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    Mom says that families who work really hard get to put a gold star on the inside of their windows.
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  • T Guilt and Hate

    Sequel to Envy and Arrogance.
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    Though Daring is most commonly remembered for her grand adventures in ruins, her primary subsistence is derived under the cover of darkness. Sometimes, this darkness is not as friendly to her nerves as she would like.
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    The Elements are critical to world stability. Twilight and her friends find this out the hard way.
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    All I know is nature.
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  • T Dissonance

    "And so you rise to this challenge expecting that revolution will be simple?" Obsidian snarled, his incredulity clear in his voice. "I suppose it would be, had you not spent your entire life fighting for the wrong side."
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Author of Guilt and Hate posting a new story?

BUCK YEAH!

I don't care what else this author wrote, but a fic mainly about Derpy/Ditzy? FUCK! TO! THE! YES!:flutterrage::pinkiehappy:

Just what i was expecting from my favourite author, top notch again my good sir :twilightsmile:

Yay, it's out! This is a really interesting start and a very different take on Derpy. I'm curious to see where it goes. :twilightsmile:

Leave it to Mindblower to blow your mind with a Slice of Life story.

Brb, cleaning grey matter from my computer screens.

So... Discorded Derpy meeting normal Derpy next? I'm okay with this, and please continue!

Curiouser and curiouser. Good show on the Discord exposition, btw.

More! MOARRRR!!! :flutterrage: Please? :fluttercry:

Now, I was afraid to read any of your stories due to my irrational fear of longer stories, but I'll stick with this one. There are several things I'd like to point out, but they're not too major: That’s a good approximation, I muttered to myself. You left out quotes. And, winterwort is, to my knowledge, in this context, neither someone's name, a place, title, or any other sort of proper noun, it's a simple noun, an herb. You don't go around calling pepper 'Pepper', do you?

I'm liking this so far, so please, go on. I bumped into you playing TF2 again several days ago, on an ending note.

Wow, this is really pretty good. I never should have doubted that bubble-flanked mare.:rainbowlaugh::rainbowwild::rainbowderp::rainbowdetermined2::rainbowhuh::rainbowkiss:

Good job~ Wasn't expecting such a peaceful story from the same author as Envy and Arrogance and Guilt and Hate, but it was extremely well-done, nonetheless. I like it!:yay:

Cheers! :pinkiehappy:

Discorded Derpy and Derpy set out on a journey to release the god of trolling once again? Awesome! Can I have some more please? :pinkiehappy:

This seems really funny! Please get out the new chapter in a moderate to short amount of time. Please?:pinkiehappy:

It got EQD'd. That was quick. Nice work.

That was... strange. In a good way, of course. More, please :pinkiehappy:

Ooh... Sounds fun! Can't wait for the next chapter!

Wait...I thought that Ditzy was derpies daughter.:derpyderp2::derpyderp2:

>>717677

You're thinking of Dinky. :derpytongue2:

I REQUIRE MOAR:flutterrage:

Oh my. This story's off to an impressive start. I'm really looking forward to seeing your next chapter!

Wow, this is pretty interesting.

At this point, you're keeping everything vague enough that there are plenty of questions to ask.

And hopefully Ditsica's interactions with Derpy will be funny.

I like it so far, I'll keep an eye out for updates.

Yup, still amazing. AWESOME :yay: :twilightsmile:

Noticed something. Where are your paragraphs? Those aren't optional to my knowledge. Oh wait, everything is, writers can weave the English language into any shape that pleases them. I can tell this Ditsica-Derpy combo is going to be interesting. Well, that was the selling point of this story, right? It works.

Derpy makes me d'awwwwww. :derpytongue2:

Good job! The pairing works very well so far! I look forward to more! :derpytongue2:

Hm... We need a discorded derpy pic... Wasn't that an old tumbler account? About discord giving derpy a high level of intelligence just so she could see how others treated her? And then she treated everyone else the way they had treated her? Could be wrong... Anyway! Keep up the good work!

>>726250 In professional formatting, in order to save paper, the paragraphs are scrunched up and indented and all that jazz to keep the word count per page at an optimal level. Since this is cyberspace and those economical limitations don't apply, I prefer to space my text out so that it's easier on the eyes.:moustache:

>>726382 I do find it pleasing to read non-paragraphed work, it looks neater, but I use them just for the sake of accuracy to grammatical guidelines as provided by the public school system. However, lacking paragraphs in poorly-spaced works looks butt-ugly.

Great as usual! :derpytongue2::pinkiehappy:

>>726396

You haven't read much fanfiction have you? Go look around you'll find that 9 times out of 10 that this kind of spacing is the norm.

>>726569 I never said that it wasn't the norm, or that this looks bad; I was saying that it isn't entirely correct, but since writers call the shots, it's fine. I don't care if it's the norm, the norm isn't always right.

Woot for another awesome chapter! :pinkiehappy:

Interesting. Perhaps my comprehension is failing me today, but I'm still slightly baffled as to how Ditsica came to the conclusion that Derpy should be her partner in crime. Perhaps as a scapegoat, should she need a conveniently identical-looking pony to point the hoof at? *evil laughter*

Either way, can't wait for moar!

>>727330 Twilight said the spell played on Discord is even stronger than before. It would take true hate to free him now, instead of a simple arguement. So she wants Derpy, cause she believes Derpy is a mindless idiot who she can get really really mad at, all the time, thus filling her with enough hate to release Discord.

D'aww.... Ily Derpy! <3 I like how you portrayed, well, everyone! Very well done, can't wait for the next chapter!

Twilight's mane isn't dark purple, it's blue.

Blue :twilightsmile:

Purple :raritywink:

My sides were hurting when Ditsica met Derpy! :rainbowlaugh: Keep it up!

This is shaping up to be quite the story. Keep up the good work. :pinkiehappy:

This is nothing like your usual genre...

So why is it so good?

Evil Dearpy is best dearpy:derpyderp2:

This is interesting  :twilightoops:

Wow ... just wow.  I am definately hooked on this story.  I have sooo many questions ... who created Ditsica, for what reason was she created, why does she look nearly identical to Derpy, why does she only have a day to live, is she really evil or desperate, what happens to her if she succeeds, what's the purpose of releasing Discord, is Derpy really smarter than she appears .... I just can't wait to see how this story unfolds and what the answers to these questions will do.  Great job!  Definately deserves a thumbs up and a fave from me.

Excellent. Derpy is just how I would expect Derpy to be! :derpytongue2:

This was pretty good. Still love the interactions between the look-alikes.

Oh boy, third? Cool :pinkiegasp:

In any event, I look forward to this journey. Do go on :pinkiehappy:

this. Is. Wonderful. I'm loving this Ditsy :3

Now on my "read later" list. Interesting concept, to be sure.

HOW DO YOU LIKE IT, Ditsica?

Number five is alive!

Also cool story. Very different take on Derpy vs Ditzy.

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