It's been a very long time since I read something this cute. I had a smile on my face the entire time reading it, and it's still there as I type this. It was very well presented, with next to no real errors. Sure, there was grammar error and an odd phrase I found here and there, but besides those it was incredibly good. I'm honestly really happy I took the time to read this.

It was strange, but sweet

>>783393783393 Odd sentences... likely because my U key fell off halfway through...  and I am now attempting to learn to type with this strange dot...

So much D'AWWWW!

I would not be surprised if this got featured.

>>783418783418 I would be pissed if another story got featured while I was asleep.    And thank you, that means a lot.

hrmmm....i think ive seen this somwhere before : /

I love that picture, and all the others Omny did on the subject. It's a wonderful inverse Macinpants. Sweet and beautiful. Love it.

D'aww. Could use a little brushing up, yes, but it works well and it's cute throughout. Although... isn't Smarty Pants a donkey? Meh, maybe she's half-donkey.

Wow that was amazing!

Before anyone says this needs a sequel, I will say here and now, this feels a lot nicer as a one-shot. It's nice a cutesy.

A favorite and a like from me good sir/ma'am. I wouldn't be surprised if this made it to the featured box.

That was one of the sweetest things I've read in a long time, and definitely deserving of the featured box.

This was a cute story! Its sad though knowing that she still doesn't have real friends though Now I really want to know more about this Smarty Pants and what happens next

that was awesome!

You know, when I first saw the photograph you used as the cover image, I always assumed she was a mule. Huh, still very d'aaawwww inducing!

Aww that's adorable.  Nice little feel good story.  I've noticed though that your stories seem to have a similar pattern where the main character is usually a depressed victim who finds happiness in the end.  It's not a bad thing, since you write it so well, just an observation.

cute things. cute story. deffantely wouth a shot in eqd. good job

I can see this being continued - Smarty being inspired by her little world to make some friends of her own, talking to her dolls and imagining they're giving her advice. I don't feel it'd be as good as a one-shot: right now, Smarty is shutting out the "real" world, which wouldn't make for a terribly happy ending.

Now what would be ADORABLE is her and a friend playing out one of the episodes with the dolls, occasionally debating which pony should do what.

Wherever you end up taking this (if anywhere), this is nice work.

I like how Big Mac seems to be more important than all the other dolls.

(If you don't get it watch S2 E3)

Inclined to agree this might be best remaining a one-shot. However...it would make a very interesting tomato in the mirror story for it turn out that Smarty Pants actually does create Twilight's universe.

>>783642783642 She always looked like a pony to me in any picture of her being brought to life outside of this one, although this one was the best so I just used it.

Cute and it must be featured. You made me

SMILE SMILE SMILE!! YES YOU DID!!

Please leave.

Okay.

This was adorable and also tearjerker potential

Did you draw the picture, or did you just find it online? Anyways the story is adorable!

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Maybe her foalsitter could be a red-haired alicorn

Aww, that's totallly cute and creative! It's a funny way to think about MLP as a whole, and I like what you did with it~! Lovely overall!

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Nice

you should make this into a series it would be awesome to see how smarty pants learns about friendship through twilight and her friends

And thats how Equestria was made! =D

Awwwww that was one of the sweetest stories I've read in a long time! Also love it because it describes how I imagine my cutie mark would look! (I make soft toys too!)

I see much room for expansion. Don't you?

Already, I can see the foundations, the turmoil, anguish, hope and triumph.

Could you perhaps continue this? I have several ideas on how it could go.

I cried when she talked about Big Mac..

Damn that was cute

This is the sweetest story I've ever read on this site; all. Want is more. Good job!