Rainbow Dash is a happy Pegasus living in Ponyville but there is something bothering her and it has been for a while now and there is now way she can forget about it. she turns to her friends for help but they think she is crazy and just to forget about it but... she can't
Rainbow Dash becomes obsessed with her problem and then it happend and she falls to the floor gasping for air...It has come for her and there is only one way it can be stopped but her time is drawing close!
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Next Chapter Will be here soon! Hopefully you guys like this because you know this is my first fic and i don't like it when people are like "THIS SUCKS! " and stuff so please don't be rude this is my first fic so just try to enjoy this! THANK YOU EVERYPONY AND NEXT CHAPTER EXPECT SOON!
hmmm (takes out his wallet and put all cash and credit card on counter) "i betting on slendermane."
Very nice! That image from "Goliath The Soothsayer" Ominous Back ground...
718885*Places $75 on the counter* Same here.
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*Places 1$ on the table.* I bet to this as well.
Adding Fav, I'll start it tomorrow, my bet is on Slender Mane.
Could use a bit more care when checking for spelling and punctuation
, but overall, looks great. Had to laugh at the "NOT THOSE KINDS OF DREAMS!!!" part. 
Great work anyhow!
This was a really short chapter guys! sorry! but i promise that the next one will be a lot better! i am getting lazy!