and now: write chapter 2 :D

or, even better: write instead chapter 6 of "much ahoof about nothing"

Midnight Castle, eh?

Butterscotch Sundae as author... hmmm...

Ok, there will be at least one 3-some between Twilight, Trixie, and Tirek.  

So this finally makes it onto fimfiction as well

Such an amazing work of forced romance by Butterscotch Sundae.

yes...

when will chapter 2 come?

I read this a long time ago and never saw chapter 2...  

Cast Down - Slayer

Happy International Day Of Slayer! FUCKIN' SLAYER!

AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW

YEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH

dat ass on the pic, dat ass

You have absolutely no idea how much I loved this on DeviantART. Now I guess I can always find it here. Thank you kindly Miss Butterscotch. Happy writing.

Clopfic. I stopped at the toe-kissing.

Hmm, I'd say Twilight was succumbing to stockholm sindrome but she seems to have some plan and is just to kind to smother Trixie in her sleep. I'd like to see where this goes, please continue.

>>705807705807

Enchanted robe.  Too weak to activate the collar, but strong enough to affect her brain.

Sounds interesting. I'll have to give it a good read when I get the chance

Okay this is getting really akward but I can't stop reading it.

Also please don't tell me Trixie did 'The Unspeakable' with Twilight because it sounds like she did.

Butterscotch you dirty mare.

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I had no idea you were on Fimfiction. I feel stupid now.

Tracked. Liked. Continue.

And Twilight has a submissive streak...

Ten bits says this ends with Twilight ending up in a romantic relationship with Trixie.

...and then it became porn...

MORE NOW

anyway keep it up

I smell a clopfic coming up I think

>>706058706058

by jove that's brilliant! I'd seriously not considered that.

>>705624705624

Threesome with Tirek? I hadn't even considered that... Butters! You know what you must do!

I remember this story

And I hope to see an update soon, it's very intriguing

Wow, this was amazing! Oh, I so hope this doesn't end here!

>>707835707835  Butters:  Awww, shucks, do I have to?  It always chafes so much.  

i had to stop reading to say this but

twilight just did the base ingredient of heroine!

or was it meth well i know its morpheme or makes it or something of the sorts

DON'T JUDGE ME I WOKE UP AT 8 AM AND ITS 2 AM NOW

I wish for updates :C

Good read.  I cant wait to see where this goes.

Awesome story so far. Can't wait to read more. And where else have you people read this before? Equestria Daily doesn't take mature fics. At least the rules say they don't. Have they changed the rules or was that just for show?

Also, I can't be the only one who thought of this, can I? Come on, people. Don't you know good rock when you hear it?

CHapter 2 NOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

And this is rated teen????

awesome story can't wait for part 2

I've been waiting for the second part since 1 year ago.....

Man... I went searching for this fic only to find it's never been updated. Sad day.

I would still like to see more of this.

MAKE CHAPTER 2