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JaketheGinger
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I needed a break from the normal and serious stuff I'm writing right now, so have some insanity and randomness.
If people like this enough I may add another chapter because I have plenty more crazy ideas in my mind for what Twilight could do...
Anyway, enjoy!
Good.
Stamp of Approval.
the beginning seemed a bit mechanical at first but then i remembered it was twi
Pretty good story, I look forward to more of it. And i find it pretty funny that i'm having trouble sleeping right now.
Twilight counting sheep: hilarious.
I just realized when I read this story, Twilight is the Sheldon of MLP: FIM! Hyper nerdy, hyper obsessive, obnoxiously forthright (though to a lesser degree for Twilight), and have cute little assistants, and yes, I'm talking about Spike and Leonard,
Cute story. Love that she went from the knowledgeable outsider in season 1 to becoming a crazy mad scientist in season 2.
He he he.
Ha ha ha ha ha!
"Reciting the numbers out loud quietly."
lol, and as she was knocked unconscious she fell face first onto a sewer grate which she started to sing a lullaby she heard fluttershy sing once in yet one last fleeing attempt at slumber....
did I mention that singing into the sewer grate while some of her magic leaked caused a spooky echo effect and it resonated up the drains of near by houses?
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it went a little something like this
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This was a very enjoyable read! I laughed at the poor obese sheep flailing his legs in the air after his massively failed attempt to clear the fence, and giggled at Twilight's very suggestive comment. Good job! Good job I say!
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I would love to read this but blocks of text with little to no formatting intimidate me
so in hopes of that changing it'll stay on my read later list.
initial - Oh boy, wall of text. Ok, lets go.
Post-read - Ok, that was a good read JJ, but it REALLY needs new formatting. You did very well capturing the methodicalness that is twilight and the last bit with Rainbow and AJ was quite comical. I like the random one-shot idea, always a fan of those, put remember that indents are your friend. And friendship is magic.
WALL OF TEXT! MY WORST NIGHTMARE!
Not counting that one time where I turned into a pencil. Or that time I tried to bake a cupcake. Or the time I sat down to eat Spaghetti. Or the time I.. *trails off*
One thing I love about stories like this (or at least the way I'm seeing this one) is that they don't tell how exactly the story ends. What you could have done is shown how Twilight had to explain herself, but this ending leaves the reader thinking of their own way of how the story ends, which makes it all the more fun!
I didnt even know wall of text stories could pass moderation. I would break it up, as a lot of readers dont like wall of text. It makes it waaaaaaaay too hard to read and focus.