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Help! My Best Friend's A Mare!
Noteworthy's best friend Caramel comes back from his trip just a bit changed.
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Her Latest Creation
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Rainbow Dreamin'
What kinds of things do we tell ourselves in the crooked confines of sleep?
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Fluttershy In Efrafa
When Angel disappears, Twilight turns herself and Fluttershy into rabbits to investigate.
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That Blue Pony's Story
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For the Love of It
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Dramatic Irony
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All I Ever Wanted
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A Message of A Terrible Affliction Know As Writer's Block
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Help! My Best Friend's A Mare! by KartalTheWriter

Romance Comedy Slice of Life

Noteworthy is waiting for his friend Caramel to come back from his trip. Heâ��s met with shock when he finds out that Caramel is now a mare.

Credit goes to LuminousRabbit for the picture

First Published
31st Jul 2012

Last Modified
31st Jul 2012

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manuccia

#1 · 46w, 1d ago ·

Interesting, I would like to see where this goes.

WinterSpeed

#2 · 46w, 1d ago ·

Lol

Tornado Firehooves

#3 · 46w, 1d ago ·

Lol, I was seriously wierded out by this until the end, then it turned awesome! :pinkiehappy: Can't wait to see what happens next!

Capitola

#4 · 46w, 1d ago ·

That was really funny and I enjoyed reading it, nice job. I look forward to see what happens next.

EternalShadow54

#5 · 46w, 1d ago ·

Thou knoweth my opinion already! :pinkiecrazy: Still, great job! :pinkiehappy:

KartalTheWriter

#6 · 46w, 23h ago ·

>>10054951005495 I posted that comment on your page before I saw this. Seriously.

EternalShadow54

#7 · 46w, 23h ago ·

>>10055481005548 :rainbowlaugh:

LuminousRabbit

#8 · 46w, 23h ago ·

Awesomeee. I really want to see where this goes. Keep it up! :pinkiehappy:

KaraC

#9 · 46w, 22h ago ·

At first I was like 'this plot seems familiar somehow' :applejackunsure: . Then as I kept reading I realized 'oh, it's sort of like the Little Mermaid' :raritywink: ! But when I reached the end I realized that that probably wasn't where you were going with this :twilightsheepish: .

In other words, I'm hooked.

KartalTheWriter

#10 · 46w, 22h ago ·

>>10058371005837 Hmm, that's an interesting take on it. I can see where you'd get that idea.

Belove Weatherstorm

#11 · 46w, 21h ago ·

Surprise ending!

Suspense!

Mystery!

Keep up the good work! :twilightsmile:

-Weatherstorm

Sandalwood

#12 · 45w, 6d ago ·

this is great. the whole time i was thinking that it wasnt caramel, then i was right. loved it.

it flowed nicely for the most part, though i was a little putoff by some of the paragraph structure, you seemed to break them into way too many miniparagraphs. anyway, ill pm you with the structure and grammar stuff.

final judgement... thumbs up!

Ghostly Glow