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There are many questions in the world, there are many answers. Even something as integral as who you are is a question, with more possible answers than there are stars in the sky. Sometimes you just have to take a moment and think on it.

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Fascinating. Great idea. I'm totally watching this.

I can't wait to see your take on Rainbow Dash. There are (in my opinion) two very different ways to go with her, and I'm interested in which you choose.

A few mechanical errors here and there, but overall good. I relate to Twilight easily.:twilightsmile:

Dewey decimal system.
I hope you'll continue beyond just the mane six, I'd love to hear more about Celestia's fake-life. Or Spike's crisis.

Making sure I keep up with this story, can't wait to see Pinkie go through an existential crisis.

733024I relate to her as well .Let me say something
that I would never say to ANYONE .Mostly because I am
A rather timid bookworm... Brohoof ?/) Anyone ?No ...
Sigh forget I asked .No one understand me ...Oh well
no time for self-pity I have a lot of books to read
Darn it I forgot to plan my schedule !CLOCK IS TICKING!!!!!
:pinkiecrazy:

I am me... what a nice way to see yourself. :twilightsmile:
looking forward to more chapters

You hooked me on the picture alone. Now I have an immage of an overly buff Spike with rainbow colored scales (the ones on his back) and a rainbow colored tail flying around saying he's the new Rainbow Dash. :rainbowhuh:....:rainbowderp:...:rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh:

Might be a personal preference, especially since no one else has pointed this out, but I think the story could use less commas and more fullstops.
"Now I looked at the room, carved from the inside of an ancient living tree, it would be around longer than me too, it seemed to hardly take notice, of course it was a tree and couldn't think anyway, but if it could it would probably be rather ticked at the fact that it had a bunch of creatures moving in and out of it all day"
being one of the more unpleasant passages to read for me even though the content itself is fairly interesting.

I found Celestia's way of reasoning about her subjects as "unimportant" when compared to herself (even as a mere thought experiment) a little out of character, but then again, this has been written by her long before she met Twilight and perhaps she has gotten "softer" over the centuries.

Though it has only been a tiny glimpse, I liked your presentation of Twilight's and Spike's realtionship

Also, I have to confess that I've actually learned something. Though I can't tell whether that's proof of your wisdom or of my ignorance :twilightsmile:

736584 Celestia's reasoning was for an individual, as a race they would still matter but individuals would be insignificant. Although I am implying that the experiment softened her a bit.

It's Alive, It's Alive; and were I'm very thankful it is. If you continue, I would be most appreciative.
Ciao darling :raritywink:

2197365 Sorry about taking so long, I kinda forgot about this one.

This is an interesting story and I'm really liking it so far! Good luck with the next chapter.

2660229 I'm gonna be honest, Dash is actually the one I'm having the most trouble with.

Jesus. I'm going to have to update my ninja hunting skillz. They're chopping onions in my house somewhere.

Man...

That's bloody deep, mate...

Now I looked at the room, carved from the inside of an ancient living tree. It would be around longer than me too, it seemed to hardly take notice.

This becomes mildly humorous after the season 4 finale.

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