Hearth's Warming Eve In Canterlot

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Rainbow Dash and Rarity spend Hearth's Warming Eve in Canterlot shopping for gifts. As the night goes on, spirits are high and one pony's dream even comes true.

Edited by Vertigo-01

Artwork by Jowybean

Audio Reading by TyriusTheVA

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The Fetish Unicorn

The Fetish Unicorn #1 · Dec 25th, 2015 · 1 · ·

An adorable and wonderfully written romance story. I love how well the sentences flow and the vocabulary used throughout. It was noticeable for me since other stories do not really use vocabulary in their proper places. Although that might be just my opinion, I still just wanted to point that out.

This story has also given me another way of writing romance stories in general. Again, adorable read.

Nightmare mare

Nightmare mare #2 · Dec 26th, 2015 · 1 · ·

This was an adorable story. I never really read a RARITYxRAINBOW fan fic before.

Great job

Arcelia

Arcelia #3 · Dec 26th, 2015 · · ·

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Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed it. However, should probably thank my editor for all the hard work he put in over the holiday season to get this polished off for me. But I am still glad l that you found a new light of inspiration too.

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Really? I thought there were more of them. Thanks anyway, I'm glad you liked it.

Nightmare mare

Nightmare mare #4 · Dec 26th, 2015 · · ·

6767400 I have read more RAINBOWxTWILIGHT fan fics

Arcelia

Arcelia #5 · Dec 26th, 2015 · · ·

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So it would seem that I have chosen a rather unusual pairing.

Nightmare mare

Nightmare mare #6 · Dec 26th, 2015 · · ·

6767593 that is true

Snow Shield

Snow Shield #7 · Dec 28th, 2015 · · ·

Really sweet story. Definitely captures the mood of Hearth's Warming. Nice picture, by the way!

Arcelia

Arcelia #8 · Dec 29th, 2015 · · ·

6776093 Thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Awesomo3000

Awesomo3000 #9 · Dec 30th, 2015 · · ·

Since when is Coco "light brown"? But cute story.

Arcelia

Arcelia #10 · Dec 30th, 2015 · · ·

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Thanks and could you please specify which part of the text described Coco Pommel as being 'light brown.'

Awesomo3000

Awesomo3000 #11 · Dec 30th, 2015 · · ·

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The twinkling chime of a bell sounded overhead as the two were approached by a familiar mare, a light brown pony whose warm, cyan eyes met Rarity’s with a sincere smile. “Rarity, Rainbow Dash, it’s so nice to see you both again,” the mare said in a gentle voice.

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