is an Op badass... AWESOME!! Good story i just find the paceing to be to fast like Really fast. But if you keep on updating this fast i dont care

>>724277724277 there are no differences in teh universes, though how events play out may be altered in different fics. there aremany of these springing up now...

>>718667718667 But his will be better his will be a Katana

>>724418724418 The differances are that in Blackwings universe (my favorite) Griffin is doing the whole slave freeing thingie and is a nice guy.

While in Rust's universe, he's a merc who works for the person who offers him the most money.. some differances with what happened in the battle versus the hydras too.

M.C

>>724586724586 Of course it is. Katanas are just better.

you can dodge a dart or a bullet. but what of a lazer? and i wonder if lacero or one of Aoi's smithed and dragon enhanced slashes would win?

(and  how is Aoi pronounced? ow-ee?

and potential future crossover at the gala to look forward to. yus

>>724769724769 Aww, do you have a boo boo?

>>724836724836

besides where i cracked my toenail on a coffee table this morning? nope

The white wild dragon slayer wolf from the prophecy!

Sounds like an aaaawwwweeeesssssoooommmmmeeeeee story!

Ember reference? Heck yes

Good to see the Griffin universe expand.

Great fic so far. Congrats.

This is really great its almost to crazy to fiction I mean how likely is it that three of the best writers I can think of decide to make one universe coexist with all their characters  while having them update once or even MORE DAILY I may be crazy but this is ridiculously insane and instead of them breaking the fourth wall I maybe breaking the forth wall by posting this

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>>724769724769

Answer's in my other fimfic, Agent of Chaos

>>723923723923

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Nuff Said!

Thanks everyone for your support

>>724635724635

..................................................Yes, but so is A greatsword battleax longsword that can used magic.

i enjoy this

Hmmm good story. Little OP but still good. Also events seem really rushed. Try and slow down your skipping days far to often. The story is seriously lacking its nutrients. Like making a sandwich with really high-quality meat but nothing else. no bread, no sauces, no lettuce.

awe..............................some story!

>>727281727281

Thanks for the advice. Yeah, depending on what I write, it can seemed rushed at times. I have trouble adjusting pace, It's a derp thing.

This is pretty much following Agent 47 through equestria in all but name.

>>728585728585

Agent who?

This is quite the strange tale... I like it. I would go through and put a little comment on all of the chapters but that seems silly, at the moment at least. So, as long as I am commenting now, I got some questions that need some splainin'.

1.)Why does your "hero" seem so overly capable at this point?

2.)How does time line up in this? (not really specific but **** it)

3.)????

4.)profit (sorry I was writing a list and this just happens)

5.) From what I can recollect you mentioned Tzun Tzu's "Art of War" as one of the literary items your "hero" (sorry I like the whole "hero" bit) read meaning a few things, to me at least.  You mean to give "hero" a high amount of tactical knowledge, giving him the advantage in any situation he can come across for the most part. Which leads into my question... How in the bloody blazing fires of hell can anyone over power this guy or out finesse 'em enough for a challenge? (I mean you have kinda set him on a pedestal and said "No Touchies.") but I always did like it when someone creates the giant then only later show his fall.

I am saying that now you have me trapped into reading this if only to see if your champion shall fall into the fire or stand tall. (lol tall and fall rhyme I am so awesome I need my own parade but that is after I take over the world.) "FIRETRUCK" WEE-O-WOOP

LONG COMMENT IS LONG.

Cliffhanger!!!!!

fuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu-

FUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU

WHY THE CLIFFHANGER

why u stop there suspense

WHAT'D HE SAY!!! WHAT'D HE SAY!?! DAMN YOU CLIFFHANGER!!!!

I think he is either color blind or blind himself.

why?  Why do you give me this

Cliffhanger?

FUUUUUUUUUuuuuuuuu!

Attention everyone who just read chapter 7, you've been trolled.

but in all honesty, I just wanted to end it there since it's like 11:50 at night, and I wanted to get atleast 10 minutes in to reading Griffin before off to bed.

>>729079729079 Cian?

Next thing you know, Aoi is able to do a Getsuga Tenshou and walk on air.

He's nearsighted.

can't see well from a distance yup ^

>>729831729831

But if that were the case, he wouldn't have used a bow and arrow initially anyway.

Also,

"I came here from a world where diamond dogs, dragons, or griffin's existed." <----- I'm assuming you meant never existed. I noticed a few other things, but that one stood out the most.  

Great chapter either way though. Yup, there is one more wolf out in the world (at least until someone makes a magic wolf). Potential meet-up perhaps. Anyway its nice to see Eol is capable to kick some ass. Can't wait to see what is wrong with Eol and the GGG.

>>730454730454

Thanks for spotting that, sometimes I forget to look over things.

I don't have a pre reader yet.

>>730460730460 I will be a pre-reader if you want one!

>>731068731068

1) Can you check fimfiction at coles to 12:00 midnight (if need be?)

2) Are you a fast reader?

3) Are you good at spotting grammar mistakes?

>>731314731314 Yes, yes, and more often than not, yes I you have some other way to contact you, that would help too

>>731336731336

Alright... consider yourself my pre-reader.

>>728595728595

agent 47 is the main character of the Hitman video game series, and now that someone pointed that out, i see it too xD

all the deadly skills, the stealth of a wolf, all Aoi needs now is a barcode tattoo on the back of his neck and a tux

>>732000732000

Just got off the Hitman wiki, and I gotta say:

1) Aoi's not a clone

2) Aoi only did jobs he 'liked'

3) Aoi did not have a pet bunny

4) Aoi's first kill did not involve drowning anyone in a bathroom stall.

5) Yes he is trained, but more often than not used a self forged katana and/or any semiautomatic pistol. Now he uses bows for long range, but in no way is he on par with someone like Robin hood on terms of his skill with it.

6) Never was admitted into an asylum

7) NEVER shot up a whole bunch of nuns.

Unless you meant for it to be a joke, in that case I'm one of those socially inept to figure it out. YES! I am a stick in the mud when It comes to sarcasm.

This is very nice story. Third best out of the chessboard stories i have read (only Griffin and Echo above which should feel almost obvious)

And am i wrong or was the reference to a dragon slaying wolf mentionen in Echos story but shrugged away?

Either way this is awesome.

>>732176732176

Thank you, and yes, Pie IS good for you

"arm into a guard ad he pivots" either its as or and. I guess its mean to be as

EVIL SPELLING CORRECTION HAS ARRIVED.

I has won the battle for finding spelling errors.

Random quote of the comment( not done by me)

Why take over your enemy using magic or biochemical when simply blowing them to the consistency of strawberry pudding was so much faster?

>>732241732241

keyboard is awkward, sometimes makes me type d instead of s and s instead of d.

You authors and your damnable cliffhangers

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>>732498732498

*Publishes Chapter 7x*

Ahem, You were saying?

OH. This just seems perfect to read before i go to bed.

And that was an interesting reason for his *Sight issues* Why do i have this weird Urge to do capital letters Every now and then? It annoyes Even me.

Anyway back to The real point. A nice way to explain it. I will wait for more.

>>732635732635

HOW DO PEOPLE READ THIS THAT FAST!!!

>>732648732648 I've read the last two books in the Inheritance Cycle in under twenty hours each, and that was with taking 15 minute breaks whenever I felt like it and sleeping for three hours. It shouldn't be surprising that people read this chapter that fast.

>>732733732733

So it depends on the airspeed velocity of an unladen swallow... interesting...

Very good POV change.

>>732795732795

African, European, or Equestrian?

>>732648732648

Easy.

We all take lessons from pinkie.

ooh that vision is as much a blessing as a curse, sweet

Sorry I couldnt edit it in time for you, GDocs doesn't work for iPod and I wasn't able to get to a computer just yet, if you still want, I will be able to edit in about 10 minutes and you can re-upload it...

>>733108733108

great!

edit: can't talk much, writing next chapter. BLAHAHAHAHHAH!

Hey once i get my story up and running our characters should meet.

One thing about mine he doesnt kill a dragon!