In this story a new threat has risen from beyond Equestria. Celestia must take cautious actions to protect her beloved village of Ponyville.
Hey man, don't be so hard on yourself. There were a lot of grammer mistakes, but those can be fixed if you just take the time to go over them. I know that the story doesn't look like it could amount to much, but hey! Don't give up! The first chapter could have been better, but it doesn't matter. Do some brainstorming, come up with some fresh ideas, and get back to wrighting.
Heck, I could even help you with getting the ideas flowing. Don't follow any of the guidlines. Go crazy!
Make it interesting! Any-who, my ideology is to either take it down, or put more up. (psst, I recomend the latter. )
Get this thing going again for ol, times sake. Oh, and if I could help you brainstorm, don't hesitate to ask.
Is it just me, or have you changed the stories status from ''canceled'' to ''incomplete'' ?