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Stonershy

Joined December 2011
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losing a hundred million seeds to a sentient pony

Stories (1)

  • Her Weight in Affection
    While adapting to life after being banished from Equestria, Chrysalis learns that not everyone shuns her for her villainy.

    12,137 words · 20,102 views · 1,679 likes · 37 dislikes

Blog Posts (11)


Is it better to be respected, or admired?

This question has always troubled Chrysalis, and being banished from Equestria has not made it any less of a pressing issue for the queen of the changelings. Cut off from her armies and alienated in a strange land, she adapts and blends in to survive. For a master of deception, this is no difficult feat, but despite her success in the business world, her new life is unfulfilling. She is almost always hungry, because the creatures she has found herself stranded with are much less generous with their love.

More than anything, she longs to be her true self, and to be adored for the regal being she truly is. Of course, she knows that no one could ever love a changeling.

Or could they?

--This is a story in which I demonstrate how I do not know what the phrase short-fic really means.--

First Published
5th Jul 2012
Last Modified
5th Jul 2012

Comments ( 313 )

#1 · 107w, 19h ago · 2 · 1 ·

Oh my god. That.Was.Amazing! Brilliant! Flawless execution, perfect pacing, not a single grammar/spelling mistake! I loved this story to TEARS! *ahem* That's one lucky human.

Concept/Originality - 5/5 Big Mac's

:eeyup::eeyup::eeyup::eeyup::eeyup:

Spelling/Grammar - 5/5 Big Mac's

:eeyup::eeyup::eeyup::eeyup::eeyup:

Execution/Pacing - 5/5 Big Mac's

:eeyup::eeyup::eeyup::eeyup::eeyup:

Overall Rating - 5/5 Big Mac's

:eeyup::eeyup::eeyup::eeyup::eeyup:

Seriously, that was beautiful. Now I want a sequel! NAO! Don't even care that it was PonyxHuman, it was beautifully carried out. Can I hug you? You *almost* brought me to tears when it ended. Don't feel bad, I barely even cried when I read My Little Dashie. This is the first story I've ever given a perfect score to. And by perfect score, I mean that the story could not have been executed better than what it is now.

Liked, Favorited, Watching. Fantastic!

#2 · 107w, 17h ago · · ·

Dat bug-queen ass. c:

#3 · 107w, 17h ago · · ·

That was awesome!

#4 · 107w, 17h ago · · ·

pretty well written story despite the seemly insane plot at first glace

#5 · 107w, 17h ago · · ·

“I infiltrated Canterlot and hid right under Celestia’s nose. I can get back into shape.”

Were it so easy. :ajbemused:

Interesting story, and actually rather believable (unlike so many other "villain finds redemption" stories where the Heel-Face Turn is a rocket-powered Ollie 180). Thumbs up!

#6 · 107w, 15h ago · · ·

I have to say, this is a simply fantastic fic!

I am honestly amazed.

I have to congratulate you on this, for this passes all normal bounds of epic-ness, and you have won the internet several times over now.

Have 20 moustaches. You've earned them.

:moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache:

:moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache:

:moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache:

:moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache:

#7 · 107w, 15h ago · 1 · ·

This better get a goddamn feature.

#8 · 107w, 14h ago · 1 · ·

The sweet and charming tale of how Bug Queen's life was saved by bronies.

:heart:

Also she gets fat.

:heart::heart:

#9 · 107w, 14h ago · · ·

>>863280

Goddamnit Pacce.

GODDAMNIT PACCE.

>>863090

That would be pretty cool~

>>863083

Oh, thank you! I think I'll make a ghillie suit out of these mustaches.

>>862623

It's not even a story about redemption! It's a story about how she adapts to survive!

>>862589

Making good stories out of bad ideas seems to be my super-power.

>>862577

Thanks!

>>862561

Aw yiss~

>>862177

Oh wow! Sooooo many Big Macs! I owe a lot of the cleanliness to the folks that helped me edit and iron it out. I have a lot of other projects I need to work on, but I might come back to this at some point. Thank you very much for reading, and I'm glad you enjoyed it so much!

#10 · 107w, 14h ago · · ·

>>863337

well to fair and to copy a great line i once heard

"i don't think theres ever any bad ideas just bad execution of ideas"

you certainly avoided the later

#11 · 107w, 14h ago · · ·

Damn, I'm very impressed. You captured the queen's personality, and did the whole 'fall in love even though I feed on it' in the best manner I've yet read. Bravo good author. Bravo.

#12 · 107w, 13h ago · · ·

12,000 words /is/ short.

#13 · 107w, 13h ago · · ·

Damn, Stonershy.  This was amazing.

#14 · 107w, 11h ago · · ·

What the....

#15 · 107w, 11h ago · · ·

AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA

#16 · 107w, 11h ago · · ·

>>862177

This is the first "FIRST" post I've ever liked. Thank you.

And as for the fic... Queen Cheeselegs ;_;. I would so give her all my love. And you captured that, and it's not yet another HiE or magically transported crappy fic that's only good for hating, and she is herself, and the fact MLP is a cartoon in the human world did not make me retch. I love it ♥

#17 · 107w, 11h ago · · ·

Fat queen!!!:rainbowlaugh:

#18 · 107w, 11h ago · · ·

>>864303

Put that in your tabloids!

>>864292

I'm glad to hear my careful handling of the subjects has paid off. I wasn't trying to do something meme based, or super meta. I wanted to put Chrysalis in an environment where she is forced to operate outside of her comfort zone, only to find that she is admired for being a bitch. It was a lot of fun to write~

>>864151

AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA

wait did you like it

>>864128

Good heavens!

>>863687

Thaaaanks :3c

>>863637

I thought four digits was short.

>>863444

Eeeee thank you! It was tricky to get it right, but I'm glad it paid off.

>>863443

There are definitely bad ideas :P

#19 · 107w, 11h ago · · ·

This. :raritystarry:

Just this... just... :pinkiehappy:

#20 · 107w, 11h ago · · ·

>>864353

Well okay then :3

#21 · 107w, 11h ago · · ·

>>863637

No, short is 2k words, when they tell you to write a technical article, which is not allowed to refer to about anything ("level: Introductory"), and then they actually expand acronyms like HTML. I mean seriously, the pay was great, I wrote about what I knew and liked, but trying to fit into the allotment was like Chrysalis trying to fit into her disguise. On the other hand, editors! They are ruthless, they will get you under the word limit, and they are the best thing that can happen to your writing.

#22 · 107w, 11h ago · · ·

I here this is PonyxHuman, yet original. I'll see about that.:moustache:

#23 · 107w, 10h ago · 1 · ·

>>864381

You would not believe how fun it is toEditors just really like to go through a stack of papers and cross out tons of eliminate needless words.

#24 · 107w, 10h ago · · ·

I squealed like a little girl after reading this.:rainbowkiss:

#25 · 107w, 10h ago · · ·

I... I think I *squeed* a couple times there. :rainbowkiss::twilightsmile:

#26 · 107w, 10h ago · · ·

Interesting take on changeling love-feeding.

I feel as though the romance was rather well done, though I am a big fan on the 'life story in a few pages" style fics.

That being said, made my night.

Nice to see a one-shot make the feature box for once, I don't like waiting weeks for fics to update.

/hypocrite

#27 · 107w, 9h ago · · ·

I love love loved it!~ :heart: One of the best fanfics I have ever read. It was so beautiful.... Give me a sec...  :raritycry: Ok I'm done, but srsly dude, that was awesome.:pinkiehappy::derpytongue2:

#28 · 107w, 9h ago · · ·

Damn, I just- Shit man.

Is there anything you can't write?

You know what? I'm issuing you a set of challenges, here and now.

Steve Irwin and Fluttershy meet after a Timey Wimey-Spacey Wacey explosion in Doctor Whooves lab.

Sweetie Belle meets Aretha Franklin

Reports of shark attacks in Ramity Island forces Police Chief Goaty to get help from two very different ponies. Harpoon, who wants to kill the shark stone dead, and Fluttershy, an animal expert called in to identify markings on a corpse.

#29 · 107w, 9h ago · · ·

A well deserved well done to you, Stonershy. Great story!

#30 · 107w, 9h ago · · ·

SEQUEL!:pinkiehappy:

#31 · 107w, 9h ago · · ·

>>864358 I am quite surprised to say this, but I liked it. I liked it a lot. I was well written, original, and most importantly, didn't set off my Celestia damned proof-reader's mind. The last one, very hard to do. You have earned the Fluttershy of Approval.

#32 · 107w, 8h ago · · ·

Oh, andStonershy, veddy nice work indeed. I despise any thoughts of humanity in fics, but for something as well executed as this, I'll let it pass. Adorable artwork on the cover there, too.

>>864862 Sweetie Belle meets Aretha Franklin? Do you hear the angels lauding this idea? I sure do!

#33 · 107w, 8h ago · · ·

>>864973

Hell yeah!

#34 · 107w, 8h ago · · ·

Look at all these comments telling you that you're amazing. I sure wish someone would tell you that you're not. But then they'd be lying, because to find something wrong with this story is as scientifically impossible as licking your own forehead. I do like the revised ending, it flows a lot better than before.

#35 · 107w, 8h ago · · ·

There are no words to describe this.  There is only one single, solitary image.

Good on ya, pardner. :ajsmug: :twilightsmile: :rainbowkiss:

#36 · 107w, 7h ago · · ·

Fantastic work good sir.

#37 · 107w, 7h ago · · ·

After 12 years in development, hopefully it was worth the weight.

#38 · 107w, 7h ago · · ·

ERMAHGERD.

I loved every minute of this. I want to draw Chrysalis working out now. Also, Chrysalis with a pony-tail. Also, Chrysalis with a food-baby. Also, Chrysalis making out with a human girl. Also, Chrysalis as a human, yelling at interns.

#39 · 107w, 7h ago · · ·

An MLP-meets-human-world story that I didn't immediately hate? IS NOT POSSIBLE.

This premise had every chance to go horribly wrong. But this fic actually works! I enjoyed it thoroughly. :twilightsmile:

#40 · 107w, 6h ago · · ·

Well done indeed. It is almost too bad that there isnt a meme of Chrysalis on a tredmill.:rainbowlaugh:

#41 · 107w, 6h ago · · ·

Amazing story!

Gaz
#42 · 107w, 6h ago · · ·

HOLY BALLS this is awesome.

I never really thought that human x bug pone would work (well, for me at least)... but goddamn this one is good.

#43 · 107w, 5h ago · · ·

140+likes and 0 dislikes!

I JINXED IT

HAHHAHHA (No i'm not the 1st disliker)

#44 · 107w, 5h ago · · ·

A grand job was done here. The Principality of Zeon approves.

#45 · 107w, 5h ago · · ·

"filet minion"

If that's an intentional pun, then you win everything.

#46 · 107w, 4h ago · · ·

Okay that was just beautiful. I loved the way it ended. Absolutely. Made me feel warm and fuzzy, y'know? Thank you, kind author, for bringing this wonderful piece of awesome to the community. I applaud you. Now where oh where did I put that watch button...?

#47 · 107w, 4h ago · · ·

Fucking beautiful!

#48 · 107w, 4h ago · · ·

and not a single dislike was given that day....:twilightsmile:

#49 · 107w, 4h ago · · ·

I wonder if chrysalis is ever going to find where Trixie went off to?

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